I drew this a few minutes ago, and i really like it :D So I wanted to show you guys :D please tell me my mistakes and I'll fix them up as fast as I can ;) CnC please :D
It looks cool, but the head's kinda flat, just try getting it a little bit semi-circle-ish And the right shouler's a bit pointed... :/ I'd rate this 7/10 :D
I also want to add that it would look better if you added some shading. It would make it look more 3D.
The most prominent problem in this is the positioning and the proportions. First of all, I don't think anybody stands nice and straight like that -- If just want to draw a simple body shot, at least make them slouching off to one side. The top of the head is very flat... Start by drawing the entire head, then adding hair. Whether you're drawing a male or a female, the body always has curves. Nothing is a straight line down. Pay attention to how legs slant in and then when it hits the knee, comes out and in. The arms here are much to short; normally the end about mid-hip. The eye seems to be a little too far off to the left, and very large. Add some shading and more details as well.
