Read slowly.My heart is empty without you My heart is empty with you My heart loathes you My heart loves you I don’t care about you I care deeply about you Why did you leave for him? Why not me? Am I obsessed? What am I feeling? The emptiness in my heart is not only because of you, it is because of me. Maybe I am responsible for my emptiness Yes this must be true for I know I miss. . . I miss you? H-where is my heart at?
It is a free verse poem; which means that it conveys emotion without a rhyming pattern set in mind. Why would you assume that I would post a piece of material that is not a poem in the poem section? I have been here for over two years and I think I know that poems belong in the poem section. Also please use a spell check since you are not in the spam zone. Thank you.
Alright Jedininja, don't worry about him. The beginning is filled with opposites which I am quite fond of, but then you stopped doing that and it kind of lost it's appeal to me. Personal choice, I know, I know, it's just my opinion. Also, why is there a "H" before "where" in the final line? Are you adressing somebody? That's how it felt for me.
I am not sure why I wrote the “H” in front of the word where, it just felt like a good idea at the time. It lost its appeal you say? Well I guess I didn't transition very well, but then again I was just typing at the top of my head.
