SotW Discussion SotW #11 - Discussion!

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Please, CnC
(preferable Darky or Cin)

I like the way it came out.
By the way, I almost never use tuts, and I didn't use one for this either.
Rendered Roxas myself.

 

TBK do you make tuts? I wanna do stuff like that. D:

Oh, and the sig, the left side is a tiny bit repetitive, but sort of in a good way since it's nice to look at o:.

 

Very well done.

Sharpen up that Roxas render and some of those effects around him.

Also, darken the left side (FAR left side, like you have on the right only not as strong).

hope it helps.

 

Okay, thanks Darky.
How's this, Darkstuff?

 

That pwns a lot harder, TBK. :D

 

MUCH better.

One last thing: Erase any effects that cover Roxas' face. But I think you covered that.

I'd suggest entering that one. Very, VERY well done. ;)

 

Okay, i'll enter this one.
Thanks, Darky.

 

I can't decide between



and



Crits please?

 

I'd personally go with that second one. ;)

 

TBK, you should create some depth by usin the burn tool on the side of roxas opposite the light source and play with some adjustment layers. that tag could turn out really great.

Raven i would go with the second one, its got a lot more depth and better effects in it. You should add a little bit of light orange to complement the blue you have in there though :)

 

BK, one thing I notice about your sigs is a lot of nice affects, but they're all random and most of the time have very little flow. Not that this is bad but some of your sigs could use a bit of flow to spice them up. I beleive this sig is one of them. Either way, it's very nice, and truthfully won't get much better then it already is. I say enter it and see what happens...;)

And yeah Raven, I don't really like the colors for the 2nd one, but it's 5 times better then the first one, so I'd suggest entering that one as your final product, unless of course between now and entry time you create some marvelous sig that far out-does both of them, in which case, use that one.

/rant

 

Yes, my effects are very random.
._.

 

Here's what I made~
V1:

V2:

I dun know which one to use o.o
CnC, please :3

 

The seems a little blurry, sharpen it a little bit.
Try blending it some more as well.
I like v2 in any case.

 

I suggest adding a C4D, BK, for flow. :/

Trust me. xD

 

Well, first I tried pentooling, it came out great, but got all covered up.
I'll add a c4d I guess.

 

It's cool. Like TBK said, blend it some more. But I'm surprised you were able to make something with a Final Form stock/render.

 

Well, I made a new one. So it's between



and



CnC please?

 

The first one still xD
The other one is flat, stocks look washed out, stock placement needs work, no flow... lol.
So, go with the first one :)