Video Working on Something New, here's a piece

Okay, so I just started using Sony Vegas, and I'm only about 17 seconds into the song right now, but I wanted to share what I had just so I could get advice from people that either use this program or know a lot about it so I don't mess up the whole thing before I even start. Basically I'm looking to see if I either overcrowded it with effects, used too many effects right away, etc. I know 17 seconds isn't long to go on, but I didn't want to get too far and find out it might just be a big mess-of-a-hess.

I also plan on putting the completed version here as well once it is complete