Digital Art The Memory

Well, here is my first shot at using C4Ds and here are the results:

 

For the first time of using C4Ds, it's not bad.
Though I'm not really getting a sense of flow here, I think Ventus's face might be a bit too ovesharpened.
And I'm not sure if it's there, but if you have a drop shadow on Ventus, I'd say lose that too.

I do like the C4Ds you used though, with a bit more practice I think you could make some pretty nice stuff.

 

Ven's placement seems a little awkward and there's not really any flow. The colours look a little funny together, and don't really mix together.
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This tag is pretty good, only problem is the texture. Try blending the words within the tag.

 

Rule of thirds!

*in behalf of Misty*

 

i thought it was pretty good except that with those colors you could've done something a littl emore creative like making vanitas his shadow and making a name below his upside down that says vanitas. the colors work with him more than with ven. but still not bad for your first time.