A few of my poems

I'll be okay sis, besides I'm always told I'm like him, so it's like he's always with me lol

 

I'm a bit like my dad as well, so he's with me, and my brother is a younger image of him.

 

im nothing like my dad...and i guess wecould say were family right?(oh,wait ryomas not family w/ anniexo or flower is he?)

 

i loved it! i liked it because it could make someone feel all warm and fuzzy inside it was great!

 

That's the reaction I wanted to get from people

 

Generation

Rarely do I more then three of them
Five in all, the forth I am in
Sat here being with the first, second and third
Knowing that I can be with them
Is like being with an old friend
That I have not seen in years
But will always remember

I wrote this when I went to see my great-grendad with my mum and great-aunt, and I rarely see anyone from the 1st and 2nd generation of my family

 

It's good but definatly not one of your best. The first lines are a bit confusing.

 

That was brilliant. I rarely get to see the other generations in my family. Sad really.

 

I kinda like it when I poems confuse people, and gald you think it's good

Yeah it is, but my family isn't really that close so it doesn't really borther me that much, but it's still good to see them

 

No matter

No matter if I am here
In this cold and dark world
For I know that when I find you
It will become warm and light
No matter how much this pain hurts me
I know I will always win
I will not allow my self to lose
Something so close to my heart
No matter how far it gets away from me
No matter, no matter


I got the idea fro this from Lithium sig

 

I'm guessing second or third best of all. Good job:)

 

Thanks, Axe, hey could you have a look at sora59s poem please?

 

That was great. It made me feel warm, and I'm smiling now. :)

 

Thanks sis, I knew you'd like it