Paris, The City of Love

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    Ahh, lovers. It is a wondrous thing in Paris. Especially for a girl, named Teressa Maxwell. She works at a cafe, along the most famous street. The street located exactly in front of the Eiffel Tower. The cafe she works in is called "Lover's Peak". The most famous cafe in the world. She and another friend works the early and late hours. They both become aware of the romance in the city quickly, and look for the great times of their life.

    I already took the liberty of making the character's names and positions, but you guys make up their personalities and such. Remember the AGES and to make them as the same position.
    Ages can only be 15-19

    Sorry... No More Characters Can Be Chosen At This Time. Please Check Back With Us At A Later Time <3


    Teressa Maxwell (Main Girl, works at Cafe) - Cupcake
    Jordan Cleaf ( Main Boy, father owns communications corporation) - DSK
    Brad Maxwell ( older Brother of the Main Girl, unspecified job/position) - NeoJecht
    Tammie Cleaf ( older sister to the Main Boy, co-cooridnator of communications corporation ) -DestinyStar
    Jacob Barns (best friend of the main Boy, unspecified job/position) - daxma
    Nicole Ritchie (Friend of Teressa's that works at the cafe) - AngelsNeedFlight


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    Name Given :

    Age :

    Personality :

    Biography :

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    Name Given : Jordan Cleaf.

    Age : 19

    Personality : Kind and caring

    Biography : Just moved to Paris from America.

    Appearance : [​IMG]

    Demon Post : ?

    Other/ Weapon : He carries a katana on his back, but rarely uses it.
     
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    Name Given :Brad Maxwell

    Age : 17

    Personality : layed back confident hey tends to do what ever he wants and not listen to others

    Biography :he and his parents had an argument when he was 15 after that he ran away for a year and when he came back he wouldnt talk about what he did when he was gone but he is trying to make amends to his little sister

    Appearance : [​IMG]

    Demon Post :Brad walked around the town he turned down an alley way and came to a dead end
    "huh must have taken a wrong turn"
    he turned to see a group of guys walking up behind him
    "outta the way punks"
    they didnt move
    "guess we gotta do this the hard way"
    he raised his hand and there was a flash of light
    he then walked out of the alley over the unconsis bodies of the punks

    Other/ Weapon : sword in pic he can also use some magic
     
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    Sorry Guys, I meant Demo post ^^;

    You can start now <3


    Name Given : Teressa Maxwell

    Age : 16

    Personality : She is a very sweet kind hearted person.

    Biography : Growing up was a great struggle. Both her parents always fought, and she was always scared. Once they had a very horrible argument which caused her only older brother to run away. Over the next year her parents were even horrible to her. They made her move multiple times, and her father was even worse at that. She always struggled with him, and her mother, but always wanted her brother around to help her. The day he came back, her parents had gotten into another argument, and she was in alot of trouble. She stayed in her room most of the day, and didn't come out for a week.

    Appearance : [​IMG]

    Demo Post : Teressa stood in the cafe, taking an order for a business man. It was so early this morning, and they looked like they could use something to freshen them up with. She came back with the exact order he had wanted, and she had walked up to the bar table with another order.

    Other/ Weapon : No weapon
     
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    Oh! It was Demo post! I was like what the heck is a demon post? Here's mine

    I also forgot to add that he's rich. ^_^;

    Demo Post: Jordan got off the plane in paris and went to the car that was left for him. He got in and drove around town, taking in the sights.
     
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    "Is that all sir?" Teressa asked the man she had served. He nodded with a satisfied look. Her smile brightened up and she walked back to the bar table. She had to deliver an alcoholic order. It was the ones she despised. Her past kept keeping up with her at work, and she couldn't find a way to stop it. She brought the bottle to a table full of tough men we looked to be celebrating something
     
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    Jordan found a cafe and his stomach growled. He parked in the nearest parking area and went inside.
     
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    Teressa came upon the table, looking around. The tray she was carrying had 8 glasses upside down, and the largest amount of Brandy in large bottle. She walked in between a few men, putting the bottle in the middle of the table.
    "Enjoy your day," she said, softly. She wanted away from the table immediately. She walked back to the front of the cafe, seeing a rather let teenager come in. She grabbed a menu from the counter, getting to the entrance, handing him a menu.
    "This way please," she said said with a smile and started walking towards an empty table.
     
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    Jordan followed her to the table he was going to sit at.
     
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    Teressa escorted him to the table with two seats.
    "Please take a minute to decide," she said and walked off to get the other orders.
     
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    "Thank you." he said, smiling at her. She's pretty. he thought. He looked over the menu.
     
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    Teressa walked up to the counter getting a few more orders, then giving the business man the check. She cleaned up his table, seeing a generous tip. This one had made her day start off good. She walked back over to the table Jordan was at.
    "Okay sir.. What can i get you?" she asked. At the end of her question, she saw his katana on his back. Her arms shook slightly and her breath became so silent. She almost stared but broke her eyes back to his.
     
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    He smiled at her and said "Can I get a Dr Pepper to drink? And to eat I'd like to have a steak, if you have them."
     
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    She nodded slightly and took the order back up to the bar. Her boss immediately saw something wrong in her presence and asked her what was wrong. Teressa looked at her boss.
    "Today has been, so horrible... Everywhere i look i see something that reminds me of my parents. I served alcohol to a party, and there's this guy with a weapon on his back" she said. The bell ringed and the meal was completed quickly. She shuddered and took the meal back to him setting it down on the table.
    "Is there anything else I can get you?" she asked.
     
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    "Nope I'm fine." he said. "And don't worry about the katana, I never use it. It's just so I don't get robbed."
     
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    She nodded, feeling somewhat relieved.
    "It reminds me of my parents a little," she said softly. She looked down at her watch.
    "I'll go ahead and give you the check, I have to leave now. Another worker will come by and clean up. Have a great day," she said, ripping the page out of her notepad placing it on his table. She walked to the front, grabbing her long black jacket. She walked outside, where it had already started raining.
     
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    He went out after her "Wait!" he said. "I haven't given you your tip."
     
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    "Just give it to the other girl," she said. She started running down the street through the rain. She rather loved walking through the rain than riding in a car.
     
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    "But I wanted you to have it." he said, looking at the $20 with his cell number written on it. He went back to his table and ate his food and drank his drink.
     
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    Teressa kept running, until she hit the end of the road. She got off the streets and went up a private road. She noticed a bunch of people by the streets. She whimpered somewhat and she shrugged it off. She went up another street, getting to her house, on a big hill. Her parent's cars were home, and she sighed. Maybe today wouldn't be so bad. She walked up to the porch, hearing a big commotion. She didn't want to go in, but she could tell it was about her. She was in trouble again about something. She listened in and realized it was where she worked more hours the week before. She didn't work as many hours at her parents business as she had the cafe. She jingled with her keys, opening the door, seeing her parents. She could already tell what she was in for.
     
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