Traditional Art Some fan-art

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Sketchy, Jan 13, 2013.

  1. Sketchy Moogle Assistant

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    He's not finished yet. And I somehow unintentionally made him look like somewhat of a mix between Roxas and Sora, I might have to change a few things.

    But anyways, what do you think?

    I haven't thought of a name yet.
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  2. Sketchy Moogle Assistant

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    I made him up, and no, I haven't named him yet.
    My photoshop/tablet skills are mediocre at best :\ but I hope to get better
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  3. Jiku Neon Kingdom Keeper

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    It's decent. It's a little generic, but I don't mind common looking characters. Commoners are a good thing. Problem is the shadows on his face make him look straight horrifying. You need to look into giving the eyes pupils and do a few studies in lighting. Also, move his ear back about a scale half inch and detail it. You should be consistent within your style. Just ditching details like that looks lazy. Still, I don't know if you're trained or not so don't feel bad or good, just keep on forging on ahead.
     
  4. Sketchy Moogle Assistant

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    What make his face look scary?
    Browsing a lot of KH pictures I noticed a lot of them didn't include pupils, only the suggestion of one. So that's what I went for.
    Now that you mention the ear, I realize that was something I forgot to finish :\
    And I am not trained. Simply self-taught.
     
  5. Jiku Neon Kingdom Keeper

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    The lack of pupils is associated with a lack of sou and the angle of the shadows above the eyes and to an even greater extent the shadow by the corner of his mouth just convey a very creepy tone to me.
     
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    I uploaded a 2nd version in the first post. Better?
     
  7. Llave Superless Moderator

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    This doesn't validate as a legitimate post dude.


    Anyways, I like your style, very Nomura like. The pupils look a lot better I must say, gives him more depth in which direction he looks and such. The coloring seems very "anime-esque" and aren't super depth and detail like. Usually the more you add and blend et cetera, the more interesting the result. Good job and nice avatar!
     
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    ~Moved to traditional art because it's something you've drawn even though it is digital.

    I really like this piece, I like the detail you've put into it, I prefer version 2 just because the lighting just seems to fit better. I also like how you've used different thicknesses of the lines to make shadows and to add depth. Keep it up, I suggest trying to draw him as a whole (like body and all).

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    ~Merged with your other thread. Any questions then feel free to PM me. : )