I'm wondering if you guys think that this is a good story and if you think i should keep going. AND TELL ME THE TRUTH :D EDIT: You people need to post not just look at it. The point of posting it was to get feedback EDIT 2: Chapter 1 is up! http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10259 EDIT 3: Chapter 2 is up! http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10318 Edit 4: CHAP 3!!!!!!!!! http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10342 here it is; It had always been the three of us. I had never wanted it to change. It was always Riku, Sora and I, and we had been best friends for as long as I could remember. We did EVERYTHING together. Wherever you would find one of us, you were sure to find the rest of us near by. We had gone swimming in the crystal clear ocean, looked for shells on the beach, and once even planned to go sailing off together to search and explore all the worlds around us. All of that changed when we were separated to different worlds. But even then we were all searching for each other, all wanting to see each other again. After two long adventures we found everyone and we all headed back to the islands. Riku and Sora had always liked me. But now they like me more than ever (I think its just hormones). They fight over who will sit next to me, and whom they will share their cookie with and I have and always will like the flattery. When I’m alone in my room, I secretly wish that one of them would just say that they liked me and get it over with, but after 6 months of being on the island, they haven’t said anything. Then suddenly, someone else came and nothing was ever the same. A new person to be in our trio. A new GIRL. And no the GIRL is NOT namine'. Also i need a title.......... tell me what u think! :)
It sounds really interesting, I think you should continue it. If you do, I'll be sure to read it. As for the title, I can't really help you there, I'm horrible at them. But yes, I do think you should continue this! :D :D :D
Kk thanx, I stink at titles too.......................... Ill try to have another chapter up by either tonight or by tommorow
Thanx. I posted chapter 1 awhile ago. I need help on wat people want me to write next. i have a basic idea but i want to see what other people want ot see happen :)
Cool Nice! I think I know who it is ^.^ Wait no I dont nevermind....I should think of something like that for my story its very very good :P I liked it alot I must find out who the girl is EEEEK!
Lol. Tip: think of things from your own life to make the story better. In one of the latter chapters (one of which i havent posted yet) I thought of this girl from school and that made me mad and made it easier to write. Being mad while writing is fun :p
