Roses Are Sweet|愛 Blood is Bitter|愛 The Death Stains Stay|愛 The Petals Fly Free|愛 You Breath Life Into Me|愛 You Are My Flower|愛 I Am A Monster|愛 But, You stay here|愛 By My Side|愛 This Self Loving Carnage Doesn't Deserve|愛 To Be In Your Life|愛 Or To See Your Smile|愛 This is the second of my fresh attempts at poetry, I'm not a great poet. I'll admit right now that I struggle to come up with the words nine times out of ten and I'm extremely critical of my own work. I once spent three hours on a drawing only to see it was a little off and I screwed it up instantly. And I believe it's easy to make poetry tacky and then I get extremely p*ssed at myself and I give up for the next month or so... I only write when A) I'm extremely bored or B) When Dmaster bugs me to a point where I just write to make him stfu 8D Yeah, I have a thing about writing about slightly pyschotic relationships even though I've never been in one O_o Yeah, don't ask about the recurring 'Ai' symbol. Truth be told I just think it's pretty <_< >_> I'd like to know what you guys honestly think
I think I just fell in love with your poetry. Not only did the flow run nice and smooth, but the "love" kanji gave that nice look to it as well. Gave a vintage kind of vibe to it. Nonetheless, great poem. Can't wait to read what'll come up next. Might I add, this poem reminds me so much of Higurashi no Naku Koro ni.