Video need sum feed back...

i need some feedback for my Beta video.
like comments or advice.
if its sorta messed up, tell be n i may fix it.
also, if you have da clean version of da song, can you tell me where to get it (no, not like buy it on best buy...)

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&VideoID=18124929

peace!

PS. dont hate cuz its from my NJROTC.
keep da hating commetns to churself!

 

-_-; This, this doesn't belong in CC, actually, i'm not sure where it belongs, but it defiently isn't here. I don't even know what you're really asking for actually......

 

hm... i wanted to try on the M&M, and the V.W.
but the V.W. is for KH/S.E. media
M&M is for movies and media (one option...)
C.C. kinda ringed a bell...
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i listed what i wanted in the titled but i should have made it clear also in the body.
i just want some comments or advice or sumthing.