Poems Inspired By My Life

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    Multiple poems i've come up with. All have been inspired by something or another in my life.

    "I'm so afraid to say what's really on my mind
    Yet nothing's all that different from every other time
    I want to share my feelings but i'm truly just too shy
    There has never be hello so there'll never be goodbye..." -Original

    "I'm just stupid so ignore what I say
    I make my mistakes every single day
    I wish I could change everything about me
    But some things last an eternity..." -Original

    "There are times when silence is louder than words
    And nothing describes how the silence hurts
    But for those times that you simply must speak
    Remember how words are stronger than they seem." -Original

    "Love is a thing of beauty
    It heals the holes in your heart
    But it is also a thing of ruin
    And it leaves you missing a part
    Yet regardless of these things
    We must continue to try
    For if we stay in hiding
    We can kiss true love goodbye..." -Original

    "Never lose your hope
    For if you ever do
    Then there is not a way
    For love to come find you..." -Original

    This is here for everyone else to enjoy so please do so freely.
     
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    Ok well first off...
    I love your poems!!!!!!
    You have a really nice way of writing,and all the pieces really flow along well :3
    All your poems really get across the feeling behind them to,which is always nice
    Great work :)
     
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    Thank you.

    Like I said before, everything's been inspired by something or other in my life, so I try really hard to get some kind of point across.
    Also, I use some of these in my AMVs so they're also used to describe the story of the vid, which is sometimes a way to vent.

    I may put more up as I come up with them.
     
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    Thank you.

    Here's a new one I just came up with. Again, inspired by life issues...

    Never lose your hope
    For if you ever do
    Then there is not a way
    For love to come find you...

    I will add this to the first post with an edit, as with other new poems.
     
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    Oh my god these are too cute. Really relatable to a lot of people because I know I've written poems like this before. I especially like the first and the fourth one the best. The rhyme scheme is not forced and it flows really well. Nice work!
     
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    I always know to come here...XD
    These poems inspired by your life are beautiful.
    You could become a published poet.
    I love your poems, never forget that...:D
     
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    Thanks everyone.
    This... this just means a lot. I do this when I feel bad, want to make one for a video, or have a rough day at school. I try hard to make it rhyme while still having it make sense and i've got a longer one that I wrote on a very depressing day that I will post in a little bit.

    I don't think I would get these published because it's not really the main thing I want to do with my life but this is for other people to enjoy, with or without any monetary expenses attached. If they know what i'm going through then they're hurting inside... a lot. This is a way to help someone cheer up and for them to know that they're not alone...
     
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    Another one. Be warned it's very depressing...

    We never had a day
    Or talked a little while
    You act like my existence
    Is sick and totally vile
    I wish i'd never met you
    Or ever seen your face
    Cause now I only dream
    Of that one perfect day...
    And it will never come
    We both know this is true
    You've never thought of me
    But I still think of you...

    Long backstory and shizz but it's about my first crush...
     
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    More poetry I dug up from the most depressing school year i've ever had...

    "Love is patient, love is kind,
    When it's not ripping you apart,
    It's such a miracle to find,
    But when it hurts it kills your heart..."

    "You're a traitor to your kind,
    You've left all you love behind,
    I want to give it all to you,
    But i'm afraid of what you'll do..."

    "I'm so confused,
    I don't know what to do,
    I don't know who to believe,
    Out of everyone around me..."
     
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    New poem. It was inspired by the troubles someone I know is going through. I just hope this helps them feel better about everything.

    ♥♥♥Life can be short while friends fade away
    But enjoy every moment that you've got left today
    While during it's course, life may seem bittersweet
    At the end of your life you won't ever feel defeat♥♥♥


    I hope this will help them feel a lot better... ♥
     
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    Improv poem!

    I feel there's no one I can trust
    It seems like my joy's not a must
    I feel alone so here's goodbye
    At least some joy comes when I die...
     
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    Well I decided to dig thought KH-Vids poems. Wow. Oh my. Wow. This is absolutely amazing. Really..this is glorious. Hope things get better for you (although I know what I just said probably means nothing).
     
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    Hey, it means a lot. The problems aren't really mine anymore but it still hurts to see a friend go through such hardships...

    Thank you, I love it when people notice the poems.
     
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    I believe more people should see these. This poetry is professional and very heart felt.
     
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    Thank you. Your criticism is greatly appreciated, and on THAT note, another poem.

    I simply wish that we
    Could have some time to speak
    We may not meet again
    But you'll still be my friend...
     
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    *is surprised he hasn't posted*

    Very professional and well made. The main thing I enjoy about these is that they are so emotional.
    Very good, keep it up.
     
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    OMGBRITISHISMISBEINGSERIOUS!? :=D:

    Just kidding, but thank you. New improv poem.

    I've loved you since the start,
    You've always had my heart,
    And this is the truth i'm giving to you
    So now i'll feel good whatever you do.
     
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    Random improv/vent poem!

    I never had the guts to say
    Hi, hello, or how's your day
    So you took my heart and broke it well
    And you never knew how I truly felt...
     
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    Shit's happening in my life... lots of it actually, and I need to vent.

    You say you hate this place
    And the people are a disgrace
    But remember the people who care for you
    Because if you leave, you'll be hurting them too~

    Vent, and I hope the guy who hates KHV reads this and thinks twice about this...
     
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    New poem because i'm finally in the mood to make a good AMV.

    You try your best to be the hero
    But every hero has his fall
    You came for me when hope was gone
    And felt like our love conquered all
    Yet when I look back I only see fear
    The fear of loss, despair, and dread
    I thought they were your fears for me
    Or were you afraid it'd be YOUR end...?

    Yes, it's incredibly choppy.
    If I get a chance, i'll fix it later.