Plot for my new screen-play

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  1. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    An evil pink teddy bear asexually reproduces to form millions of evil pink teddy bears. Then using telepathy, the original pink teddy bear orders the rest to take over all of Rome, then take the transmission towers out by sending a mind-controlling electrical wave to everyone's phone, causing most if not all of the Earth-people's phone's to ring uncontrollably, forcing them to answer. Then the mind-controlling electrical wave (of doom) turns them into mindless zombies.

    I used a variety of sources for this idea.
     
  2. TheMagicalMisterMistoffelees Professional Crazy

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    Can we say, "Academy Award"?
     
  3. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    That is one delicious screenplay. :D

     
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    Is Vivi the teddy-bear? O:
     
  7. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    A "variety of sources"...pft, I see 6 Stephen King Novels.
     
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    That was the most epic plot I've ever heard.
     
  9. SplitOverload Chaser

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    lacks actual storyplay, bold characters and suiting settings.

    fix it and then.
     
  10. jafar custom title

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    Lacks refinement.
     
  11. TheMagicalMisterMistoffelees Professional Crazy

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    The hell are you talking about? Did you even read it?!
     
  12. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    Thank you, thank you all. ;D

    Psh, more like 12, but whatever.
    Storyplay? Who the **** uses that term anymore? It's called StoryACTION.

    And my characters are bold, the pink teddy bear, in fact, just went through a severing relationship with his wife, the band-aid colored teddy bear (her belly has the fuzzy stuff you find on the center of band-aids).

    So bite me. >:

    Yeah what he said!
     
  13. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Your screen-play is very much like your avvy. MANLY!
     
  14. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    XDDDD

    Well I guess that's what I was aiming for.
     
  15. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Mustachio is not amused,

    xDDDD Pumpkin ilu
     
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    Question: Will Morgan Freeman be playing the narrator.

     
  17. SplitOverload Chaser

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    Storyplay is used when a very deep and beautiful tales are created. LOTR, Star Wars have all used Storyplay, not storygheyACTION. Story action is not a term. You must know your stuff before you be a director, son.

    Man, my belly button went through more bold shat than your teddy bears did.
     
  18. Repliku Chaser

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    Why is this -not- a movie yet???
     
  19. jafar custom title

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    That's a statement. :l
     
  20. TheMagicalMisterMistoffelees Professional Crazy

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    That is a question in statement form, yeah.
     
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