Some more of my random failing -__- *subjects you to it* ***** Frozen rivers running deep and blue They flow like a path, leading me straight to you Snow falls gently and covers the trees There is a scent of magic lingering in the breeze The air so cold and the night so still I close my eyes and remember our last dance Our last kiss, Our last chance It wasn't far from here, when I heard that song play It remains in my memory with each passing day But you left with the winter, defeated by spring And my dreams melted with the snow But that was all so long ago Maybe this year will be the year I find you again A momentary heart beat, a fleeting pause I open my eyes and look around Fresh fallen snow covers the ground And finally I know that you wont ever come back I open my arms and look upto the sky I dance by myself trying not to cry I lie down on the ground and remember that day I wanted forever to be that way Rivers run slower and all grows cold I faintly hear that music and I long to sing And think of the memories it used to bring Now there is nothing, only the cold The cold and the night I will lie here and dream until maybe one day You will come back and we can dance away It all grows quiet and I think of your voice the words you told me, and the way you held me If I think harder I can still remember your touch Still remember your kiss I still remember everything But now I will just wait To melt away with the snow And leave with the coming of the Spring
ZOMG CtR!! You didn't subject us to it! We wanted to read it! All your poems are amazing. I could really relate to a lot of what you're saying. It's really great poetry. *clappies*
You told me this one would suck, but you lied. It's really great. I titally loved it because I could imagine the whole thing. You're so good at poetry ^_^
Wow, this is some great stuff. Man, wat do u get in English class. An A? (I'd be pretty surprised if u didn't. This is an A++ work here)
*hugs* thanks :glomp: ^^ thanking you :) I am glad that it did that ^^ also I didnt lie! I honestly did think it sucked -__- :) I don't do English anymore ^^ so thank you! I am glad I havnt lost my use of the language :)
Once again, your choice of words are excellent and you keep a steady pace through the whole thing. Creative and imaginitave. I would not call this "random failing", more like "expressive work" that came out wonderfully. What kind of title would you call this? XD Keep up the writting. ^^
>_> titles are my downfall xDDD I can never find the right one that fits (which is why none of them have titles except for I think 2) Thank you for the compliment ^^ and of course I will keep writing xD it's an addiction almost :) n.n Thank you :)
