A few of my poems

Darkness

As the heart gets lonely,
And the mind plays tricks,
Eating away is what the darkness does,
All omens from our past,
Come as I come and go,
Nothing can save your soul,
Not even death will save thy,
Death may come but it will not save,
Your touted soul,
And so I mush shear this same fate.

The Blue Moon Wolf

As I run in the night with only the moon as my light
My fur turns to the blue of the moon
And my eyes to the black of the night sky
Now I know this is what I really am
The Blue Moon Wolf.

Angel Demon

We both have lost our wings
But our powers remain
In this war with no winners
Now we have no choice
But to both lose this war.

Angel in Darkness

An angel in darkness who is looking for the light
This light is a powerful light called love
We will all find this light of love
That will help us out of the darkness

Moon light

The clear star lit night
And the moon shining so bright
Makes me so peaceful

Angels

Angel of Destiny of what to come
Angel of Hope of the un-despaired heart
Angel of Love of the heart of gold
Angel of Time of the sands of time
Angels of Friendship so strong

No evil can break this bond of Angels
Mortal by body Immortal by souls
The four angel will never fall


I Have more but i'l post them some other time

 

Good.

Dont talk about fight club.

 

...? Why would I want to talk about fight club all my poems are about how i feel and think about

 

i know but i had 5 words left

 

But ya could of said what you like about them

 

They make me wanna lala, in the kitchen, on the floor. Nahh, that was cheesy. But seriously, they make me want to sit in my room in the dark, listen to my iPod and think about stuff (basically, they depressed me). But very good! I like the wolf one the best :D

 

Thanks...do they all make you feel that way?

 

Actually, no. I should've been more specific. Angels and Moon light and The Blue Moon Wolf aren't depressing to me. The Blue Moon Wolf one makes me feel happy (don't ask) and Moon light makes me feel good, because it's like what I do when I feel sad, like I said in my above post, I just listen to music and look out my bedroom window in darkness at the stars and moon and it soothes me :o You are very good at writing poems. I wish I could do them :(

 

They're nice... The Angel in Darkness one reminded me of Riku.

 

Thanks oh and so you know all my poems take about 5-10 minuets to write

 

Lol... I used to write poems, but then I got scared my sisters would make fun of me for it, so I stopped. O.O

 

I don't really care if people dis my writing as long as I like them that's all that matters to me

 

Yeah... But, now I regret throwing all of them out, 'cause some of them were pretty good. :/

 

I'm sure you can write more good ones

 

Wierd poem

Okay i just done this is class when i should of been doing IT oh well enjoy

A mixed up mind
Always within light and dark
Twilight fantasy
Light of a child
Dark of a child


A mind made up
Running away from what is real
But never in fantasy
This is who I see myself

 

I HAVE A QUESTION. WHATS THIS POEM ABOUT???

 

Me and my fantasies

 

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh. I Know That!. Now...

 

Okay but do you like my new poem?

 

Its kinda vague...But i can see its got potential if you work on it some more.