A Kingdom Hearts Story --- After KH2!! "THE ADDICTION"

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*drops pen on ground*

o_o.........I'm the only one here..............freaky..............

 

That was brilliant!:D

I loved the ending poem thing.

out of 10 I would give the whole story 9.5
i deduct .5 because you killed off Riku.

 

Why thankyou :3
Lol but if I didn't kill him off half of the story wouldn't have happened. XD
But 9.5 is... good.. thanks (:

 

Me neither, but I was saying that Sora has hot skin while Bella has cold skin. Glad I made you happy!

 

Omg OWS thanks for writting that! I've been waiting for that so long! I'm crying! I think I finally understand the meaning of "The Addiction"! U r the best! Love you! Tht story touched me! How many compliments can I write? The answer: too many!

 

:3
aw wow thanks xD Your crying? Noo! *hugs*
Yeah, I guess at some times it was confusing as to what "the Addiction" actually meant. But heh, you worked it out in the end ~

Luv ya too! <3

 

Nice story, OWS.
Really, great poem at the end.
That was really sweet how they visited Riku's grave(? coz he's cremated) at the end.
101/5 stars.
I hope you continue to write more and more fics.
:)
ps~I figured it out too-- the story behind "The Addiction"

 

Amazing story, I started reading it today and finally finished. I really did get hooked, or should I say addicted? You are definately an amazing writer. The only critique I have is that you should have mentioned Riku's ghost or something observing them at the graveyard, but not actually saying anything, just watching...

 

Hmm.. yes, that would have been an intresting twist. But really, it was quite a struggle getting out the epilogue O.O
I can't believe that idea didn't occur to me though >.>

Thanks for reading xD

 

I actually like it better without there being a ghost. I think you did awesome the way it was and it couldn't get any better xD.

 

I hope you continue to write more and more stories and fanfics.
This was all such a great story, and I'm glad I stuck with it!
Every chapter was amazing to read.
I started to tear up a little at the epilogue.
Seriously, I felt tears in my eyes!
Very emotional, sweet, romantic, and spectacular story.