愛| Self Loving Carnage

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Near-to-Tears, Aug 2, 2008.

  1. Near-to-Tears Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Roses Are Sweet|愛
    Blood is Bitter|愛
    The Death Stains Stay|愛
    The Petals Fly Free|愛
    You Breath Life Into Me|愛
    You Are My Flower|愛
    I Am A Monster|愛
    But, You stay here|愛
    By My Side|愛
    This Self Loving Carnage Doesn't Deserve|愛
    To Be In Your Life|愛
    Or To See Your Smile|愛


    This is the second of my fresh attempts at poetry, I'm not a great poet. I'll admit right now that I struggle to come up with the words nine times out of ten and I'm extremely critical of my own work. I once spent three hours on a drawing only to see it was a little off and I screwed it up instantly. And I believe it's easy to make poetry tacky and then I get extremely p*ssed at myself and I give up for the next month or so... I only write when A) I'm extremely bored or B) When Dmaster bugs me to a point where I just write to make him stfu 8D

    Yeah, I have a thing about writing about slightly pyschotic relationships even though I've never been in one O_o

    Yeah, don't ask about the recurring 'Ai' symbol. Truth be told I just think it's pretty <_< >_>

    I'd like to know what you guys honestly think
     
  2. Pistol Schoolboy Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I think I just fell in love with your poetry. Not only did the flow run nice and smooth, but the "love" kanji gave that nice look to it as well. Gave a vintage kind of vibe to it.

    Nonetheless, great poem. Can't wait to read what'll come up next.

    Might I add, this poem reminds me so much of Higurashi no Naku Koro ni.