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This is a little cray cray, but congrats guys. I call hysteria. ​

Because that's true, Misty already has a permanent role in the plot / VN.

Misty is also a great help and a guide for the KHV Trivia mini-game.

For future reference, let me make a list of who is already automatically in the VN as someone important in some-way-shape-or-form.

Misty & RvR: Admins are ever-present always. Usually keeping watch out at Staff HQ. Misty is also most likely the member who will run both meetings mentioned in the plot. We encounter both RvR and Misty on our visit to Staff HQ.

Amaury: Amaury is key for the trivia game. He'll give you special facts not just about that, but random facts that help you navigate through KHV, get more premium points, etc.

What?: He gets his own musical number. He's the reason our OC joins the site. He sings about how great KHV is and leads her to the registration office.

Tie/Owner: He makes the 'NO MORE KHV, TNX' announcement.

Plums and I go through it at the end and uniform everything.

This is all written in the plot and notes and stuff. No, she doesn't get a totally happy ending.

It's fine that she doesn't get the guy. And the guy breaking up with his girlfriend isn't really perfect. Just leaves room for a potentially happy ending, if she musters up any courage to confess. But that's not really expanded on at all. o:

This isn't to you, but in general, you guys make sure to read both the plot and this thread. The bullet points up there is just a bit of help and reminder of what happened in the long-winded version because I know you guys can get lazy, but please read both!

Yep, yep.

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Y'all need to read. :P So far, I'm getting asked a lot of questions that are already answered.~

It is a-okay to write with someone else. So long as you get it done, we don't really mind the method.

Also, you as the writer can elaborate on things the way you want. : ) Example, Tale's question. If you don't want to write is to be super gooey sweet perfection then you can write it the way you want to AS LONG as it follows the guidelines/plot to a point. Plums and I will fix any inconsistencies. Just keep in mind that any actual plot changes were supposed to occur during the plotting stage (that's what it was for), so the plot is as it is. It is no longer the time to shift things around.

She's writing that part (if you read through the other thread....) She's not the character. That's why her name is beside it.

Will fix when can.~

That's fine, if he's singing the same song.

Okay, guys. Today is the last day to change your song. If you don't, then whatever you signed up for is what you're stuck with, unless you drop out. Last day to drop out is tomorrow, the third. Annoying PMs will go out tomorrow to everyone I don't have lines from. ~ ​

Take a look at this post, to answer some of those questions. I'll sign you up for part 4.

As for songs, no. Songs will be written later and in this current phase, no songs or mention to song specifics should happen. It should just be focused on the general dialogue and setting. When songs occur/song placement is written in the plot overview.

/Locked because it's resolved? Hopefully? If you need anymore help or if the problem comes back, I'll unlock this for you. <: Good luck.

Yes, they are also a KHV member. The don't have to be a normal member too, no.~ <:

If any of you are confused, here is an example of how it should generally go.

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First of all, read the plot if you have not done so. You cannot write it based off of the timeline at the bottom of the OP. You must read through the plot. If you would like to write one of the parts above (part 1-7), then you should post here saying that you will be working on that part.

Let's say I decide to write part 6. I'd post here saying that I'll be working on it. Those screenplay examples can look pretty intimidating. Because this /is/ a digital production, you don't really need to worry about some of the things that screenplays include. It doesn't have to look super professional. Remember, this IS a VISUAL NOVEL so it works a bit differently. So anyway, I'm writing part six;

Part Six - Normal Member P.O.V
✿ Normal logs out and we get perspective on someone who’s in a long distance relationship.
✿ We focus on their chats online, and then a phone call.
✿ In the phone call, they discuss the donation issue and come to an agreement to put the money forth.

Here's a really stupid and pretend example of what the beginning may look like:

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SCENE: Normal's Bedroom

Normal has just logged out of KHV and is now sitting on the corner of his bed. He decides to call his girlfriend on his cellphone to comfort her from earlier. She answers after the third ring.

GIRLFRIEND:​

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(Sad)

Hello...

NORMAL:
Are you alright? You logged off in such a hurry.

GIRLFRIEND:
No, I'm super sad right now.

NORMAL:
It will be okay.

GIRLFRIEND:
(Feeling better)
You always know what to say, I feel so much better, thanks!​

Satisfied, NORMAL hangs up the phone.

Except plz have better dialogue, thanks. If you only want to do a bullet point of a part, say so. (For instance, if you ONLY want to write their phone call, but you don't want to write the online chat part)

While Plums and I are willing to fill in any gaps, the musical is a collaboration. That being said, please don't look at this and think that Plums and I will do everything if you decide not to help out and that everything is groovy. I think a lot of you guys are interested in seeing how this will turn out so I hope you'll also be willing to put in some effort to make it happen--otherwise it won't. </3

If you need help or don't understand something, please ask. We're here to help!

The Musical has now moved onto PHASE TWOOOO! We'll be coming up with a logo for the musical, writing the screenplay and picking our main cast in this phase. Come help!

The thread wasn't made yet. http://kh-vids.net/threads/phase-two-main-character-recommendations.134373/

I was going to do yours too, but the image you provided is really small and you didn't provide a size for the banner so I don't know what you want me to do with it or if you want it like TN's. v: Feel free to message me about it~

Still having issues with PS. Every time I launch it it gives me a 'low memory' warning and then everything crashes. So sorry again for the wait.

>> ◉ Note! It is PASSED Halloween! To make up for the 2-3 days where there were no updates, we'll give you guys a three day extension for the surprises/reward.
>> ◉ Start from last save.
Commands
Krowley takes a deep breath and steps in to help. Quiet, yet dependable, he steps up onto the first platforms and hoists Neku up by his legs. Neku wastes no time opening up the matchbox. He brings one match to the side of the box and swiftly drags the top along the rough surface. With a quiet hiss, the tip bursts into a vivid flame.
|| Neku ||
「YES!!! I THINK I have got a good FLAME going here! I was a little WORRIED at first because of all of this MIST, but I THINK I can light this thing now! Oh, guys, this reminds me of my LAST BIRTHDAY PARTY. They bought me some of those FAKE CANDLES that would NOT BLOW OUT--no joke! No matter how hard I tried, I just COULD NOT blow them out. My FAMILY thought it was funny but I WAS A LITTLE ANNOYED--」
Neku suddenly yelps as the flame goes out against his finger tips. He flicks the wasted match away into one of the holes and lights another. You're eyes widen in disbelief as he, despite various members of your group shouting at him to focus, continues to ramble on. He wastes8/10 of yourmatchsticks. You want to cry.
Krowley quietly lowers Neku before he can light another match, taking the matchbox away from him calmly and stepping onto the final and highest statue himself. With his height, he manages to bring the 9th match up to the first candle. The chandelier lights. The flame is rapid, forming a full circle all around and lighting the room dimly.
You turn off your flashlight now that it's unneeded. Krowley steps down from the statues and brushes some dust off of his shoulder.
|| Misty||
「It doesn't seem like anything has changed?」
You begin to think you shouldn't have trusted Vivi. The room remains the same for a few moments longer. ...And then you hear it. A loud, high pitched, deafening SCREEEEEEEEEECH, followed by an insane laughter. Saxima begins to whimper and tremble. You yourself feel your breath catch in your throat. What in the world? Even Krowley seems more alert than usual. You all move close to one another as the room begins to rattle violently. Dust tumbles down from the ceiling and you cover your head instinctively.
A heavy, grating sound turns your attention back to the statues. It seems their heads have reappeared somehow. The display is frightening; hazy stone faces with dead black eyes set right on you. You stumble back in horror and their faces twist and contort, the stone dragging against the flooring and inching close and close to you.
|| Vivi ||
「What the hell!? What is this?」
Saxima is frozen and for once, Neku is dead silent. Misty's eyes are wide as she struggles to find some sort of logical explanation. The closer they get, the more desperate you feel. What can you do? Throw your flashlight? Maybe this is a nightmare? Should you blow out the candles? They can't possibly hurt you, can they?
The air becomes thicker and then a loud CRASH rips your attention back to the chandelier--or, where it used to be. You watch as it falls straight down like a bolder into water, crashing loudly into the floor beneath you. The statues continue to inch closer. The closer they get, the weaker you begin to feel--almost as if something is being drawn from you. Your essence--your soul. Their heads twitch and spin madly. The floorboards give out beneath the chandelier and a thick white mist bubbles up like smoke from the gaping hole. You feel nauseous.
|| Misty ||
「WE HAVE TO GO, NOW! THERE'S NO TIME, THIS ISN'T GOOD!」
For once, you all agree. Neku runs back towards the entrance, but it's locked. The only other option is the hole. You all hastily make your way towards the leaking center of the foyer. On the way there, Saxima collapses. She was closest to the statues. They laugh sharply--a demonic sound piercing through your skull. Everyone else keeps moving. The statues inch nearer...




[ ] Run with everyone else into the hole. Sorry, Saxima.
[ ] Go back for Saxima and then escape through the hole.

Okay, my opinion has improved with this next ark.

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Since it's expanding on what happens after everything, it's boosted up on my list a bit. New confusions. These may have been explained, so feel free to remind me.

> Why does no one know who Kirito is? He cleared the last game and saved all of those people, and yet no one recognizes the name Kirito--specifically his own 'SISTER'? Why would he even use that name, knowing Sugou or whatever is batshit cray. It seemed like he thought about whether or not to use it, and then did so I'm just wondering.

> Why does his sister not recognize him? His avatar looks JUST LIKE HIM, WAT?

> Why is anyone playing this elf game after what happed in SAO? This is more of an opinion. I'm sorry, but never would I ever. How much time has passed since that incident, again?

Anyway, I'm hoping it doesn't take long for his sister to realize it's him because that's ridiculous.

It's pretty good so far. I always appreciate anime that go above and beyond. Like, past the expected, which SAO has done.

I think the exploiting the software thing is a bit redundant (I mean it just happened), but nbd.

Also wondering why all of these girls swoon over Kirito. He is so bland imho, I'm sorry. Meh, anime. That being said, I find both Asuna (less so) and Kirito pretty blargh as characters, but I'll still be pretty bummed if they don't end up together. Unless Kirito ends up with Lizbeth--*shot* Nah, but Leafa is pretty much Asuna 2.0, so.

Overall, though. Worth watching.