The Story that never was

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  1. Krowley Moderator

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    The Story that never was
    The following Story is based on events that both relate and differ to the Kingdom Hearts/Organization13 Chronicles.

    This is a story in progress that Ive made up based on how Organization13 began. Here is just a sample

    Prologue
    A boy in pain

    Darkness surrounds the air, I can’t see an inch of light. Its like this every time I sleep. Not even a Dream. Or a memory to look back to. All I see is a boy in a black hood, kneeled on the floor in sheer pain. I can’t see his face though. If I can only remove his hood…
    Boy in Pain – You fail to even realize this, but you hold a greater power.
    For the first time in almost 3 years, he had spoken.
    Boy in Pain – Though you are non-existent, you have the potential to create light out of nothingness.
    And now after all this time he speaks in riddles? Riddles I cant even begin to solve. In the midst of it all we begin fightin for some reason, fighting with weird swords and it always end in a draw. After we are both exhausted I walk over to him and just as I begin to remove his hood…

    ????? - ROXAS!! Get up!

    That happens.



    Chapter 1
    A perfect Life?

    ????? - I'm not gonna tell you again, get up or I'm gonna start kicken you!
    As you may or may not have figured out, my name is Roxas. The guy yellin and threatening at me is my best friend since as long as I can Remember. His Name is Xurik, and he acts as my alarm due to my long running wigged out dreams.
    Roxas - alright, alright, I'm up!
    Xurik - aww, I was hopin I'd actually get to beat you for a change.
    Roxas - K, well off to another dull day of school
    Xurik - C'mon, I'd thought you'd be happy. It's the last day of junior year, and your grades and clubs gurantee you an entry into pretty much and college or university.
    Thats another thing, Im extremely bright for my age, and so is Xurik but he never actually puts any effort unless its for competitive purposes.
    As we got ready and headed out the door, I started talkin to him to pass the time till we got to the Bus stop.

    Roxas - I had that dream again.
    Xurik - The one with the kid on his knees? You ever figure maybe all he needs is a bandaid? haha
    He never really did take my "serius talks" with him seriously, but I was glad that he was at least there to listen
    Roxas - I was so close to seeing his face...
    Xurik - Maybe that's why he keeps showing up.
    Roxas - Huh?
    Xurik - Well you keep yerning to see what this guy looks like and maybe thats why he stays in your dreams.
    Xurik wasnt always the theoretical type, but at times, he astounds even me.
    Roxas - You may be on to something, after all curiousity killed the cat right?
    Xurik - ya, but your kinda more of a mouse, so I don know the sayin for that.
    Roxas - haha, very funny.
    At that time the bus pulled in and Xurik and I rushed to the back. It was a half hour ride so we'd play a couple games of Shogi to pass by the time. A lot of the people on the bus would stare at us, but we were used to it.

    After the bus ride we arrived and watched everyone infront of us rush outta the bus.


    Xurik - Alright, only 6 more hours of Kokoro High before sweet summer freedom.
    Dirty looks stared us down as we headed towards the school doors. That's another thing I forgot to mention; We're Outcasts.
     
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    I'll join as Demyx please.
     
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    riku!!!! Xd
     
  4. Krowley Moderator

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    um this is more of a made-up story i made, so i don need character involvement, just criticism,
    also, the story takes place before Sora and the organization.
    (the character being named roxas is just a name i picked)
     
  5. KL93 Twilight Town Denizen

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    In that case, wouldn't this be more suitable for the Creativity Corner?
     
  6. Krowley Moderator

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    if thats where its more suited it can be moved i guess
     
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