Ienzo's Last Days (Chapter 3 & 4)

Chapter 3 - Ansem isn't Happy

Xehanort had a secret meeting with the first four apprentices. "It seems that the new one has persuaded Ansem to make a labratory to further study the heart." Xehanort explained. "I think we should see what they're up to."

Weeks past, the seven delved deeper into the darkness of the heart. Ansem made a discovery important in the future: A Heartless.

Xehanort found a door, a keyhole leading to the heart of Radient Garden, which he kept secret to everyone.

Ansem found out about secret reasearch conducted by his six apprentices, fodbiding them to continue and to destroy all traces of their results. "That bas****, does he think we'll really destroy our hard work?" questioned Eleaus.

Xehanort went outside to get fresh air. "Relax, Eleaus, I'll talk with him tomorrow."

Ienzo pointed up to the sky. "Eh? What's that?" A comet soared across the sky."

The day after, a ship came to the castle Hollow Bastion carrying several passangers. The leader talked with Ansem for hours, each with sparked interest.

Xehanort came back with an angery look on his face. "The old fool fails to recognize what we could achieve with our research!"

And so, the assistants walked closer to their downfall.

Chapter 4 - A Feast to Remember

Ienzo was charged to make dinner for Masyter Ansem, the assistants, and their visitors. "*grumbles* One day, old man Ansem'll explode...."

As he brought out the food, everyone was awed by all five senses.

"Mmmmmmm, absolutely delicious!" cried Scrooge McDuck.

"Absolutely delightful!" screamed Minnie Mouse.

As for dessert, of course, was Sea-Salt Ice Cream. "Mmmmmmm, I'll make a fortune from this!" mentioned Scroge.

"Indeed, you should, my friend." answered Ansem the Wise.

Ienzo never got to eat his own cooking, as everyone else ate all of it. "A feast to remember, alright." Ienzo said sacrastically.

He went to bed starving, the rest of them slept soundly with their bellies full.

 

Sweet!! BTW, is this going to continue into Zexion's early time in The Organization, or will it just go to the point he turns into a Heartless/Nobody? Just wondering..

 

I'm just saying, it'll stop at Chapter 13.

 

Alright. Makes sense. I can't wait to read the rest,you keep it interesting.

 

Poor Ienzo, starving and I'm he cause of it. ;)

 

Tehe. You should see the hell I'm putting the poor guy through in Zexion's Will. Anyways,I've also noticed your improving at writing too. I guess after a while,you just catch a way of writing,and improve at that. I like this story,so keep up the good work!!

 

Trust me, you and 2Foxxie4U are a big inspiration of all three of my title fanfics.

 

Thanks! You and 2Foxxie4U are my inspirations. This is...weird. lol.

 

Uh, for me, inspiration as "I never would've started" kind of inspiration.

 

I get that. For me,inspiration is "I would s*** at stories if I didn't have someone who's good at it to follow" kind of inspiration...

 

Anyway, I'm gonna brainstorm for more ideas.

 

Alright. It can be trickey to think things out,I sometime write it down just to sort my thoughts. *shruggs* Whatever works,works. Everyone's different. Well,good luck.

 

awwww...*passes Zexion a bucket of chicken*


Great story!!! You know, kh vids should honestly have a top 5 stories for each week! There are just so many talented writers! :D

 

That's actually a REALLY good idea! Why don't you go suggest it?

 

Har, har, though I'm no match for Jade.

 

You should feel bad, Zexion; torturing your other like that! And while Ienzo is starving, I am sitting in front of the computer eating pretzels. This is interesting (as I've said before); the concept of Ienzo not being one of the masterminds is new. I've always pictured him as kind of the "behind the scenes" leader of the Magnificent Six (the original six).

 

I have to agree with Jade Rhade,really. It's kinda cool to take it from a new angle,though!!

 

Well, he was smart enough to persuade Ansem to build a lab to study the darkness. :D It's fun to torture others in fanfics.

 

True...so very true. Okay,I'll shut up now..