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  1. Alpha Shadow Kingdom Keeper

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    This story is about how a boy awakened powers prior to his dad's death, afterwards his friends began to develop the same abilities. They continued to train, face foes that opposed them and have gotten stronger over time. This is about all of them as a whole, but it's also centered around the boy's growth and his trials.

    Chapter 1 - Awakening! Sharingan Unleashed!

    "Time........Time has no limits.......Time controls fate........A person can control fate......at least that's what I believe. Strength, Wisdom, Courage, and Generosity make up what I am today......Anger, Hate, Sadness, Happiness, Foresight, and Achievement make up the power I have today......I use it for only pure purposes, never evil.....I pursue happiness and stability.....Time used to allow me to do all of these things......but Time will no longer aid me......Time.....requires my aid now. *Stranger awakens his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan*



    Two boys were sitting down outside and were having a discussion. It is August, and is during the football season, the time of day, Sunset.

    "I can't believe I'm gonna be part of the Band tomorrow!" said Joseph.

    "I can't believe it either, I never knew you would want to be apart of something like this, I mean it's Music, you're better suited to Computers." said David.

    "Well you're good with computers too." said Joseph.

    "I know but I have more fun with Music, you'd be better off spending a lot of time with computers and stuff." said David.

    "I guess you're right. But don't your dad and grandfather excel in Computers?" asked Joseph.

    "Yeah, but everyone in my family has played a musical instrument, my dad and I are the only ones who have practiced on a Percussion instrument." said David.

    "That's cool!" said Joseph.

    "That it is." said David smiling.

    They began to stare into the sky, a breeze flew by.

    "So I heard that you were dating someone." said David.

    "Yeah, her name is Mickey." said Joseph.

    "Wait you're dating that girl we play with on PSN?" asked David.

    "Yep!" said Joseph smiling.

    "Interesting, two good players in Call of Duty are dating each other, somehow though I knew you'd find a girlfriend by playing Black Ops so much." said David laughing.

    "Ah well thanks!" said Joseph.

    "I wonder how I'll find a girlfriend." said David.

    "You'll probably find one through Music or Computers or who knows, maybe just like me because you play it just as much as me." said Joseph.

    "I guess, but maybe in Music I'll find the right girl, if not, I can lead a single life." said David.

    "You never know." said Joseph.

    "Guess it's better if I don't dwell on it." said David.

    "Just give it some time." said Joseph.

    "Well I'm gonna head in the house, it's getting darker, plus the mosquitoes will devour us." said David.

    "Yeah, I gotta go talk to Mickey since I left her unattended on Facebook." said Joseph.

    "Tell her I'm sorry I'll make up for hogging her boyfriend." said David laughing.

    "She'll get mad at me not you." said Joseph.

    "Oh then nevermind sucks to be you." said David smiling.

    "Bye man!" said Joseph smiling.

    "Later!" said David.

    David opened the door and headed inside of the house, he walked into his room and laid on his bed. He stared at the ceiling thinking about his dad and couldn't wait to go hang out with him during the weekend. He had went to sleep. He began to have a dream, in the dream he was running towards lots of creatures and was destroying all of them swiftly! He seen two people helping him and were wielding blades that took them down with one swing! David continued onward in his dream and then met with a man in a white cloak, then the two began to fight each other, David had the upper hand when the man noticed one of his friends and struck her down in front of him! David erupted into rage and released lots of energy and then he woke up.......he noticed it was morning and it was time for school. He got up, got dressed, and headed outside. Once he got outside his grandfather called out to him.

    "You don't have to go to school today." said David's grandfather.

    "Why?" asked David.

    "Your grandmother is sick and your dad is freaking out, so we all need to go over there and calm him down." said David's grandfather.

    "Alright then, let's go." said David.

    They headed for David's dad's house, along the way David observed his grandfather's face, his grandmother on his mom side's face and knew something was wrong. Once they got there, David noticed lots of people at his dad's house and noticed a giant white van. David got out of the car and they told him to walk inside the house......inside the house......David noticed his dad resting in his favorite couch.

    "He had died in his sleep." said David's grandfather.

    David's heart had jumped, he felt nothing but anger and sadness, but he didn't show it.

    "I see, at least he felt no pain so I'm happy in a way." said David fake smiling.

    David noticed his sister was crying, so was his mom, and his grandmother was crying as well, he went to comfort them all, and the rest of the family knew David was very upset, but was also strong. Afterwards they all went back home, David said that he still wants to go to the football game to play with the Band so he wasn't so bored and moody at home. His grandfather agreed. His mom sent out a message to his sister's principal as well as his principal relaying the news of their dad's passing. David went to the school at 4 PM so he could hang out with his friends who had heard the news.

    "David are you sure you should be here?" asked Brandon.

    "Yeah man I mean your dad just died today I think it's better if you just stayed home." said Joseph.

    "No it's actually better if I get out, I don't wanna stay home and be moody." said David.

    "But dude you're supposed to be moody, you lost an important person in your life." said Brandon.

    "I don't wanna think about it that's all." said David.

    "Alright if that's what you wanna do, then go ahead man we'll back you up." said Brandon.

    "Thanks." said David.

    Cody and Lucus had showed up and joined the conversation, and so did David's band teacher Mr.T.

    "So is he staying?" asked Lucus.

    "Yeah I am." said David.

    "Well I'm sure Brandon has already said that we'll have your back which we will." said Cody.

    "Yeah he did and thanks." said David.

    "David, you sure you're okay man, you don't look okay." said Mr.T.

    "I am don't worry about me." said David.

    They headed off into the stands, they sat down, and Tyra had went to talk to David.

    "Hey Dave!" said Tyra.

    "Hey Tyra." said David.

    "I came to cheer you up." said Tyra.

    "I'm doing alright for the most part." said David.

    "Yeah but I wanna make sure you're okay, I do care about you." said Tyra smiling.

    "I know you do, I care about you too." said David smiling.

    Tyra held on to David who began to feel content. The game progressed on, the halftime show was coming up so the Band headed down to the field, David however wasn't feeling too good. He began to experience a bad headache, he was becoming angry.

    "David what's wrong?" asked Joseph.

    "I don't know." said David angry.

    "Are you catching a headache?" asked Tyra.

    "Yes, but it's more like a fever." said David.

    "Okay we need to sit you down." said Tyra.

    "No." said David.

    "But you need to rest." said Tyra.

    "I said NO!" said David.

    "Mr.T we need you." said Brandon.

    "What's going on?" asked Mr.T.

    "David is running a fever and needs to rest now." said Tyra.

    "I told you I'm fine." said David.

    "You don't sound fine." said Mr.T.

    Miranda had came running towards the crowd to try to help David.

    "Is David okay?" asked Miranda.

    "He's running a fever but he won't sit down and rest." said Brandon.

    "But why not?" asked Miranda.

    "We don't know." said Mr.T.

    "Look.....I'm gonna be okay, just leave me alone." said David.

    David began to experience more pain and started to grasp his head with both of his hands, he kept getting images of his dad, he couldn't stop remembering how he felt and how he looked when he was lying dead in his couch, he remembered all the times he was happy with him, it tormented him to no end. He slowly opened his right eye and it was turning into a red color then it turned back into a black color. David stood up from his knees and continued to feel pain, he opened both his eyes slowly and then they began taking on a red and black color, Brandon and Joseph observed his eyes and noticed that he was developing a superpower! David then closed his eyes again and began to concentrate, he then got control of himself and let out calm breaths. He then opened his eyes and revealed his Sharingan!!!

    "No way, he just released the Sharingan!" said Joseph.

    "What the f***!!!!" said Brandon.

    To Be Continued..........

    Alright hopefully you guys enjoyed the first chapter and to those who have read all of this already I hope you enjoyed it again lol the second chapter isn't looking so hot to me so I'll redo it as well unless you guys oppose?
     
  2. Amaury Legendary Hero

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    You might want to format it a little better, but other than that, the story was very interesting to read.

    I like how you listed each thing (strength, wisdom, etc.) in the first chapter.
     
  3. Plums Wakanda Forever

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    I agree with the format suggestion. The way this is written seems to be in the format of a play, rather than a short story. Even then, there are some areas, such as here:

    Where you could describe the action a bit more (though, in a play the dialogue is typically more important than the actions, but the actions still hold a bit of weight to the story still (symbols, etc.)).

    I also think that you went a tad bit overboard with the ellipses in your first paragraph. While they are meant to indicate a pause, too many pauses like that lowers the quality effect of it. There was also some issues where "insert character: 'David' became "insert character:D". I suggest spacing all of those instances, and all other where things got too close together like that.

    In terms of the story, you have a solid premise. The character at the beginning seems to be interesting in the fact he has the Naruto Hate Weapon: #1, but still fights for justice.
    Overall, I think the story/play? is good, but you just need to tweak the formatting.
     
  4. Alpha Shadow Kingdom Keeper

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    Yeah I'm a little rusty from doing this but yeah it's a story it's just I like doing in this format, it's been like 3 years since I've done one of these but I'll bounce back. In Chapter 2 I'll try it in a Story format and see what happens.

    Chapter 2-First Awakening

    "David! David!" screamed Tyra. "Somebody get him under control he's freaking out!" said Mr.T. David was undergoing an influence towards the activation of his powers, his hate became known, his fears gone, his judgment in tact, all he knew was he had to get a hold on himself! "David listen to me, you have to calm down, you have to get control over yourself," said Brandon, "or else it'll cause you great pain." Hearing the coaching from his friends, David began to regain himself and finally opened his eyes. Once his eyes were open, everyone was shocked to see what has happened to David. "Joseph!" screamed Brandon. "I know!" screamed Joseph. "Is that what I think it is?" asked Miranda. "Yep....it sure is." said Raelon. "It's the Sharingan." said Lucus.

    Everyone began staring at David, then he turned around to look at his friends, who marveled at his newfound ability! David then smilied at them and said....."What's up with the expressions guys?" He had no idea what he had just done and what he has just acquired. "Alright so is someone gonna tell me what's going on?" asked David. Brandon walked towards him. "I'll tell you, Dee my friend...." he smiled, "you have awoken the Sharingan." David put on a confused face. "I did what now?" asked David. "You now have the ability to use the Sharingan, remember from Naruto, Sasuke?" Brandon replied. David began to take it all in, he was amazed at the fact he was able to acquire this ability! "So.....I have the Sharingan.......heh......I think we should test it." said David smiling. "My thoughts exactly!" Brandon said quickly and resumed to punching David who's Sharingan seen it and he automatically dodged! "OMG WHAT THE HELL!?" screamed Taylor. "David can't fight how did he dodge that so fast?" asked Taylor. "It's cause he has the Sharingan, it allows him to copy someone's moves and he's able to dodge attacks before they even happen." explained Miranda. "So what he can see into the future or something?" asked Kyle. "No." David answered. "The Sharingan's purpose is to give me the ability to use evasive actions and copy my enemies' skills, which means I can copy a fighting style as well, which also means I can win in a fight should I get into one."

    Brandon, Joseph, and Lucus began to find ways to test it. "I got it! Let's all throw things at David and test how strong his Sharingan is!" Joseph suggested. "Yeah let's do it!" said Cody laughing. "I'm ready....show me what you got." said David. Everyone began finding rocks and all sorts of things to throw at David, then they were ready to test it or more like destroy David especially Lucus and Cody who had a big trash can ready to throw at David. "All right......on the count of three you all throw at David!" said Mr.T. "One.....Two.....Three!" At that moment everyone started letting loose and throwing things at David who started seeing all of the debris flying at him and he began to dodge each rock that was about to hit him, then he noticed more and more rocks were coming along with soda cans which made do back flips in order to dodge it, then came the big trash can that started to roll while David was dodging, that's when he charged after it while dodging and suddenly energy could be seen forming around his left leg. He kicked the trash can up and proceeded into the air and did a spiral and kicked the trash can down with his right leg that also became energized. "Um maybe we should GET OUT OF THE WAY!" screamed Cody. Lucus and Cody escaped the impact just in time and they looked at David with a smile. "Damn boy what you trying to do?" asked Lucus. "Sorry about that I'm still learning how to control this power" David lied, "Don't worry I'll train myself how to use it better." Brandon chuckled "Yeah you gonna learn how to beat the crap out of us that's what you're gonna learn how to do ADMIT IT!" David started laughing along with everyone else.

    To Be Continued......
     
  5. Loxare Hollow Bastion Committee

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    not bad chapter. you did a good job on the format despite not using it for awhile.

    just a reminder for you though, you have to start a new paragraph for each new person talking. for example:

    like that.
     
  6. Alpha Shadow Kingdom Keeper

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    yes that's it that's what i was thinking about doing i just couldn't figure out the exact format thank you so much lol!

    Oh and Chapter 3 will come out tomorrow so one chapter a day so that way i can get feedback and also so that way i dont get double posts and all that jazz

    Chapter 3-Another one!?

    3 months have passed since David awoken his Sharingan, he has been learning how to control it through brutal training. He has learned many new skills within a short amount of time and is getting stronger and faster! But David's skills are not just only thing that's been improving, his friendship with is Tyra is becoming bigger than everyone's friendship all together. David and Tyra both are in love with each other and haven't admit their true feelings for one another.

    "So you like Tyra?" asked Joseph.
    "Yeah I do." answered David.
    "Wow I can't believe you like her she's kinda crazy." said Joseph.
    "Hey she's not crazy, she's just natural, I mean I'm crazy, your crazy, Brandon's crazy, in fact our whole band is crazy!" said David smiling.
    "Whatever you say man, whatever you say, so are you gonna tell her?" asked Joseph.
    "No....I want to but she's still going out with Eric so what's the point?" said David. "I also have a best friend status with Eric too so I would be destroying it since him and I been friends for 5 years, he was my first friend when I moved here." Continued David.
    "Damn dude, if he were to find out he'd kill you....well.....actually you have the Sharingan so he wouldn't be able to touch you." said Joseph.
    "Well we won't find out because I have no intention of messing up their relationship." said David.
    "That probably is for the best until they break up." said Joseph.
    "I think so too." said David.

    Mr.T came walking in the band room ready to go to the game. He was ready for anything to happen but the thing is he has to drive to the game instead of supervise us because of the percussion instruments. "Alright guys let's load up the bus!" said Mr.T. The band loaded up on the bus and everyone sat by their friends and what not, everything seemed perfect for awhile, then Tyra came sit by Donald who was sitting across from David. So Donald and Tyra talked for a bit and then Tyra asked Joseph to switch spots with her so she can sit by David and Joseph said accepted.

    "Hey Dave" Tyra said smiling.
    "Hey Ty" David said smiling.
    "What's up?" Tyra asked.
    "Just getting ready to rock out on my drums" David answered.
    "That's gonna be awesome watching you play out there tonight" Tyra said smiling.

    David and Tyra kept smiling at each other then Tyra went sit by other friends.

    "You alright baw?" Joseph asked laughing.
    "Yeah I'm fine." David answered smiling.

    20 minutes passed while on the bus and Mr.T was ahead of the bus by 10 minutes, everything was going fine until David noticed Wesley acting strange, he was starting to freak out a little bit and started punching the wall of the bus very hard and Donald jumped up and went to control him, David was getting up as well but then Tyra jumped on top of him and he slammed down on the seat. David and Tyra stayed in that position for 5 minutes and then Tyra began crying. David then put his arm around her to comfort her and she fell into his arms.

    "Somebody call Mr.T now!" screamed Miranda.
    "I'm calling him right now!" screamed Taylor.

    Donald, a band chaperone, and the bus driver all held onto Wesley as he freaked out, Tyra became scared and David became upset and he wanted to help but just couldn't let go of Tyra, his feelings have stopped him from helping out Wesley. Mr.T then came in the bus and told everyone to get out the bus, then the ambulance came and took Wesley away. Everyone got back on the bus and decided to head for home seeing as how no one was stable at the moment, during the ride, David and Tyra sat in a seat by themselves holding on to each other.

    "Dave?" said Tyra.
    "Yeah?" said David.
    "I love you Dave, I want you and I to be together." said Tyra.
    "But....don't you have a boyfriend?" asked David.
    "We broke up today." said Tyra.
    "So that explains why you were depressed earlier when we were just chilling in the band room." David said remembering.
    "Yeah." said Tyra.
    "Tyra.....I love you too, I love you more than my own life......I accept your feelings if you accept mine." said David smiling.
    "Yes...yes I do." said Tyra smiling.

    They both hugged each other and went to sleep on the bus. The bus driver stopped and Burger King to let everyone settle down and talk to each other. David and Tyra walked around the place holding hands and everyone took notice of this action.

    "Wait what happened on the bus?" Taylor asked winking and talking in a sarcastic kind of way.
    "Something important happened on the bus....that's all you need to know." answered David smiling.
    "Yeah, something awesome." said Tyra smiling as well.

    Then David and Tyra looked at each other and kissed shocking everyone! Just then, right after the kiss, Tyra felt something coming up, she felt some kind of surge flowing through her, she thought it was happiness but David thought otherwise after using his Sharingan to determine what it was. He couldn't believe his eyes, what he was seeing awakening in Tyra, her energy was exactly the same as his!

    "Dave what's going on?" asked Tyra.
    "Tyra release it all, don't hold anything back, unleash all of your power now!" said David.
    "Dee what's wrong with Tyra?" asked Brandon.
    "She's awakening her Sharingan." said David smiling.
    "Wait how can she do that?" asked Joseph.
    "I noticed it when she was depressed when Wesley freaked out, I noticed something awakening within her, but it was her Sharingan, to release it, she needed happiness, but I aimed to calm her down, but then I myself wanted more, and so did she......" explained David.
    "So you and her dating just happened out of nowhere?" asked Brandon.
    "Yes." said David.

    Tyra then controlled herself......she opened her eyes and had the Sharingan just like David. There were now two members that can use the Sharingan. Two lovers.....David and Tyra.

    To Be Continued.......
     
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    Chapter 4-There's even more of them!

    David and Tyra spent a few weeks training together and going out on dates, they were happy together, it was like it was meant to be. The football season was over, so it was now concert season now for the Band. Things were gonna get boring so David and the percussionists decided to go have some fun while the band practiced their music.

    "So David how's things with you and Tyra?" asked Hanna.
    "Everything's going freakin great!" answered David smiling.
    "So So So you enjoy her her her company?" asked Andrew smiling.
    "Yes Andrew." said David smiling.
    "Hey David is it possible for us to get the Sharingan?" asked Travis smiling.
    "I don't know, if I had a way to check to see if you have power sleeping within you I would strive to awaken it." David replied.

    Then David started to think.....he just realized there's a way he CAN scan his friends' energies.

    "I got it! I'll use the Sharingan!" said David.
    "Could that work?" asked Hanna.
    "It works in the series so....I don't see why not." said David.
    "Alright go for it." said Travis.
    "Sharingan!" screamed David.

    David began seeing his friends' energy and he discovered something. He smiled.

    "What?" said Hanna.
    "I just learned that you guys do have the ability to awaken your powers." said David smiling.
    "Really!?" screamed everyone smiling.
    "Yep, you guys can awaken powers!" said David.
    "How do we awaken them?" asked Hanna.
    "Well I need to talk to everyone in the band and talk to Mr.T afterwards." said David.
    "Well let's go!" said Travis smiling.

    The percussion went inside to go talk to the band. David explained to Mr.T what he needs to do and he then turned to the band.

    "I need everyone to listen up.....what I have to say is very important and can affect each of you here right now......I used my Sharingan to see if my percussion section had powers within them.....turns out they do.......and I also scanned the entire band and found that all of you also have powers within you waiting to be awakened." explained David.

    "You're joking right?" asked Brandon.
    "No I'm not joking you guys have powers within you." said David smiling.

    Everyone jumped for joy and started saying how they can't wait to unlock their powers!

    "Now here's the thing......we need to unlock your powers by training.....and pretty much you guys will hate the training." said David.
    "Why's that?" asked Miranda.

    David smiled.

    "Because all of you have to be in battle in order to awaken it because you have to experience anger in order to awaken them, which means all of you have to go against me...." said David smiling.
    "Ohhhhhh s***......." said Brandon.

    Everyone went outside to begin the training.....it was big field that the football players used, David used some of his energy to seal the sides of the field so that way nothing gets destroyed on the outside just in case.

    "Now there's three steps to awakening your powers, first you need to calm your mind and focus, the second step is to feel it within you, third step is to unlock a bad memory you had and use it as your tool to awaken your powers, in other words, fighting me will allow you to get started with the anger." explained David.
    "Are we gonna die?" asked Taylor.
    "Noooooo." said David laughing. "Now get ready!"

    The wind began to blow as they all stood their ground, then the wind stopped and David used his Sharingan and charged after all of them, Lucus, Brandon, Cody, and Joseph ran after him and tried to punch him but they all missed him, then Taylor, Miranda, and Holden tried to kick him but David dodged as well, then the whole band started to jump in together and started throwing punches like crazy and David was dodging them all without breaking a sweat, he started smiling because he was enjoying it and was proud that they were trying so hard.

    "Good job guys good, now my dodging is over with....time to retaliate." said David smiling.
    "Bring it B****!" screamed Brandon.

    To Be Continued......
     
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    Chapter 5-Everyone's Ready, Willing, and Able


    "OMG HE'S DESTROYING US!" screamed Brandon.

    David was giving everyone a run for their money, he was throwing fast punches and fast kicks, he was all over the place with his speed, he was humiliating them. He charged after Brandon and kicked him into the air and then jumped up and spiral kicked him down to the ground. Then Joseph, Taylor, and Raelon all charged after David and attempted to kick him as well but David dodged them all and resorted to punching them with lighting speed. Holden and Ricky decided to use that time devise a strategy, they needed to find his weak point. While the two tacticians were going at it with thoughts, Hollie, Chris, Kyle, Hanna, Andrew, and Travis all went to back up the friends fighting David and then David realized that they were beginning to awaken their powers when he noticed they were all attacking him aster and were recovering from his attacks alot faster and were dodging alot better and easier as well.

    "Good job you guys keep it coming you're all getting very close!" said David smiling.

    They all kept going at it while Mr.T sat there and watched all of this unfold. He was excited at the progress they were all making, it was astounding! The Band kept fighting David and then he paused, he started to retreat in order to start a chase to test their speed, so he ran in a circle around the field and noticed they were keeping up just barely, then Joseph and Miranda started increasing their speed and were about to catch David when he accelerated faster than they did! Miranda started to feel some anger but pushed it aside but Joseph reached his limit and so did Brandon and they both released their powers and charged after David like wild men and tackled David to the ground! David then repelled their attacks and began running towards the rest of the Band and attacked them all using his skill and defeated them all! Then they all became furious and all awakened their powers!

    "Good job everyone!" said David smiling.

    Everyone was still enraged and were getting ready to attack David with all their might, but he trapped them all in a shield and he drained all of their powers to calm them down.

    "Alright here's the thing.....you guys need to train on how to control your emotions while using your powers.......but first I need to observe each of your powers." said David.

    "Brandon....you have the Byakugan." said David.
    "Yes!!!! Ballin!" said Brandon smiling.
    "Joseph......you have the ability to use the Sharingan along with the power to wield insane speed and agility." said David.
    "HA! So I'm like the Fourth Hokage then." said Joseph smiling.
    "Miranda you have the Byakugan along with Brandon.....hmmmmmm....ok here's what I'll do I'll tell you which people have this ability and what not, so Brandon, Miranda, Holden, and Ricky, you guys have the Byakugan." said David.
    "Awesome!" said Ricky.
    "Joseph, Tyra, Hanna, Johnathan, and Cody, you guys have the Sharingan alongside me." said David.
    "We the best!" said Joseph smiling.
    "Hollie, Both Chris', Heather, Hope, Tu, Lyna, pretty much the newbies.....you guys have the ability to control Nature Elements like Fire, Water, etc." said David.
    "Wow I guess we're the best now!" said Lyna.
    "Now Lucus.....you have the power to use insane strength along with this Armor ability called Reflega, it allows you to repel enemies and objects while rushing into them, so you're like Broly pretty much." David said laughing.
    "Awwwwww yeah!!!!" said Lucus laughing.
    "Taylor....I'm really impressed.....you have Crystal ability, you're like Guren from Naruto, she had a Crystal ability and was a beast!" said David.
    "Wow so I'm the best!" said Taylor smiling.
    "As for you Wesley.....I'm quite concerned.....you have a Darkness style ability.....it's very powerful stuff man.....and Eric also has something like that as well." said David.
    "I'll be fine don't worry." said Wesley.
    "Alright....I can trust your judgment." said David smiling.
    "So how are we gonna train?" asked Taylor.
    "Well for starters.....you guys need to control your emotions, then we can begin combat training, after that I'll let you guys train as a group, so Sharingan group vs Byakugan group, vs Elemental group, and vs Special Abilities group which is the Darkness, Crystal, Armor type people......and the training will push you to limits you never thought existed......and you will become stronger!" said David.
    "That sounds like alot of work." said Brandon.
    "It is alot of work but worth it right?" asked Miranda.
    "Indeed it is." said David.

    Everyone went back inside the Band room and just talked about the training that is about to come soon, they were ready to take that next step into a new life, a new experience, they were ready to fight for justice and peace. Over the next few months David trained everyone on how to control their emotions and their powers, and he also trained himself to where he was becoming two times stronger than everyone else. Joseph and Miranda were becoming the top students in their groups, Taylor was the top student who was mastering her Crystal ability with ease, and Wesley has been controlling his Darkness ability rather well, he's coming along great. Tyra has been proving herself by using her Sharingan at a level close to David's! Everyone has been working hard, everything has been normal for them so far, then a year passed and the newbies were now 10th graders and the veterans were now 11th graders! They have all advanced so well in their group training and individual training to great heights! But then....that's when things became heavy for the Band......when Wesley let Darkness overcome him.

    To Be Continued......
     
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    Alright since I missed a few days I'm gonna combine Chapter 6-8 together so that way I can save on time and lost time lol. Anyway I'm gonna make this combination epic. Brace yourself.

    Chapter 6-The Shift

    Wesley was starting to show signs of giving into to his dark side, he began insulting others in a hurtful way more frequently than before. He's even become merciless during the combat training, he destroys the bots very easily and shows no sign of sympathy, he's tortured the bots as if they were humans, he has become heartless, and David and Mr.T knew what they had to do.

    "WHAT!? NO YOU CAN'T! IT'S MY POWER!" Wesley screamed angrily.
    "Look Wesley we just feel that it's best that we lock up 75% of your power." said Mr.T
    "No that's not fair!" screamed Wesley.
    "It's fair because your powers have achieved extremely high levels that no one else has reached and they are starting to change you." said David.
    "No I won't let that happen, you'll have to catch me if you want to seal my powers!" said Wesley. With that statement Wesley escaped the band room and fled towards the city in hopes of escaping the sealing technique.

    "I'll go after him." said Mr.T.
    "No....let me get a team together, we'll all go look for him.....matter fact no....I'll let a certain team handle this mission." said David.

    David went outside to gather everyone and told them everything that happened.

    "Alright here's how it's gonna work, I want Miranda, Hollie, Cody, and Joseph to go looking for Wesley, Miranda and Hollie are excellent trackers and Cody and Joseph have incredible speed and should be able to capture Wesley.....understand?" said David.
    "Yes sir." said Miranda.
    "Alright you guys good luck be sure to contact me whenever you get an update and I'll be sure to keep you updated as well." said David.

    The Tracking Team left to search for Wesley who was in the heart of the city. He was very upset and angry at the accusation that was put upon him.

    "It's not fair....my powers are special....so what if I let them control me.....it helps me understand them better." said Wesley.
    "I think you just need to train yourself on how to use that power of yours and learn it's true purpose." said a masked stranger.
    "Who are you?" asked Wesley.
    "My name isn't important at the moment but what's important now is the purpose of your powers Wesley." said the stranger.

    The Stranger wore a black coat similar to Org.XIII and Ezio Auditore's outfit put together and her hood was covering her face but when Wesley looked into her eyes she showed off her Sharingan.

    "What do you mean my purpose for using that power?" asked Wesley.
    "You're true purpose for having this power is to use it to control everyone in this city, and if not the city, the entire world!" said the stranger.
    "Could I really achieve so much greatness with my powers?" asked Wesley smiling.
    "Of course you can my dear.....you surely can." said the stranger.
    "When do we start?" asked Wesley.
    "Come with me and we'll begin now." said the stranger.

    Miranda and the others were closing in on Wesley and watched them disappear through a dark aura'd portal. They arrived too late to stop Wesley.

    "Damn....we were too late by a few seconds." said Joseph.
    "Let's go back." said Miranda.

    With that they left and headed back for the base. Wesley and the stranger teleported to a broken up base that looked alot like the band room.

    "Where are we?" asked Wesley.
    "I took you into the future to train, there's an upgraded version of this training facility that was built 10 years ago. You can learn how to use your powers alot better while you're here." said the stranger.
    "Cool let's start right away." said Wesley.
    "Knock yourself out." said the stranger smiling.
    "By the way you still haven't told me your name." said Wesley.
    "My name is ...." said the stranger.
    "Wait....seriously.....you're ....?" said Wesley.
    "Yes I am, I'm the future version of ....." said the stranger.
    "Can I call you by an alias name or something?" asked Wesley.
    "You can call me Ashtin." said Ashtin.
    "Alright." said Wesley.

    Back in the present, the Tracking Team reported back to David about what they discovered in the city and who they saw taking in Wesley.

    "Hmmmm....a masked stranger huh? said David.
    "Yeah and it's a she and when I looked at her closely I swear I saw a Sharingan." said Miranda.
    "She had a Sharingan?" asked David.
    "Yeah." said the four.
    "Interesting....and she's a girl......I don't know anyone that's an adult that has the Sharingan." said David.
    "The weird thing is she isn't around here at all, like there's no trace of her or Wesley." said Miranda.
    "Really? Are you sure?" asked David.
    "Trust me David you yourself know how good my field of vision is with the Byakugan." said Miranda.
    "Yeah you're right, I shouldn't doubt you." David said laughing.
    "Yeah you shouldn't." Miranda said laughing as well.
    "How about you two flirt some other time we got work to do." said Cody.
    "Damn Cody calm down." David said laughing. "Alright....so if we can't track him at all through the city, then where else could he be, he could outside the city." said David.
    "Nope I sent a clone out to scan the outskirts and there was no sign of them at all." said Hollie.
    "Wow...ok.....then where could they be in the past or the future?" asked David.
    "Maybe so....let's combine powers David and find out." said Miranda.
    "Right..." said David.

    David and Miranda began to channel their energies together and then activated their chakra and began streaming their powers together and went into the past and didn't find a trace of the stranger or Wesley, so they searched the future but their powers detected nothing as well.

    "Nothing at all." said Miranda.
    "This woman must be very talented to have been able to conceal herself and Wesley this good." said David.
    Yeah she must really be special." said Joseph.
    "Well let's pause the search for now until we can figure out where they went." said Cody.
    "Yeah might as well." said David.

    The five went into the band room to formulate a strategy on how to find Wesley. They made plans for two days and trained themselves how to use their field of vision and how to increase their speed. David and the others were making great progress. That's when Taylor had developed the ability to use Foresight which allowed her to see into the future, she seen where Wesley was and they all went into the future to confront him and the stranger. Taylor had seen something else but she couldn't say what she had seen, she said it's better they experienced it right before their eyes.

    The Band have traveled into the future now and were searching for Wesley and hd finally found him. Wesley was totally different, his hair was pitch black, his outfit was in the form of Sasuke's outfit when he was with Orochimaru. Ashtin was also with him to welcome the rescue party.

    "So Wesley these were your friends right?" said Ashtin.
    "Yeah....they were." said Wesley.
    "We still are your friends Wesley." said Hollie.
    "SHUT UP! None of you are my friends anymore......and because of the idea of sealing my powers......I've updated my powers to the fullest and I'm going to destroy all of you." said Wesley.
    "Guys....don't try to change him.....he's forgotten us...." said David.
    "So what are we gonna do now?" asked Hollie.
    "Everyone go back to the present......." said David.
    "What?" said Brandon.
    "You heard me.......I want you guys to go back right now." said David.
    "Wait what about you?" asked Joseph.
    "I'm gonna do what I have to." said David.
    "David no you can't fight him." said Miranda.
    "I'm gonna seal his powers......he can't be allowed to roam free with those powers, and I refuse to kill him." said David.
    Wesley laughed. "Kill me!? You can't kill me!" said Wesley.
    "I sure can.....it'll be over quickly." said David.
    "Why don't you try it then!?" said Wesley smiling.
    "Wesley....it won't work....I'm gonna seal your powers like I'm supposed to." said David.
    "David let me stay and help you out, I mean there's no way that creep over there is gonna let you seal Wesley's powers." said Tyra.
    "No....I'm not gonna let you get hurt helping me." said David.
    "David I don't want you to die by these guys." said Tyra.
    "Don't worry....I won't die." said David.
    "Promise?" said Tyra.
    "Promise." said David.
    They hugged each other and they all went back into the past and left David.

    "Alright.....I don't have any distractions.....let's do this." said David.
    "I can handle him myself Ashtin." said Wesley.
    "By all means go ahead." said Ashtin smiling.

    David activated his Sharingan and charged after Wesley. Wesley then teleported and kicked David on his back and did some combos with his feet. David then turned around and blocked the last hit just in time and threw Wesley into a wall. Wesley bounced on the wall with his chakra and raced back to David and punched him in the face and began a combo on him, David had a hard time reading Wesley's moves and was losing the fight.

    "What's wrong David? I thought you were going to seal my powers?" said Wesley laughing.

    David then grabbed Wesley's hand and then punched him with his other arm and then elbowed him with the arm that was holding Wesley's hand and then jumped up and kicked him in his face and then turned his body around and threw Wesley into the wall face first!

    "Hmmmm.....he seems to be a little bit stronger for some reason.....back then he wasn't able to do all of this.....maybe I changed history a little bit." said Ashtin.
    "Hmmmmm......you seem to have gotten stronger somehow.....weird." said Wesley.

    Wesley charged after David and then David used his Sharingan's ability to read Wesley's moves and started dodging every one of them, then David did a backflip and landed on top of the roof of the band room and began forming a seal.

    "Wait what's he doing?" asked Wesley.
    "No way when did he learn that?" asked Ashtin.
    "Fire Style:Fireball Jutsu!" said David.

    Wesley watched as the fireball charged towards him and he put up a dark shield to protect him. David took that opportunity to make his next move, he began to place his hand onto the surface of the roof and began forming an electrical sensation in his hand.

    "No way.....there's no way he learned that move already!" said Ashtin.
    "Try this.....Chidori!" said David.

    David charged at the speed of light and broke Wesley's shield then he proceeded to attacking Wesley with fast punches and kicks that no one has ever seen before! David was changing, he was starting to unleash new powers that he had developed. He was starting to become a true warrior, a warrior able to tackle any obsstacle thrown at him.

    "Now to seal your powers.....Forbidden Jutsu:Reaper Death Seal!" said David.
    "Nooooooooooooooo stop!" screamed Wesley.
    "It's too late it's been done." said David.
    "Wesley no!" said Ashtin.

    Ashtin charged after David and was blocked by Tyra who used Chidori on her and hit her point blank in the chest. Ashtin fell to the ground while everyone went to comfort David who lost alot of chakra from using those jutsus.

    "I knew you guys didn't leave." David said.
    "Well we couldn't stand by and let you do it all on your own." said Miranda.
    "Good thing...I just about reached my limit....probably shouldn't have used the fireball jutsu but had to get him distracted somehow." said David smiling.
    "Well at least you sealed his powers by 75%." said Mr.T.
    "Nope....I sealed them completely." said David. "He doesn't deserve to have those powers, he's become corrupted with the hunger for power. So I had to end it." said David.
    "Wow....that's amazing." said Tyra.
    "Alright we need to get David out of here so he can rest." said Hollie.
    "No wait....look out!" said David.

    Ashtin healed her wound and charged right after David with Chidori and Miranda got in front of the attack in hopes of using her new defensive attack and got hit on her shoulder and fell to the ground.

    "Miranda!" screamed Andy.
    "Quick someone heal her now!" said David.
    "I'll make you pay for this!" screamed Andy.

    Andy began to charge up a Rasengan and went straight after Ashtin and she kicked him towards the wall and began to go after David. David then got up and used his Sharingan to block her Chidori and kicked her towards a wall as well. David looked at Miranda who was bleeding to death.

    "David......" said Miranda.
    "I'm right here Miranda.....hold on we'll heal you right away." said David.
    "David.....if I die.....I want you to know.....I wish we could've dated.....at least once.....you're always alone doing things by yourself......you always helped others whenever they were in need.....you're a caring person.....you need happiness......you need......happi.......ness....." said Miranda.

    David soaked it all in......he then broke into a massive rage of watching her suffer like that and thought about his friends......then he closed his eyes and then his chakra rose to an incredible level and then opened his eyes......his eyes looked different this time, they were the Sharingan but something was different......they looked different......

    "I hope you're ready to die......Amaterasu!" said David.

    Black Flames started to shoot from David's left eye and engulfed Ashtin instantly, she struggled to break from the flames but was powerless. The flames engulfed her and she was no more. David fell to the ground unconscious and everyone carried Miranda and David back to the present towards the band room.

    To Be Continued........
     
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    Got a great storyline XD for a moment i kept thinking "ok everyone's going to get sharingan aren't they" but then the other abilities came in. Very good. Kinda curious to see if David ends up going partially blind too XD
     
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    Don't worry there's gonna be so epic stuff happening next.
     
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    This will be Chapter 7 because Chapter 6 was a big one and this was supposed to be Chapter 9 but I'll treat Chapter 6 as a big chapter.

    Chapter 7-The Band's Evolution

    David and Miranda were in the school's Health Center, they were alone and were still unconscious. Mr.T and Joseph have checked on them every hour while the whole band checked on them daily since of course they still had to keep up their training. The band just couldn't stop remembering what happened back in the battle with Wesley who has been sealed of his powers. The band can't believe what went down in the future, they couldn't believe what Miranda confessed, how she got wounded, and how David reacted towards her injury. Tyra was taking that experience hard, she couldn't believe what she heard from Miranda, and how David reacted. Then, 4 days passed, David and Miranda were still out of it, Tyra was getting more and more dark about the memory she has of that day, she was starting to wish Miranda never said what she said.

    "Brandon I'm starting to worry about Tyra, she's been depressed for four days, and I noticed when we train, I notice her powers becoming stronger and stronger as well as her anger." said Taylor.
    "Yeah I been noticing that......it's getting out of hand too, she might end up like Wesley if she continues." said Brandon.
    "What do you think caused this to happen to her?" asked Taylor.
    "From what I know and seen.....she started acting this way after Miranda told David that she loved him." said Brandon.
    "Well Miranda probably thought she was gonna die so she had to say it, or maybe she wanted to get hurt so she can get the courage to say it, either way she told him and now Tyra's upset because David became very angry when she passed out." said Taylor.
    "We're gonna have to monitor her just in case, she may try something." said Brandon.
    "Yeah we should, I think if she gets mad enough she may try to kill David or Miranda." said Taylor.
    "That's what I'm thinking and I'm not gonna let that happen." said Brandon.

    Taylor and Brandon continued to watch Tyra's movements when Tyra fled from their sight, she ran towards the Health Center to go see David. Tyra reached the Health Center and went into the room where David and Miranda were both sleeping, she looked at David, then she looked at Miranda, rage filled her heart and mind and was making a Chidori out of her hand ready to kill Miranda when Taylor came and trapped her in a Crystal Prison.

    "I knew it was right to keep an eye on you, I knew you were up to something!" said Taylor.
    "Yeah, it was obvious that you were planning on killing Miranda or David." said Brandon.
    "I wasn't going to kill David.....I only want to kill Miranda......she's stealing David away from me." said Tyra.
    "David wouldn't do that to you, he's a nice guy, he likes Miranda too but he only makes room for one girl and that's you Tyra." said Taylor.
    "Miranda knew David wouldn't date her which is why she had to tell him since she was on the verge of death, right now she's safe and we want to keep it that way, and just so you know, if you kill Miranda, David won't forgive you." said Brandon.
    Tyra began laughing. "Really now? You really believe that he won't forgive me?" Tyra said still laughing. "How is that funny?" asked Brandon. Tyra kept laughing.

    "It's funny because I now know what Ashtin was up to, and I know who she really is, and I also know she's not dead...." said Tyra.
    "What do you mean?" asked Taylor.
    "Ashtin.....is really ME from the future!" said Tyra smiling.
    "WHAT!?" said Brandon and Taylor.
    "And I know she'll teach me everything she knows, in fact, I'm sure she can help me right this moment." said Tyra smiling.
    "Right you are girl!" said Future Tyra.

    The Future Tyra came in and broke Taylor's Crystal Prison releasing Tyra and they both escaped into the future.

    "You've gotta be kidding me......they got away that fast." said Brandon.
    "Sorry Brandon.....I guess my Crystal Prison isn't strong enough yet." Taylor said depressed.
    "No it's not your fault.....the Future Tyra is very strong so it's no surprise that she can break through your Crystal attacks." said Brandon.
    "Yeah you're right." said Taylor.
    "But now we gotta problem....Tyra is working with her future self, and her future self is very strong and I'm sure she has lots of techniques that can make us look very weak." said Brandon.
    "I think we need to take over the Combat Training sessions for awhile until David and Miranda wake up, and the rate they're going it'll be awhile before they wake up." said Taylor.
    "I agree." said Brandon.

    Taylor and Brandon went to tell everyone what had happened in the Health Center.

    "Wait a minute are you serious?" asked Hollie.
    "Tyra really tried to kill Miranda?" asked Holden.
    "Yes." answered Taylor.
    "So now Tyra's with her future self and is gonna train to come back and kill Miranda?" asked Andy.
    "No her purpose was to kill Miranda from the start but Taylor and I stopped her, my guess is she's gonna train herself to come back and take us out first then she'll take out Miranda." said Brandon.
    "But then wouldn't David become furious and end up killing her himself?" asked Ricky.
    "Yeah I really believe that David would resort to that method." said Joseph.
    "Well we can't be sure until it happens, but you guys have to know that we must train ourselves even harder, in fact we need to make our powers evolve to a new level just as David has." said Taylor.
    "But wouldn't that mean we'd end up in the hospital like he is right now?" asked Travis.
    "No David's in the hospital now because he overused his Mangekyou Sharingan, it's not a simple evolution he went through, he literally awakened the next level of his Sharingan." said Brandon.
    "Plus the Mangekyou Sharingan is a very powerful ocular jutsu, it's powers are very dangerous and powerful and are risky too....but David's anger caused him to overuse it's physical power called Amaterasu, where he shoots black flames from his left eye, it's a very powerful physical attack, and along with it, his right eye holds the most powerful genjutsu called Tsukiyomi which traps your mind in a alternate reality that the user can control, trust me it's some powerful stuff." said Joseph.
    "Wow Joseph you say it as if you actually have awakened your Mangekyou." said Hanna.
    "No it's just what I know from the show and from what I seen David do, I can tell he has Sasuke's kind of Mangekyou Sharingan, which means he's gonna be very skilled." said Joseph.
    "Well aside from learning about David's newfound powers, we need to concentrate on evolving everyone's powers, including my own." said Mr.T.
    "Yeah we need to get started." said Taylor.
    "Um shouldn't we get someone to guard the Health Center just in case the Tyra Duo show up?" asked Andrew.
    "Yeah we need to put up some guard duty for those two....." said Brandon.
    "Not to worry....I'll put up a barrier that notifies me if it's been hit or tampered with." said Mr.T.
    "I'll help you strengthen it." said Taylor.

    Taylor and Mr.T began to channel their chakra and created a seal around the room David and Miranda were resting in. Then everyone began to train as hard as they could to awaken the next level of their powers, they trained night and day, day and night, 24/7, with a few breaks in between. Two weeks passed since David and Miranda were unconscious, everyone began to show signs of newfound powers arising, and some of them even evolved already!

    "So this is the next level of our chakra?" asked Joseph.

    Joseph couldn't believe it, the next level of their Chakra was Ki!

    "Wait what's Ki?" asked Taylor.
    "Ki is what energy is referred to in Dragon Ball Z. Which means we are gonna be able to do lots of things that everyone can do in Dragon Ball Z!" said Brandon.
    "So which means we can fly and fight the way they do?" asked Raelon.
    "That's exactly right." said Joseph.
    "Now we just to figure out who evolved into who, like we need to know who has the powers of a person from Dragon Ball Z." said Brandon.
    "I know one thing, Taylor definitely has Frieza's powers, I can feel her power." said Raelon.
    "Is that good?" asked Taylor.
    "It's pretty good considering you can breathe in space and you can probably own most of the people here." said Brandon.
    "Yeah!" said Taylor laughing.
    "Brandon I think you have Piccolo's power, and Mr.T kinda has the same thing." said Joseph.
    "Awesome me and Mr.T are brothers now." said Brandon.
    "I have Gohan's powers.....awesome." said Joseph.
    "I have Vegeta's powers." said Cody.
    "Alright I have Broly's powers! What's up!" said Lucus laughing.
    "Oh wow he has Broly's powers, lucky *******." said Joseph.
    "So who has Goku's powers?" asked Cody.
    "No one here seems to have it, but multiple people have Yamcha, Tien, Krillin, and Piccolo's powers, and there's two Trunks', and two Gohan's, but no Goku at all." said Brandon.
    "Hey Brandon.....check this out, feel David and Miranda's powers with me." said Taylor.
    "Alright." said Brandon.
    "You see what I see? What's that power?" asked Taylor.
    "Oh My God......Those two have it......omg.....omg.......it's.......IT'S OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" screamed Brandon.

    To Be Continued..............

    Chapter 8-Miranda's Awake!

    "Wait are you telling me that David and Miranda have that kind of power lying dormant within them." said Joseph.
    "Yeah I just seen it by using my Energy Sense technique." said Brandon.
    "So the two people that are unconscious right now have the most amazing power." said Taylor.
    "Yep pretty much." said Brandon.
    "Wow.....cool." said Joseph.

    David and Miranda were now just resting, David was having a dream, a dream that may be very useful for his evolution.

    "No......No......wait........leave.......her.......alone.......you......fool........stop it......" mumbled David. "Must.....save.........her......" David continued.

    Miranda too appeared to be having a dream as well.

    "David! No don't do it, I need you!" screamed Miranda. I have to........protect him....I.....love......him......" mumbled Miranda.

    It seems they were both having almost the same dream which was becoming a nightmare but slowly turned into a good dream. Miranda began to calm down when her dream showed her and David together. David however still couldn't calm down, he was suffering from a major headache from the effects of his Mangekyou.

    "This pain is unbearable.......rrrrrrrggggggggghhhhhh........"said David angrily.
    "That's cause you're not use to your new powers, you just need some time to practice." said a stranger.
    "Who are you? And.....Where are you?" asked David looking around.
    "Come on you don't recognize my voice? You can't sense my energy, surely my son should be able to recognize my voice and energy signal." said the stranger.
    "Dad!?" said David.
    "Yes son.....it's me." said David's father.
    "Dad how have you been? I really miss you, there's so much that's happened." said David.
    "I know, I've been watching you, I know all about your powers and what the current situation is, and that's why I'm allowed to come and train you on how to use your newfound powers." said David's father.
    "But how?" asked David.
    "Son.....I possess many abilities, I possess the Mangekyou Sharingan, the Byakugan, the Crystal ability, pretty much the abilities your friends have I have as well, and you can learn them all, but you have to let me train you first." said David's Father.
    "Alright so how long would this take?" asked David.
    "Well for one thing, we need to train your ocular powers so that way you won't tire out so easily, I mean you only used the Amaterasu Technique and look what happened to you, it's time you learned all about your powers and how they work.....starting with the Mangekyou, then I'll teach you how to awaken the next level of energy, then you shall learn the art of the Sharingan's true power, which is the power to wield another user's ability as your own and you'll be able to keep it and use it as you're own technique." said David's father.
    "Wow, well let's get started!" said David smiling.
    "Well I'll only teach you the Mangekyou first, and then I'll explain about how to unlock the next level of energy, and then we'll meet again afterwards, I'll arrange a spot for us to train......but for now.....let's train your Mangekyou." said David's father.
    "Alright!" said David.

    David and his father began to train with the Mangekyou Sharingan in hopes of David achieving a greater power by using it. Meanwhile, Miranda was beginning to have another dream.

    "Where am I?" asked Miranda. "This place is.......familiar......it looks like......my house." Miranda continued. "But why am I here, wasn't I in the health center sleeping? What's going on..............?" asked Miranda.

    Miranda began walking around trying to find answers to why her dream is showing her home, and why it's so beaten up. She ran around the neighborhood but couldn't find anyone home, she started to get scared, there was no one around, she was lonely.

    "I'm the only one here.....no one else." said Miranda.
    "Wrong.....I'm here." said a voice.
    "Who's there?" asked Miranda.
    "It's just me. David." said David.
    "David! omg are you ok?" asked Miranda.
    "I'm fine but the better question is are you ok.....I mean you tried to save me, and succeeded, but you hurt yourself." said David.
    "I did it because I love you David." said Miranda smiling.
    "I know you do.....I have to realize that I love you too, it's hard hiding it even now." said David smiling.
    "You don't have to anymore, we both love each other equally." said Miranda.
    "Miranda......I'm going to tell you something that will help you awaken the next level of your energy." said David.
    "Wait what?" asked Miranda.
    "Listen closely.....you and I have a power lying dormant within us, the power is gigantic, it's so awesome, it's powerful, if we can awaken it, we can no doubt tackle evil without any hassles, but you will be the first to awaken it, not me, I'm telling you this because I won't wake up for awhile, I'm undergoing some training.....but Miranda I need you to wake up, and protect our friends......can you do that for me?" said David.
    "Yes....Yes I can David." said Miranda.
    "Good....now I want you to merge your Chakra together with your physical energy while becoming furious, this will awaken your new powers." said David.
    "I will....see you soon David, I love you." said Miranda.
    "I love you too." said David smiling.

    Miranda then woke up and felt a surge overpowering her, she began to gather waves of energy and awakened her Ki just as the others have.

    "Hey....you feel that?" asked Hanna.
    "Yeah." said Joseph.
    "Where's it coming from?" asked Taylor.
    "It's coming from the health center." said Ricky.
    "Is Tyra attacking already?" asked Brandon.
    "No it's not under attack and Tyra's no where near there." said Taylor.
    "I can sense Miranda." said Andy.
    "Yeah same here." said Hollie.
    "I think she's awake!" said Holden.
    "I think so too." said Joseph.

    Right after Joseph's sentence, Miranda instantly teleported towards them.

    "WTF? " screamed Brandon.
    "Hey guys sorry for scaring you like that." said Miranda.
    "Ummmm.....is that you Miranda?" asked Holden.
    "Of course it is Holden." said Hollie.
    "It's just her new powers that's giving off right now." said Taylor.
    "So what's been going on while David and I were resting?" asked Miranda.
    "Well Tyra apparently wants to kill us all now especially you, and she tried to kill you at first but Brandon and I stopped her, then her future self came and took her away to train her." said Taylor.
    "Looks like David was right, she has to be stopped." said Miranda.
    "Speaking of David where is he?" asked Hollie.
    "He's still resting but he's training right now too, his dad's training him on how to use his Mangekyou Sharingan." said Miranda.
    "Wow that's awesome." said Joseph.
    "Yes it is." said Miranda.
    "Alright we found Tyra's whereabouts.....she's in the future.......she's training by someone's house, looks alot like Brandon's house." said Mr.T.
    "Which means they're near David's House as well in the future, but why would they go there?" asked Brandon.
    "If their target is Miranda.....maybe David and Miranda got married and are in the same house together." said Ricky.
    "That could be it....or maybe there's something special about David's house." said Taylor.
    "Well only one way to find out....let's go pay Tyra a visit." said Miranda smiling.

    To Be Continued.......

    Sorry if some of the sentences didn't make sense I been having an off day and I was tired so I hope everything came out okay......
     
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    Chapter 9-Confrontation

    The band traveled into the future once again to confront Tyra and get answers as to why they are training at David's house. They arrived in front of the house, they were all cautious and were on guard, they were ready for a fight. Brandon and Joseph did some recon on the house and even searched the inside, but couldn't find the Tyras anywhere.

    "Where could they be?" asked Taylor.
    "I have no clue, Joseph and I been in David's house before and this is all he has." said Brandon.
    "Wait, you remember how his grandfather said that we can't go past the bathroom, that it was off limits?" asked Joseph.
    "Yeah I sure do, we should check there. Nice work Joseph." said Brandon.
    "No problem, I'm just awesome." said Joseph.

    The band began looking through new rooms and found nothing until Hollie stumbled upon the bedroom that had lots of technology. Everyone searched the room and couldn't find much.

    "I can't find anything....maybe we should check somewhere else." said Taylor.
    "Maybe we might find an answer if we search outside." said Andy.
    "I agree with Andy." said Miranda.
    "Yeah let's go." said Lucus.

    They headed outside and kept searching around David's house, they couldn't find anything so they were ready to give up, but then.....

    "Hey wait a minute....I remember that David always used to stay in his dad's house, he says he has so much fun there, maybe, just maybe there's a clue in that house." said Brandon.
    "Wait isn't this his house?" asked Hollie.
    "No it's his grandparents' house, we're gonna head to his real house." said Joseph.

    The band headed towards David's real house and took note of all of the destruction on the way. Buildings were leveled, destroyed, split in half, old, broken down. Trees were dying, or dead, or burnt. The roads were still the same, some were destroyed a little bit but not much like the other objects around the city. The future was very dark, everything was annihilated, even the people were missing, either they were killed, or they're hiding somewhere until it was safe to come out.

    "Man what happened here?" asked Taylor.
    "I think we're gonna find out soon." said Brandon.
    "There's David's house." said Joseph.
    "Wow....it looks......destroyed....." said Miranda.
    "Yeah....let's try to continue our search." said Hollie.

    They ventured inside the house and noticed how destroyed everything was, they went through the rooms and found nothing, then that's when they came across something weird in David's dad's room, they noticed he had a room hidden within the closet, they investigated it, and discovered something amazing.

    "David's dad has powers too!?" said Taylor astonished.
    "Wow I don't believe it." said Brandon.
    "So wait did David inherit those powers from his dad?" asked Holden.
    "It has to be." said Chris.
    "No wonder why David's so strong, his dad has like all of our powers." said Hanna.
    "Wait what's this right here?" asked Miranda. She picked up the piece of paper.
    "It looks like a note." said Taylor.
    Miranda began reading the letter....."Dear Son, if you happen to come across this note, then it's time you learned about your heritage and your purpose in this life. I have powers, powers that no other man should wield, I can use the Sharingan, just as you will or already have, I have the Byakugan which allows me to visualize my surroundings and determine an enemy's strength, I have many abilities but I can't tell you them all in this note, you'll just have to seek them out. To seek them out, you must first understand your limitations, second you must understand your emotions and never let them cloud your judgment, but also allow them to be your guide. Third.....never give your heart to evil, always remember to have friends by your side, always believe in yourself, believe in your friends, and if you happen to come across a girl you're in love with, cherish her life and protect her, do it because you love her and as a result, you'll become much stronger because you want to protect those you love, that's the source of your power......Love. So remember son.....I'm always here for you and always will be there for you when you need me the most.....I love you son. Love, Your Father, David." said Miranda smiling at the end.
    "Awwwwwwwwwwww!" said all the girls.
    "Damn....his dad has lots of wisdom, I see where David gets it from now." said Joseph.
    "Alright well let's continue figuring out where Tyra is." said Andy.
    "We have to ask her some questions about this time." said Cody.
    "You called for me?" said Tyra.
    "Yes we did, what's up with this place, this time?" asked Taylor.
    "I'll explain what happened." said Future Tyra. "It all started when Miranda confessed her love for Dave, Dave became happy but then angry when Miranda was killed, yes, Miranda, you were supposed to die but lived.....so as a result I had to take other messages to killing you, but I realize there's no point anymore." said Future Tyra.
    "Why's that?" asked Miranda.
    "Well....let's just say when David gets angry enough, his own dark powers awaken, that's why his dad told him to always stay pure because he knew what David would be capable of when his true powers are awakened, so after Miranda died....David broke into a rage and transformed into his Dark Form and began destroying everything in sight, he even wiped out the whole band, and when he was doing it, he smiled. Then when he was finished, I managed to control his actions and made him get a hold of himself....then he sparred me and went off to destroy the city, that's when his family jumped in but they proved powerless against David's new power. David and his dad were then locked in an epic battle, Father against Son, his dad attempted to seal his dark powers but couldn't do it, David became too strong, so David's dad died in the battle against his son. Then, David realized what he did and gained control of himself, and then he cleansed the darkness within him, and then he saw the destruction and carnage he caused and left the city, as of right now he's alive but I don't know where he is. But through that carnage....he helped me create an army." said Future Tyra.
    "What kind of army?" asked Taylor.
    The Tyras began laughing. "Let's just say.....you don't wanna get bitten by our soldiers." said Tyra.
    "Oh s***.....guys she's got zombies." said Brandon.
    "Right now.....it's about time for their lunch." said Future Tyra.

    Seconds later.....zombies began rising from the ground outside of David's house and some began to spawn inside the house. Everyone looked around at all the zombies that were in the house and outside the house.

    "Alright....this is gonna be difficult.....and fun at the same time." said Joseph.
    "I know you guys won't get hit, but you WILL experience fatigue." said Future Tyra laughing.
    "Bring it on, we'll stop these zombies!" said Brandon.

    Everyone broke out into madness and began slaughtering zombies in mere seconds! Miranda, Brandon, Taylor, and Cody were a team and began unleashing combos on the zombies, Joseph, Lucus, Hollie, Chris, and Holden were a team and were using defensive maneuvers against the zombies, the percussion used the power of Sound to cause the zombies to catch a seizure and were exploding upon the noise! The rest of the band used their Ki to hold off the zombies. An hour passed.....they were still fighting the zombies, some of the teams started to show fatigue.

    "My god how many of them are there?" asked Brandon.
    "I don't know we killed like thousands of these things but they just keep coming." said Miranda.
    "That's what she said!" said Cody as he was killing zombies.
    "Not the time Cody." said Taylor stabbing 10 zombies with a Crystal Spear.
    "THIS IS MADNESS!" screamed Brandon.
    "THIS. IS. BAND!" screamed Lucus.
    "At least we're enjoying ourselves before we die." said Cody.
    "We really need some help." said Miranda.
    "I wish David was here, he would help us." said Taylor.

    Just then, a lighting bolt went through 50 zombies and began guiding itself threw many zombies. Then the bolt stopped and it was a man standing on top of the house. He was wearing a black cloak just like Future Tyra, he showed his Sharingan and began destroying more zombies. He used Chidori and destroyed 20 zombies with one burst, then he formed a Rasengan in his other hand and shot it from his hand and destroyed 50 zombies with one burst as well. Then he jumped into the air and did a ridiculously fast hand sign and used a Fire Style Jutsu and disinigrated 200 zombies! Then he unleashed his Ki and started to power up and his aura turned from white to red and began killing the remaining zombies with lighting fast speed and power!

    "Alright....who is that guy?" asked Brandon.
    "No way.....there's no way that's him!" said
    Future Tyra.
    "Who is he?" asked Miranda.
    "Tyra we have to leave now!" said Future Tyra.
    "Alright." said Tyra. Then they both left.

    All the zombies were destroyed, they were no longer spawning.

    "I see....whenever Future Tyra leaves is when the zombies stop spawning....interesting." said Joseph.
    "Yeah but we need to know who that guy is." said Taylor.
    The Stranger jumped down and walked towards the band members. "Well what do you know.....never thought I'd see young versions of you guys." said the stranger. He lifted his hood so they could see his face. Everyone was shocked to see who it was that saved them!

    To Be Continued.......

    BTW....I didn't describe any of the characters now that I'm thinking about it lol so....

    David-David is a tall young man who wears blue jeans and normally a blue, red, or black shirt. He's very nice, has lots of wisdom, is strong, and can view the world in his own image.
    Brandon-Brandon is a young man just as tall as David so you could say they're the tallest since they're like 6'4. Brandon is smart(sometimes), bold, crazy, and has some wisdom himself, he's a very good guy, but he doesn't take anything for granted, and he does get loud every now and then.
    Joseph-Joseph is a young man who is very tactical for his age, he and Miranda are definitely the smartest people in the band. Joseph is somewhat strong but he can quickly turn the tide in a battle, he has only lost to one person, his girlfriend. He is 6'1 tall, not far from Brandon and David.
    Miranda-Miranda is a young woman who is super nice, she's not at as nice as David but nonetheless....she's nice, she's courageous, she adventurous, she's pretty, she has long black hair, blue eyes, and she's 5'8 tall. She's smart just like Joseph, not tactical like David and Joseph but she's tactical.
    Taylor-Taylor is a young beautiful Vietnamese woman who is nice but she has an attitude some times. She's definitely skillful, in fact she's probably stronger than David due to how her powers are. She can be smart when she wants to be, she doesn't like to stand out too much but likes to be funny. She's 6'0 tall and has long black hair.
    Lucus-Lucus is a very big ape-like human being, who's very strong due to his size, he's rarely nice, he'll like clown with you but he's definitely not a nice person but he knows when it's time to get down to business, he's a pretty smart black man but tends to speak "Lucinese". He's 6'0 and has small dreads in his head.
    Cody-Cody is also a black man but skinny compared to most people in the band, he's 5'7 almost as tall as Miranda and he has an afro or semi afro. He's very cocky, he loves to joke around, he can tell a good story real or fake, he loves to be involved in conflict and loves to instigate a conflict. He's a pretty cool guy though, he's not bad.
    Hollie-Hollie is a young woman who is probably the shortest in the band, she has short hair and is just as skinny as Cody, but not super skinny, no one is super skinny in the band, Hollie is the kind of girl that wants to get work done, she feels fatigue but she will work hard to make sure she's on top of things. She has an average intellect and can detect things out of place to an extent, she is pretty much an average player in the band.
    Tyra-Tyra is a young woman who has short hair and is nice, but she has had a very rough past and tends to become hardcore on everyone and lets her anger and depression get to her, but as long as her friends are around, she'll be fine. She is 5'9 tall.
    Chris-Chris is a young man who has a pretty positive attitude for the most part, he's a pretty nice guy, loves to be around his friends and is always ready for action. He's 5'7.
    Ricky-Ricky is a skinny Asian boy......that's it. lol
    Vaughn-Vaughn is a 170 pound kind of guy or 200 it's hard to tell but he's not overweight, he's an all around nice guy but he can be VERY dramatic at times, but nonetheless he's an alright guy.
    Ben-Ben is an awesome russian guy but doesnt have the accent....but he's still pretty cool, he's 5'8.
    Holden-Holden is an awesome guy, he likes to be a thug sometimes and he's white but of course everyone in the band tries to be black sometimes. He looks up to David, Brandon, Joseph, Cody, Lucus, and Horace because they're black and are cool people because they don't act it. Holden is 5'9 and is a smart guy.
    Horace-Horace is an afro looking black guy who loves to start fights and he's a very loud person. He is a cool guy but really he just enjoys causing a conflict. He's 6'0 and is very.....very....loud.
    Eric-Eric is also a black guy and he starts a conflict with Mr.T for fun sometimes, he's a player, he loves to pick up women and even when he fails he keeps trying, he's a cool guy once in awhile. He's 5'8.
    Hanna-Hanna is a young woman who is skinny like Cody and has blonde hair and has brown eyes. She's 6'1 and she loves to have fun when given the chance. She is nice on certain days and is mean on certain days, kinda weird but hey all girls are weird. (No offense to any of the girls out there)
    Andrew-Andrew is an Asian who's very smart but also very short like Hollie, they're about the same height but Andrew is very loud as well, and he's crazy most of the time, and he's lazy, but he'll get things done eventually.
    Johnathan-Johnathan is a nice guy and a crazy guy, he's an average skillful person but loves playing Drums. He's 6'2.
    Travis-Travis is a young man who is nice but gets angry very easy, he can be fun to hang out with sometimes but he's not all that funny, terrible drum player though lol. He's 6'0.
    Raelon-Raelon is a young black guy who has had his share of hard times with his father, he greatly dislikes his father's teachings and wishes for a way out, he's a nice guy but don't anger the man! He's 6'0.

    Well that's about it and feel free to make them look the way you want them to look or you can stick to the description I gave you, sorry if I didn't describe some of them good enough, it was pretty much all you needed to know about them, seeing as how some of them won't get much dialogue in the story.
     
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    Chapter 10-New Allies

    "Hold on.....Joseph!?" said Brandon.
    "Yeah, I'm the future form of the Joseph you see before you." said Future Joseph.
    "Damn I became a badass!" said Joseph smiling.
    "You were already a badass, you're just more of a badass now." said F Joseph laughing.
    "Alright so you said it's good to see us young again, like what does that mean, I thought we were dead." said Taylor.
    "No, Tyra lied to you, you guys aren't dead, but I can see David hasn't come back to us which means Tyra must have succeeded when she went back into the past." said F Joseph.
    "No our David's still alive." said Miranda.
    "Which means.....our David must be alive somewhere!" said F Joseph.
    "Wait, why is that important I mean I know he's ballin but please fill us in." said Brandon.
    "Well.....our David has become very strong, in fact, he's learned all of our moves, he can copy any technique, any unique ability, and he can make it his own, and then once he uses it, he's able to keep it and train it and take it above levels but the only flaw is that he cant surpass the original bearers of the power he takes. David is by far the strongest player we have on our team, everyone else is alive but we thought David had died since he disappeared all of a sudden, then we remembered Tyra saying she was gonna annihilate us after she took down David and we knew she wasn't able to do it on her own, no one is stronger than David, but I understand how she would beat him, any one of us can beat him if we go to the past." said F Joseph.
    "So in other words....the Future David is wicked strong and Future Tyra needed him gone so went to the past and attempted to kill him but couldn't?" said Miranda.
    "Exactly." said F Joseph.
    "Damn....that's low but smart at the same time." said Brandon.
    "I thought the same thing....but the Tyra's changed, I think her past self had under went some sort of transformation earlier than our Tyra, which means Tyra is two times stronger!" said F Joseph.
    "Wait how is she stronger now?" asked Hollie.
    "She's stronger now because she can create armies by flowing 25% of her energy into any object and bring it to life, she used corpses to create a zombie army but she now knows that they won't help her since she noticed that I was able to wipe them out quickly. Which means she will definitely either make them stronger.......or......kill one of us and make us do her bidding." said F Joseph.
    "So Future Tyra has the ability to raise armies of pretty much anything she can flow her energy to?" asked Taylor.
    "Yep." said F Joseph.
    "Damn that sucks." said Andrew.
    "I'll answer more questions later on, right now we need to abandon this area now, I'll take you guys to meet the others." said F Joseph.
    "Oh wow let's go!" said Hanna.
    F Joseph stood still....."Ummmm....aren't you coming?" asked Hollie. "Where we're going is 100 miles north." said F Joseph. He walked towards them and extended his hand. "So we're gonna have to travel at an instantaneous speed." he said smiling.
    "Hold on.....instantaneous?" asked Taylor.
    "Well let's just say.....my speed over the years has gotten.....god-like. I don't have god speed but my speed is equivalent to the Yellow Flash." said F Joseph.
    "Oh I thought you was gonna say you had Instant Transmission." said Brandon.
    "No....." F Joseph said as he grabbed Brandon's hand while everyone else followed....."David has that." he said as he teleported.

    Meanwhile in a gigantic fortress........

    "So you mean to tell me that all of the future versions of the Band are still alive?" asked Tyra.
    "Yes....they are.....I'm sure of it because Joseph is still alive.....which means the others are definitely alive." said F Tyra.
    "So you got a plan?" asked Tyra.
    "Well the first plan was to kill David that way the F David wouldn't be a threat to us, but that plan failed......the second plan was to kill all of his friends so that way the Future versions would disappear......but that failed too.....so now the third plan....is for you and I to awaken our Eternal Mangekyou Sharingans." said F Tyra.
    "Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan?" asked Tyra.
    "Yes....if we awaken that power.......the attacks we use from it will not cause us any fatigue and we won't go blind since you and I are becoming blind." said F Tyra.
    "Will we gain anything else besides the loss of fatigue?" asked Tyra.
    "Yeah we also gain new powers as well, our old powers become stronger and have more effect while we also gain new abilities and an upgraded version of our Susano'o." said F Tyra.
    "How do you know all of this?" asked Tyra.
    "It's because....." said F Tyra.

    Meanwhile, The Band and F Joseph made it to the hideout. The hideout was at Miranda's house. It too just like David's houses, looked destroyed. The team headed inside and looked around at the destruction inside the house, they ventured to Miranda's room where they noticed most of it was destroyed except they noticed a door with a button prompt on the side of it. F Joseph used his energy to supply verification and the door opened! They went inside and noticed they were in an elevator! They began to descend downward to the base and noticed that it wasn't anything high tech, it was like a normal home just underground.

    "This is our hideout....in here we are safe and hidden, and we also have an Advanced Combat Training simulator, it's been greatly improved from the model you guys once used in your time." said F Joseph.
    "Oh my god this is awesome!" said Taylor.
    "I don't wanna go back to the past." said Ben.
    "I second that!" said Ricky.
    "Hey Joseph! You're back!" said a woman.
    "Oh hey Taylor yes I'm back from my recon mission with some good results and bad news." said F Joseph.
    "Wait....this is me in the future!" said Taylor smiling.
    "Wait.....is that me!? From 10 years ago!?" asked F Taylor.
    "OH MY GOD LOOK HOW SEXY I AM!" said both of them.
    "Um.....Taylor....back to the mission results....we can let them meet everyone else after I tell you what we're dealing with, and I also have good news as well." said F Joseph smiling.
    "Yeah you right so lay it on me." said F Taylor.
    "Well....I discovered these guys were fighting with the Tyra and the past version of Tyra, which is their Tyra. It seems that our Tyra has become two times stronger which is the bad news, we're now dealing with armies, armies of zombies, and trust me she can make them stronger, which is probably what her and their Tyra are gonna do.....now the good news is.....their David's not dead, which means...." said F Joseph smiling.
    "Our David's alive!" screamed F Taylor.

    That's when everyone gathered around after F Taylor screamed out the news that F David was alive.

    "Alright guys calm down, let's all get acquainted with our past selfs first." said F Joseph.
    "Awesome hey guys I'm Brandon, the best of the best." said F Brandon.
    "Ma baw shut up you suck now I bet you're past double can beat you by the way guys I'm Cody, the real best of the best." said F Cody.
    "Ma baw YOU shut up I'm the best, me Lucus Williams!" said F Lucus.
    "Come on guys don't be like that in front of our past doubles besides I beat all of you guys yesterday. Hi guys I'm Miranda." said F Miranda.
    "That is true she made you guys look shame by the way past doubles I'm Hollie." said F Hollie.
    "I'm the future Ricky!" said F Ricky.
    "Hey guys I'm Hanna from the future!" said F Hanna smiling.
    "I'm Andrew from the future son with some awesome skills!" said F Andrew.
    "Shut up Andrew you suck too I can even beat you now, hey guys I'm Travis." said F Travis.
    "Why can't we all just get along! Hey I'm Johnathan." said F Johnathan.
    "Hi nice to meet you all!" said Miranda.
    "Man we became some beasts oh my god!" said Cody.
    "Yeah that may be so but I think my future self is the best." said Lucus.
    "Yeah we got to stick together dawg!" said F Lucus.
    "Nah I think me and my future goon are the best." said Cody.
    "Exactly." said F Cody.
    "Nope we win hands down." said Brandon.
    "Why not just make a match out of this?" said F Miranda.
    "Yeah all of those who want to pair up with their future selves and past selves get together right now." said Miranda.
    "Well that would be interesting....I might go for it too since David's not involved." said F Joseph laughing.
    "Wait is David that good in the future?" asked Brandon.
    "Yes." said everyone that is in the future.
    "Damn." said Cody.
    "Alright who ever's in this let's get it!" said Lucus.

    Everyone started making a team, it was Lucus VS Cody VS Brandon VS Ricky VS Joseph VS Travis VS Andrew VS Taylor VS Johnathan. Teams of two....Past and Future......an epic battle to decide who's the best....well.....second best.

    To Be Continued.........
     
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    Chapter 11-A New Warrior

    The Band and the Future Band were locked in an epic battle determining which team was the best, so far Cody's team was doing great against the other teams seeing as how they're dodging attacks and countering attacks like they're nothing. But Lucus' team weren't far behind in terms of power and strength! Surprisingly, Hollie and Johnathan's team were holding their own amazingly well, they were even defeating the other teams which left only Cody's, Lucus', Brandon's, and Taylor's team left! They all paused noticing that they were the only ones left in the battle, Hollie's team charged after Taylor's team while Brandon's team went after Cody's team! Hollie swung her fist towards Taylor who blocked it easily and attempted to counter when F Hollie came and countered her attack but only to be countered by F Taylor! Taylor then sweep kicked Hollie and then F Taylor uppercutted F Hollie and then teleported and roundhouse kicked Hollie! Hollie's team recovered and pressed on the attack until Taylor's team combined powers and trapped them both in a Crystal Prison attack! F Taylor then produced a Lightning based attack and shocked them inside to where they would become unconscious! Lucus' team went towards Brandon's and Cody's team's battle and were now locked in a three-way battle while Johnathan's team sensed Hollie's team was in trouble and rushed off to aid them! F Johnathan unleashed his Super Attack called Sound Distortion which broke through the Crystal Prison and freed Hollie's team! Johnathan then rushed to catch them and confirmed they were okay and they formed an alliance that was temporary! Johnathan and Hollie went after Taylor while F Johnathan and F Hollie went after F Taylor! Johnathan jumped up and used the attack Sound Distortion while Hollie charged after Taylor and used an attack called Phoenix Flower Jutsu which created hundreds of small flames traveling in a circular pattern which surrounded Taylor, then Johnathan's Sound Distortion attack transformed into Wind Distortion and increased the flames' damage! Taylor got engulfed in the blast and Johnathan and Hollie gave each other a hi-five! F Johnathan and F Hollie both used the Water Dragon Jutsu attack and combined them to create a Typhoon Dragon Jutsu that was made up of water and wind which swooped F Taylor off her feet and then F Johnathan used Rasengan on the dragon and F Taylor flew down with the dragon and hit the ground and exploded! Taylor then recovered and didn't have a scratch on her! She began angry and formed some seals!

    "I hope you're ready for this one because this attack will be something new for you noobs to witness! Crystal Style:Crystal Dragon Jutsu!" said Taylor.

    A giant crystal dragon spawned and began to open it's mouth! It breathed out a pink mist and Johnathan and Hollie were caught in it, they couldn't see a thing! Then they seen something afterwards, they realized they won the battle, everyone was knocked out! They jumped for joy but then they got thrown back very hard, they came to and noticed the dragon was hovering over them!

    "How did that happen?" asked Johnathan.
    "She must've used genjutsu." said Hollie.
    "Bu when?" asked Johnathan.
    "I don't know." said Hollie.
    "It was when Taylor unleashed her Crystal Dragon.....it has the ability to cause genjutsu whenever it breathes out Dragon's Mist which creates a pink mist that blinds you temporarily and traps you in a genjutsu." said F Taylor.
    "That's......awesome and unfair." said Johnathan.

    The dragon charged after Johnathan and Hollie and they were getting ready to block when suddenly it stopped! Black sand began to come out of the dragon and then it broke into pieces!

    "What the hell just happened?" asked Taylor.
    "Looks like Johnathan's going all-out now." said F Taylor.
    "Wait....you mean the future Me?" asked Johnathan.
    "Yeah, you'll soon gain the ability to manipulate sand, then in time Black Sand." said F Taylor.
    "Awesome!" said Johnathan.

    F Johnathan then appeared surrounded by Black Sand and was hovering in the air using it and charged after F Taylor who began to create a Crystal Shield to counter the sand's powers! F Hollie managed to break through the shield using her attack called Chakra Slicer which allows her to cut through and destroy any attack that uses chakra!

    "Damn I forgot about you!" said F Taylor.

    Just when she was about to get hit by the Black Sand, Taylor jumped up and created a Crystal Shield around herself and F Taylor! The shield was big and strong, almost stronger than F Taylor's which was an indication that Taylor's powers were getting greater even more! F Taylor then maximized the shield's density by using her Crystal Shield as well! F Hollie used Chakra Slicer which sliced through half of the shield, noticing this Hollie began to focus her chakra and learned how her future self was using it, which in turn allowed her to learn the secret and then used the attack herself and joined F Hollie in slashing the shield! Johnathan became angry that he was becoming useless and unlocked the power to use Sand attacks and was surprised to have unlocked it! He helped everyone attack the shield, then all of a sudden someone came out of nowhere and broke the shield and threw everyone back with pure chakra!

    "Well....I can see you guys are having fun." said the cloaked stranger.
    "That voice! David!?" said F Miranda.
    "Damn right it's me." said F David.
    "Wow now this is gonna be interesting!" said F Brandon.
    "Everybody against David!" screamed F Taylor.
    "Aww man! I just got here!" said David preparing to fight.
    "Shouldn't we help him out?" asked Miranda.
    "Yeah we should, he's strong but taking on all of them at once including you guys, he wouldn't last that long." said F Miranda.

    Everyone went after F David and then he smiled. "Miranda get back....I don't want you to get caught in the attack." said F David. "Alright I'll stay back." said F Miranda as she grabbed Miranda to hold her back. F David closed his eyes and then his right eye opened and revealed a Mangekyou Sharingan but it was different though.

    "No way! Is that.....the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan?" asked F Miranda.
    "Wait what?" asked Miranda.
    "Ultimate Tuskiyomi......" said F David.

    The Sharingan's aura bounced off of F David's right eye and then everyone began to glow red and then stopped! They began to become frozen and couldn't move, then they began to experience pain somehow!

    "What is this jutsu he's using on them, it can't be Tuskiyomi because you can only ensnare one person with it not multiple people!" said F Miranda.

    F David ended the jutsu and everyone sat down on the ground and were relieved that they weren't dead.

    "Guys....you ok?" asked F David.
    "Yeah but what happened? Like we were going after you and then we stopped and felt pain but you clearly stood still and then next thing you know you're charging after us with Kaioken and then we're on the ground afterwards, but what happened exactly?" asked F Taylor.
    "What you experienced was Ultimate Tsukiyomi, it allows me to attack multiple people with Tsukiyomi and also allows me to bend reality and the dream world together.....in other words, I can make reality the dream world which is why you stayed in one place which made you believe you weren't caught in the jutsu but you were, and I used the real world as the stage and the dream world as the attacks, so that Kaioken attack that came after you all was a mere clone." said F David.
    "So you can trap you're enemy in a Tsukiyomi and make it to where we wouldn't even know we're in it?" asked F Brandon.
    "Yes." said F David.
    "Damn he became stronger!" said F Cody.
    "But how did he get stronger is what I wanna know." said F Miranda.
    "Well....let's just say it has something to do with my past version." said F David smiling.
    "Wait what do you mean?" asked Miranda.
    "Well....when someone from the future travels into the past in hopes to change events, they trigger a change that will affect the people not the environment, so when Tyra went into the past to kill me before I became strong, my past self became two times stronger, which made him become weaker because of the new powers he awakened, then that's when his dad showed up in his dream, they trained together and that's when David himself-" said F David.
    "Learned the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan!" said Miranda.
    "Exactly....thus allowing time to go by and he became stronger, which in turn allows me to become stronger." said F David.
    "Wow that's amazing....so where's David now?" asked Miranda.
    "He's on his way here, he just stopped by his dad's grave to talk to him and stuff you know." said F David.
    "I understand." said Miranda.
    "But anyway....it's amazing that the past version of the band has gotten stronger, in fact....they're just as strong as we were 4 years ago." said F David.
    "You mean when we...." said F Brandon.
    ""Don't spoil anything Brandon!" said F Taylor.
    "Damn boy ugh you suck so much I can't take you nowhere!" said F Cody.
    "Be quiet son listen to you're daddy." said Brandon.
    "Ohhhhhhhhhhh ownage son!" said F Brandon.
    "Brandon....what you doing wrong right now?" asked Cody.
    "I'm yelling at you.....I'm sorry Cody." said Brandon.
    "Alright." said Cody.
    "Oh you guys are still in that phase of the bet.....hmmmm....interesting." said F Brandon.
    "Wait what do you mean "interesting"?" asked Cody.
    "Nothing." said F Brandon.
    "I think you guys suck, you both can't compare to me!" said Lucus.
    "You're future self said the same thing....now me and Cody can beat him with ease." said F Brandon.
    "But I'm still the best out of ya'll three." said F Joseph.
    "Awwwww shut up you weren't even in the battle!" said F Cody.
    "Actually I was....watch......in fact I won." said F Joseph.
    "What does he mean........OH S*** I FORGOT ABOUT THAT!" screamed F David.

    Just then the entire field became blue and started spinning around and then formed a giant rasengan that engulfed everyone! Then before it was gonna explode, F Miranda jumped up and went into the middle of it and started glowing! She then awoken the Sharingan and all of a sudden her hair turned gold and she started spinning rapidly and condensed the rasengan until there was nothing left of it!

    "What, in the hell, just happened?" asked F Lucus.
    "Miranda.....did you just?" asked F David smiling.
    "Yeah.....I been waiting for Joseph to use that move so I can use this move to counter it." said F Miranda.
    "Wait why is she glowing like.....like.....a SUPER SAIYAN!?" asked Brandon.
    "That's because she's learned how to become a Super Saiyan and use the Sharingan at the same time just like me." said F David.
    "Wait you guys are BOTH Super Saiyans?" asked Cody.
    "Yeah we are and you're future self and Joseph and Brandon and Taylor here can also become Super Saiyans....it's just that Miranda was unexpected to become a Super Saiyan.......which means......" said F David as he looked at the past Miranda.
    "You mean.....our Miranda can become a Super Saiyan?" asked Taylor.
    "Actually.....Taylor, Miranda, Joseph, Cody, Brandon, and Lucus....you guys can all become Super Saiyans, it's just that you guys haven't discovered it yet but you will soon seeing as how Miranda couldn't use it before until now which means it will happen soon." said F David.

    So there's some people in the band that can become Super Saiyans, which is a transformation that grants the user 100 times as much power than their normal form, which means their speed, power, strength, agility, reflexes, senses, and attacks and jutsus are all tripled!

    To Be Continued..........(Yes I'm bringing Dragon Ball Z into this lol and this is purely fan made so it can be made however I see it, so DBZ and Naruto collide! Well DBZ will become dominant pretty soon....maybe after a few chapters.)
     
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    Chapter 12-Super Saiyan Training

    F David and F Miranda decided to train the people who can become a Super Saiyan. F David knew it would be hard to accomplish since it took him a long time before he finally awoken his powers, but of course he never knew about them so it just came out naturally, but he knows that you have to be pushed to the limit and have a pure heart in order to achieve the Super Saiyan Transformation!

    "Alright guys, this training may be the toughest training you've had yet, it will be harder than the training we each had to undergo to control our Ki, and this training will utilize the Ki controlling skills we have acquired." said F David.
    "David and I will test that by fighting all of you all at once, which means it's 2 against the 50 of you, well.....mainly those that can become a Super Saiyan but yeah, pretty much all of you should just fight so that way you can improve you're newfound abilities, yes that means the past versions will fight as well, so tag up with two or three, or all of you just work together." said F Miranda.
    "So in other words, you won't stand a chance against us if you try to lone wolf with your team, just attack together and make up combos or something." said F David.

    Everyone became battle ready and F David and F Miranda became Super Saiyans and began to dash towards the band with lightning speed! F David went after the strong half of the band while F Miranda went after the weaker half of the band for practice. F Miranda began to demolish the half band with flurries of punches and kicks and brought them all down to their knees, then she flew into the air and began to release some energy and started glowing and destroyed the surface hitting everyone in the process and followed up with a 8 Trigrams Palm Rotation! F David dashed towards the stronger half of the band and began to shoot thousands of energy blasts! The half of the band all dodged perfectly and then they fired ki blasts as a counter, then F David created a Ki Barrier and then dived towards them and destroyed the surface and then used Instant Transmission and attacked all of them instantly!

    "Alright this is getting dull....there's no way we can hit him he's moving too fast!" said Taylor.
    "He's moving fast but we can still hit him, he's bound to drop his guard at one point!" said F Taylor.
    "Let's try dodging only for the time being until we can figure out a strategy!" said F Cody.

    F David flew towards them and started to throw fast punches and they dodged them all, then he shot a flurry of ki blasts at them which they managed to dodge as well!

    "Not bad.....I can feel you guys getting closer." said F David smiling. "Guess I need to kick up a notch." he said smiling.

    F Miranda started using the Pursuit Attack which is teleporting rapidly and hitting her opponents and then repeating it simultaneously until the weaker half of the band couldn't take it anymore!

    "Seems like you guys need some help!" said David teleporting.
    "Omg it's David!" said Hollie.
    "David help us!" said Jonathan.
    "You really think you'll be that much help?" asked F Miranda smiling.
    "I don't know." said David as he already behind her. "You tell me."
    "What!? His speed's......almost the same as!" she looked at F David.
    "Well....he did tell you I was being trained right? That's right....I seen him and he did train me too.....so now I'm stronger than ever before!" said David smiling.

    (Feel free to add some battle music of your choice, I'll start adding this whenever it's gonna be a major battle, simple battles I'll give you a simple notification.)

    David and F Miranda began to stare each other down in the sky, none of them were making a move, they both activated their Sharingans and right when David activated his, a clone jumped out in front of F Miranda holding a Rasengan ready to attack her! F Miranda then grabbed the clone and then threw him into David who already was gone from her sight and was about to hit her from behind when she used the Vanishing technique and went behind David and then he used it too and they just kept doing it over and over again! F Miranda then used Chidori and then David used a clone and countered with Rasengan! They were locked in a Jutsu Clash and were both evenly matched, David then increase the size of the Rasengan while F Miranda increased the power of the Chidori, then F Miranda suddenly got hit from behind while David also took a hit too! It was David shooting a ki blast at F Miranda!

    "What the? How did you do that?" asked F Miranda.
    "Well the person you were fighting was a clone, and I hid in the back charging a ki blast at the right moment and then fired it at you." said David smiling.
    "That's ingenius!" said F Miranda.
    "Nah it's just a tactic I been learning for awhile." said David.
    "(Amazing.....how did he learn how to do the Afterimage technique so quickly?)" asked F Miranda thinking.
    "Now let's continue." said David charging after her.

    David and F Miranda clashed and were locked in a Blow Exchange, they were fighting extremely fast and were too fast for the weaker half of the band to see! They were traveling all over the field just fighting and blasting each other, they were becoming even, well David was starting to become even with F Miranda! David then kicked F Miranda threw a tree and teleported and kicked her threw another tree and then teleported again and started doing a punching combo and then punched her in the stomach! F Miranda held her stomach and then David lifted his hand and created a blast that completely engulfed her and then she crashed into the boulders! F David then looked back to see what was going on, he noticed David was back and decided to head over there to find out what was going on. F Miranda then bursted out in Super Saiyan auras flaring around her and she began to glow completely gold and awoken her Mangekyou Sharingan! David awoken his Mangekyou as well and was ready to test out it's new abilities! F Miranda used Amaterasu and David countered it with a space time ninjutsu from his Mangekyou! They both charged after each other and then F Miranda stopped when she seen F David coming this way!

    "Hey Miranda....how u holding up?" asked F David.
    "I'm doing fine now." said F Miranda.
    "You've definitely gotten stronger David.....now it's time we really test it out, you'll fight me now." said F David.
    "Good....bring it!" said David.

    The two David's charged their Ki's and both used the Kaioken Technique and began flying around the field attacking each other instantly! F Miranda went fight the rest of the band with her new powers and began to help them realize their powers and eventually the group that could awaken their powers finally awakened them! Then they watched as David and F David battled it out! They were both on par with each other in speed and power and weren't letting up for a second! 5 minutes went by as they kept fighting and unleashed combos that were so destructive that the others could feel and see it!

    "Wow....you're speed and power have tripled since the last time we sparred together....I'm impressed!" said F David smiling.
    "Well it took a little bit of time to get the hang of these new powers but I can always manage." said David smiling.
    "Well....let's just see how long you can manage." said F David as he transformed into a Super Saiyan.
    "I can fight a Super Saiyan, you and Future Miranda have the same abilities and powers almost, you're stronger but I don't think it'll be a problem lasting long against you." said David.
    F David laughed. "Who said anything about me using Super Saiyan? I'm gonna take it a level beyond that!" said F David smiling.
    "Wait....a level beyond?" asked David.
    "Yes. Super Saiyan 2." said F David as he began to gather energy.

    F David started to glow with intense golden aura and his body started to give off a lightning aura that surrounded him!

    "This.....is Super Saiyan 2!" said F David smiling.
    "I see.....that's awesome....." David started to laugh. "Now...let's see what I can really do with this form."

    David started to gather Ki and the air started to shift! His hair began to stand up and started turning Gold and Black consecutively, then the rocks from the ground started to float and then medium sized rocks broke into several small rocks!

    "No way....he's a Super Saiyan!" said F Taylor.
    "So....are you ready to see who's Super Saiyan powers are stronger?" asked David smiling in his new Super Saiyan form.

    To Be Continued.......

    Next Time on Naruto:Recruitment.......David and F David battle it out in their new Super Saiyan forms while F Tyra starts to train Tyra in the art of elements and teaches her how to unlock her Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan just as she did! Meanwhile after David and F David had their battle, the others started to sense some energies from all over Haven City(yes I'm just gonna call it Haven City since it sounds ballin, gotta love Jak and Daxter) and decided to go investigating when they come across a man who's body was glowing with a blue cloak and was wreaking havoc over the city! Who could this man be and why is he doing what he's doing? Find out next time in Naruto:Recruitment......Chapter 13-The Unsolved Grudge!

    F David:I knew you would try to get revenge sooner or later.

    Sorry for the short chapter I started kinda late but I'll be sure to make a long chapter on the next update!
     
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    Chapter 13-An Old Friend

    David and F David were fighting for 10 minutes straight! They were showing signs of fatigue and their movements became slow.

    "C'mon guys just call it a draw." said F Miranda.
    "Yeah you guys are on par with each other." said Hollie.
    "I suppose you guys think we're on par, but we're not." said David.
    "Huh?" said F David.
    "I know about that little stunt you pulled on everyone while they were having their battle royale, I was there watching the whole thing." said David.
    "So you know about the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan." said F David.
    "Yes and you're wrong, I didn't acquire it through my dad's training, but soon I will acquire it, I don't know how I'll do it but I'll get it somehow." said David.
    "Good....but yes I was holding back, apparently you're strong enough to battle me in my Super Saiyan 2 form, I'm very impressed, but I can create an even powerful body using Super Saiyan 2.....meaning I could've gained all my strength, speed, and powers back to the maximum." said F David smiling.
    "Which means I would've lost." said David.
    "Yes....but for now let's call it a draw." said F David.
    "That would be best guys, I just checked on the city's surveillance and discovered a high power level attacking the outskirts of Haven City!" said F Taylor.
    "The outskirts huh?" said F David.
    "We're going right?" asked F Miranda.
    "I'll go." said F David.
    "Not by yourself you just finished two battles, you need to take someone with you just in case." said F Taylor.
    "Alright....I'll take Taylor and Brandon." said F David.
    "The rest of you just stay here and relax and get to know each other and bond and all that good stuff." said F David.
    "Yes Sir!" said Hollie.

    F David smiled and then he and F Taylor and F Brandon fled the scene in pursuit of the high power level person.

    "You think they'll be ok?" asked Taylor.
    "Don't worry, as long as Taylor's there, they'll be fine." said F Cody.
    "Why's that?" asked Cody.
    "Well it's because Taylor has the ability to heal comrades and replenish their energy to keep on fighting, and the cool part is she can do it from a distance and heal her patient in 5 seconds!" said F Cody.
    "That's awesome!" said Miranda.
    "It is isn't?" said F Miranda.
    "Can anyone else do that?" asked Taylor.
    "Yes, in fact, Miranda here can as well as myself, Hanna can too, so can Brandt, oh and also Ricky." said F Cody.
    "So far Taylor's the most skilled with it because of her Crystal abilities, she's learned how to use Nature and Shape Manipulation so well that it allowed her to tap into hidden abilities!" said F Miranda.
    "That sounds amazing!" said Hollie.
    "That it is Hollie." said F Hollie.
    "Say you guys wanna learn a few techniques from us so that way you can learn how to survive better?" asked F Cody.
    "That'd be great let's do it." said Lucus.
    "I second that." said Cody.
    "Alright then, let's do it!" said F Miranda.

    Everyone started walking into the base when F Miranda stopped to notice that David was still outside. He was staring up at the sky lost in thought.

    "Hey David, what's wrong?" asked F Miranda.
    "Tell me....will I face many challenges ahead of me? Will I be able to protect my friends?" asked David as he still stared at the sky.
    "Well, I can't reveal too much to you because that could all change instantly, just as how we got stronger, it was because of Tyra, and it was because we helped you guys, we don't mind it but we feel that it's best if we don't reveal too much to you." said F Miranda.
    "I understand." said David.
    "That' good." said F Miranda.
    "Well, I'll be out here if you need me, I'm gonna meditate for awhile and focus my powers." said David.
    "Sure thing." said F Miranda as she started for the door.

    She exited through the door and went to join the others in Training. David stood outside and then got onto the ground and began to meditate, he closed his mind and body towards the outside world and began to enter through the inside of his abilities and began to train himself on how to control his Ki and his Chakra at the same time. Meanwhile, F David, F Taylor, and F Brandon landed in the outskirts of Haven City, which was half destroyed! The buildings weren't completely destroyed, matter fact not much was destroyed for some reason.

    "This is weird, you'd think a high power leveled person would do more damage." said F Taylor.
    "Maybe he was holding back, he probably wants us to come here and confront him." said F Brandon.
    "I think you're right, Brandon." said F David.
    "Still....we gotta find this guy." said F Taylor.

    They began searching and searching until F David felt some energy coming towards them! "You two, heads up, someone's coming!" F David whispered. They began feeling out the energy coming for them, it came closer and closer, until it dashed towards F Taylor who dodged the blast!

    "Woah what was that?" asked F Taylor.
    "I don't know!" said F Brandon.
    F Taylor seen a blast coming from behind Brandon! "Brandon behind you!" she screamed.
    "Crap!" said F Brandon as he dodged.
    F David used his Sharingan to pinpoint the attacker's position, he searched and searched and then found him! "I found him, everyone use you're senses and track his movements!" he said going after the enemy. F David created an energy disc in his hand! "Destructo Disc!" He said as he threw it at a building. The disc cut through the entire building which flushed the enemy out and he went after F David. F David was ready for him and they began to exchange blows on each other, they were completely even as they couldn't land a punch on each other they just kept going at it while F Taylor and F Brandon watched the battle, they took note of the enemy's attire and fighting style and realized he fights like F David almost! F David and the enemy both stopped and descended to the ground.

    "You're pretty good, but tell me, why are you attacking this place, and why not destroy it?" asked F David.
    The enemy looked F David and said...."I'm doing because I needed to bring you out of hiding."
    "Bring me...out of hiding?" said F David.
    "Yes, I've been waiting to settle the score with you David." said the enemy. He wore black torn up jeans with a red shirt that was slightly torn, his hair was blond and was clean cut, his arms were buffed, he had purple gloves on his hands that were showing his knuckles(In other words he looks like Vegeta from GT lol).
    "But...who are you?" asked F David.
    "I'll let you figure that out, you'll know once you see my power." said the enemy as he charged towards F David.

    F David readied himself when F Brandon stepped in and kicked the enemy towards a building! F Taylor then unleashed a barrage of crystal like spears towards the destroyed building completely destroying it! The enemy then jumped out from the smoke and began charging after F Brandon and F Taylor who charged after him and started to exchange blows! The enemy became overwhelmed but then started to bounce back quickly, F David started to notice his energy was rising and was moving much faster than before! The enemy's body began to take on a Crystal Blue Aura and he punched F Brandon and kicked F Taylor instantly! They both flew back and then recovered on the ground, then they noticed the enemy was glowing but had a different and unusual aura, it was like the lightning aura but different, his energy covered his body almost like some sort of cloak. F David studied him closely.

    "What kind of ability is that?" asked F Brandon.
    "I don't know I've never seen anything like it." said F Taylor.
    "It's weird though, we had him on the run but then suddenly he just got two times stronger and attacked us like it was nothing!" said F Brandon.
    "David what do you think?" asked F Taylor.
    "I've seen this before....but where?" said F David.
    "Wait, you seen this before?" said F Brandon.
    "Yeah, but I can't remember who has that ability to use that, sadly I don't know what it was called." said F David.
    "It's called Armor's Ki, it allows me to wrap my body in nothing but pure Ki, which allows me to fight faster and become stronger, which means my power jumps past three levels!" said the enemy smiling.
    "No way!" said F Brandon and F Taylor.
    "Let me guess, you also have the power to jump it even more because that Armor's Ki has the ability to transform correct?" said F David.
    "Exactly, so you do remember now." said the enemy.
    "I never would've thought you and I would be able to fight again, but I did know you would try to get revenge sooner or later, Eric." said F David.
    "Wait this is Eric!?" said F Brandon.
    "Yes...that's Eric." said F David.
    "Oh my god he's become so strong!" said F Taylor.
    "I know, but it was only a matter of time that this would happen and that he would seek me out." said F David.
    "Wait why's he after you?" asked F Taylor.
    "Remember how Tyra and I dated? Well....turns out I found out that those two were still dating which is why I broke up with Tyra, which was also the day before Miranda got wounded by the F Tyra and also the day I awoken my Mangekyou." said F David.
    "Yes, you remember it exactly." said Eric.
    "But why is he after you exactly I mean you didn't know they were still dating." said F Brandon.
    "I don't know...but I'm gonna give him what he wants." said F David.
    "You shouldn't have to do this Eric, he didn't know-" said F Taylor.
    "Shut up! You don't know nothing about how I felt when Tyra and him were together like that!" said Eric angrily.
    "But she went to him she threw you aside!" said F Brandon.
    "Enough....I'm gonna give him what he wants.....so Eric....let's go." said F David.
    "Good, glad to see that you're accepting your fate." said Eric.
    "I'm sorry but you must have mistaken me for someone else if you think I'm just gonna calmly accept punishment I don't deserve." said F David.
    "No you do deserve it!" said Eric.
    "Bring it then." said F David.

    Meanwhile back at the base everyone was training hard and were learning some new techniques and fighting styles! Miranda and F Miranda were done with the training and Miranda decided to go check on David. F Miranda started smiling as she walked away. "Ahhh those were days, whenever David and I used to be apart from each other, we were always thinking of one another, but now we're even closer than before, come back soon baby." said F Miranda.

    Back at the fight, F David and Eric were exchanging blows and energy blasts and were each dodging each other's attacks! Eric pressed on the attack as David was using Afterimage to dodge all of the attacks, he smiled which caused Eric to get angry and he started shooting bigger energy blasts! "You shouldn't let you're hate overcome you." F David said as he kept dodging. "Shut up!" said Eric as he shot more and more ki blasts. David stood on top of a building and waited for Eric to come up and then he jumped down and while gliding to the ground he turned back and shot a Chidori Spear that bounced off of Eric's Armor Ki! "Hmmmm not bad." he said as he landed on the ground perfectly. Eric laughed "You can't harm me with chakra, only Ki higher than mine can penetrate this armor!" he said. Eric charged after David who was getting ready to use a Rasengan and then stopped! He decided to dodge Eric's attack and then used his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan and used Ultimate Tsukiyomi! Eric became trapped in it but then broke threw it in less than 5 seconds and went after David! "Damn that's a strong technique he's got there, but let's see if this attack doesn't work on him." he said as he smiled.
    They both stood on the ground, neither of them making a move, the air around them shifted, David closed his left eye, "Dodge this one.....Ultimate Amaterasu!" he said as he opened his left eye! Black Flames shot from David' eye and quickly went towards Eric who dodged the flames sensing it's destructive power! "There I dodged it!" he said. David kept focusing on him and then the flames started to travel upward which Eric noticed and started to travel along the buildings, but it was no use the flames were getting faster and faster and were tracking him!

    "Are you seeing this Taylor?" asked F Brandon.
    "Yeah." said F Taylor. The flames kept going after Eric and then he turned attempted to block them and then the flames circled around him and enveloped him in a ball! "What the hell is this?" Eric asked. David smilied. "This attack is known as Ultimate Amaterasu, but it's ultimate because of one ability, it can trap you inside a ball that only I can control, and it's indestructible, you could say it's my ultimate weapon but it's not." said F David.

    "Wait so you can trap you're opponents in a ball made out of Amaterasu?" asked F Taylor.
    "Yeah, I can." said F David.
    "Wait, how come it's not your ultimate weapon?" asked F Brandon.
    "Because....I have a technique far greater than this, and I can use it anytime I want, but I'm only gonna use it when I have no other options, it has one weakness and it can't be overcome, it can be extended but cannot be overcome." said F David.
    "You ******* let me out of here now!" said Eric.
    "Nooooo I'm afraid not Eric." said F David smiling.
    "I'll get you for this!" said Eric.

    Then all of a sudden a light started to envelope inside the ball and then Eric got sucked into it!

    "Whoa you just disinigrated him!" said F Brandon.
    "No I didn't do that, he was teleported!" said F David.
    "What how?" asked F Taylor.
    "I think Tyra had something to do with that, I noticed that chakra pattern, it was her." said F David.
    "That evil son of a-" started F Brandon.
    "BRANDON!" No profanity!" said F Taylor smiling.
    "I'm sorry it's just she makes me so mad!" said F Brandon.
    "Yeah she makes me mad too!" said F Taylor.
    "Well....I guess we should get back to the base, we're finished here." said F David as his Sharingan reverted back to normal.
    "Yeah let's go back!" said F Taylor. With that they went back to the base.

    Meanwhile back at the band room.....

    "So this is how it feels to have so much power." said Tyra.
    "It's amazing isn't it?" said F Tyra.
    "Yes, it sure is." said Tyra.
    "Tyra, would you like to see Eric?" asked F Tyra.
    "What? You found Eric?" asked Tyra.
    "Yes, in fact he's here right now." said F Tyra smiling.
    "Wait, you found the future Eric as well?" asked Tyra.
    "Yes....which means we have two powerful new allies.....and we each have a boyfriend too." said F Tyra smiling.
    "I like those odds." said Tyra laughing.

    To Be Continued...........

    Alright this chapter seemed pretty long and I'm happy with it and I'm pretty sick today so I probably messed up at some parts but hopefully you guys enjoyed this chapter!
     
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    Chapter 14-Tyra Vs The Z-Warriors(I mean hey gotta call them something and this is fan fiction so)

    F David, F Taylor, and F Brandon returned to the Z-Base and told everyone else what happened in the city.

    "So afterwards Eric suddenly disappeared......and that's the whole story." said F David.
    "Wow, sounds like we missed a good battle." said F Cody.
    "It wasn't that good of a battle I mean he put up a fight but David probably could've taken him out quickly if he wanted to." said F Taylor.
    "I could have done it easily but I needed to know who he was and I needed to know his purpose." said F David.
    "Which was to kill you." said F Lucus.
    "It didn't seem that way though, his attacks weren't powerful enough to kill me, and then he didn't even become insanely furious and unleash massive powers! He seemed to be calm." said F David.

    "But why? He could've probably beaten you or at least put up more a fight if he had released a little bit of power." said F Brandon.
    "That's what I'm trying to figure out." said F David.
    "I think he had a different purpose, he probably does want to get revenge on you but it porbably wasn't the right moment to do it, maybe he planned this out." said F Miranda.
    "But why would he do it in the first place?" asked F Taylor.
    "He probably wants to see how strong David is first and then probably retreat and form a strategy to beat him." said F Jonathan.

    Everyone stopped and looked up and thought about it, then started to think even more on why Eric would do that.

    "You might be right Jonathan." said F Hollie.
    "I think he might be working with Tyra though I mean didn't you say that you felt Tyra's energy as the light enveloped Eric?" asked F Miranda.
    "Yes, I did.....and I'm thinking that he is in league with Tyra, it would make sense seeing as how she needs allies to counter us and i's natural she would get Eric, since they're still dating apparently." said F David.

    Miranda began using her Byakugan to scan the area, so did Holden, Brandon, and Ricky. They each searched the entire city for a trace of Tyra's and Eric's chakra!

    "I don't see anything in the north of the city." said Brandon.
    "Nothing in the west." said Holden.
    "Nothing in the east." said Miranda.
    "I found it!" screamed Ricky.
    "Wait what did you find?" asked F Taylor.
    "I found a McDonald's!" said Ricky smiling. Everyone else started to smile and started laughing as well. "Alright....so we have no trace of Tyra or Eric." said F David.
    "Wait.....let's try something David." said David.
    "Alright what did you have in mind?" asked F David.
    "Let's share our Sharingan's power and search for their chakra and then put together our Ki and track their energy at the same time!" said David.
    "Hmmmmmm.....I never thought of that let's go for it!" said F David.

    The two built up Chakra and Ki at the same time and when they each reached the max of their combined powers they awakened their Sharingan and began searching for Tyra's and Eric's chakra or energy! They searched all around the city using a 360 degree radius just like the Byakugan. They weren't finding anything until they saw a string of Eric's Ki! They followed it and noticed that it stopped a tall figure covered in energy!

    "That's Eric's energy!" said F David.
    "Wait.....what's that?" asked David.
    "There's two energies that belong to two of the same people!" said F David.
    "I know about the Tyra's but......how come I sense Eric's energy in both places at the same time?" asked David.
    "I think Tyra's gone into the past again and got the Eric from your timeline and brought him here, which means they're working together, which also means......" said F David.
    "That Tyra's army is gonna be very strong." said David.
    "That's right." said F David.

    "Well where are they?" asked Taylor.
    The Davids deactivated their Sharingans. "They're at the old band room inside the of the training grounds." said F David.
    "Wait their at the old band room, like the destroyed one?" asked F Brandon.
    "Yeah." said F David.
    "Well let's go and get them!" said Joseph.
    "Yeah let's go!" said Brandon.
    "We should probably think about this......we're about to go up against an army of zombies or if not......from what we've seen through the Sharingan......clones." said David.
    "Clones? Clones of what? Tyra? Eric?" asked Cody.
    "No.....clones of everyone's ancestors......meaning we're gonna be fighting those that started it all......and which also means we may see some crazy and powerful techniques." said David.
    "Hold on are you sure?" asked Brandon.
    "Yes we're sure." said F David.
    "Do we have a chance against them?" asked F Miranda.

    F David paused. David looked at him and then looked at the others. "Honestly......our chances of winning are uncertain.......it's all depending on all of our training." said David.
    "So......everyone needs to be at their best which means I'm unlocking the cage.......everyone may use their full powers to dominate out there." said F David.
    "Wait you mean we can go all-out?" asked F Cody.
    "Yep....and so will I.....we need to stop Tyra from her evil plans to dominate the city and if not.....the world!" said F David.
    "To the Z-Warriors of the past......I want you guys to pair up with your future selves and form a team of 4 okay?" said F Miranda.
    "Right." said F Lucus.
    "Everyone already knows how the teams will work and who's paired so I suggest we leave now!" said F Miranda.
    "So I'm guessing me, my past self, you, and your past self will be in one team correct?" asked F David.
    "Actually.....you and your past self will be in one team since you two are the strongest as a team, which would be good since both of you are cocky." said F Cody laughing.
    "Well that's good enough for me." said F David.
    Me too." said David smiling.
    "Alright so let's get going already!" said F Taylor.
    "YEAH LET'S WRECK SHOP THESE NOOBS!" screamed both of the Brandons.
    "Wow.....our ancestors our noobs.......which that were true." said F David laughing and exiting the base along with David.

    The Z-Warriors left the base and rushed towards the band room and confront Tyra! They were about to reach their destination, Miranda began to look at David and then started thinking to herself, then looked ahead and continued flying. The warriors then reached the band room where they noticed F Tyra, Tyra, F Eric, and Eric standing outside waiting for them! They landed.

    "Now why are you idiots here?" asked F Tyra.
    "We're here because of that army you have." said F David.
    "Oh really and what do you intend to do our army?" asked F Tyra smiling.
    "What does it look like we're going to do?' asked F David.
    F Tyra luaghed. "So you really think you are all gonna beat this army we created? This army is made up of everyone's ancestors that have great powers!" said F Tyra.

    Everyone started to get a little nervous about Tyra' army.

    "Don't get nervous guys.....I'm not afraid of our ancestors one bit." said F David.
    "Really now? Heh you must think you know exactly what you're dealing with, tell me.....did you ever tried sensing any familiar energies or chakras while finding me or at least while flying?" asked F Tyra.
    "What do you mean by that?" asked F David.
    "So......you didn't notice a familiar power at all, a power that's ridiculously strong?" asked F Tyra.

    F David became curious. David however started to step back realizing what F Tyra was talking about was true.

    "I guess you haven't felt it in a while or maybe you haven't tried to feel it but I feel it." said David.
    "Wait what do you mean?" asked F David.
    "Tell me have you ever felt our dad's power before?' asked David.
    "HUH!?" Wait.......you mean......she resurrected our dad?" asked F David.
    "That's exactly what I mean." said F Tyra smiling.
    "Now.....he'll be fighting only you two since his power is just as strong as the both of you put together!" said Tyra.

    F David and David started to get nervous while F Tyra and Tyra only laugh. The Ancestor Army started to reveal themselves and were getting ready to fight. The Z-Warriors also prepared to fight them as well. F David and David then got a hold of themselves and knew it was time to show their dad the results of their training!

    "Alright then.....Tyra and I will stay back, why don't the two of you go have some fun." said F Tyra looking at F Eric.
    "Sure thing, let's go Eric." said F Eric.

    They both jumped down from the building and got ready to fight! The Z-Warriors and the Ancestors w/the Eric's stared each other down and the Z-Warriors noticed each of their ancestors and were getting anxious to start fighting them to see how strong they've become, to see if they're just as strong as them! Then.....they all charged at the same time and started to lock themselves in blow exchanges! Everyone except the Tyra's were locked in battle, they were simply watching from the sidelines and were enjoying themselves! The Ancestors then broke into the same teams as the Z-Warriors just so that they could coordinate just like them! Hollie, Jonathan, Ricky, and Holden noticed their ancestors and began to fight them, Travis, Hanna, Andrew, and Ross noticed their ancestors and started fighting them as well, Brandt, Chris, Ben, and Kyle noticed their ancestors and started fighting them as well, Miranda, Taylor, Raelon, and Horace noticed their ancestors and started fighting them, Brandon, Cody, Lucus, and Joseph noticed their ancestors too and started fighting, David and F David stared at their father who stood before them with his Sharingan awakened!

    "Well.....let's do this, partner!" said David.
    "Yeah, let's go, partner!" said F David smiling.

    They both smiled and charged after their dad! F Hollie attacked A Hollie who used Afterimage and instantly kicked her to the ground, then Hollie tried to follow up the attack and A Hollie vanished and punched Hollie upwards and then kicked her downwards all in one second! Jonathan rushed to their aid alongside F Jonathan who used his Black Sand to defend them! Jonathan then used his Sand attacks and created the Sand Coffin, which encases a target inside a cocoon-like coffin and can destroy the victim's body! Jonathan captured A Hollie and was about to detonate when A Jonathan rushed in and freed A Hollie from the attack! Then F Jonathan used Black Sand Shower which sent waves and waves of sand towards the ancestors, then A Jonathan created a shield made out of Golden Sand!

    "What? No way he has the Golden Sand Jutsu!" said F Jonathan surprised.
    "What's the Golden Sand Jutsu?" asked Jonathan.
    "If you have the Golden Sand, you can beat the Black Sand, which means, it's indestructible and two times more powerful!" said F Jonathan.
    "No way!" said Jonathan.

    A Hollie then recovered and A Jonathan released the shield and the two pressed on the attack on Hollie and Jonathan only to be stopped by Ricky and Holden's Super Rotation that blocked their attacks and repelled them back at them! "Need some help?" said F Holden smiling. "Sure!" said F Jonathan smiling. A Holden and A Ricky appeared and they all began fighting with each other locked in a jutsu battle! Travis, Hanna, Ross, and Andrew were holding off pretty badly against their ancestors since their ancestors have proved to have more powers than them! A Hanna used Force Push which sends out a forceful wind and repels an enemy or enemies backward! The team hit a wall and then A Andrew, A Ross, and A Travis all combined chakras and unleashed Paralyzing Wave which paralyzes an enemy using sound! F Travis then released his energy and unleashed Shockwave which utilized the sounds of drums and caused a massive shock within an enemy's body! The waves hit the ancestors and they became paralyzed which gave the team time to unleashed their team attack Percussion's Symphony which creates millions of drum beats that are jammed into an enemy's head and they become insane! A Andrew managed to recover quickly and managed to trap the sound using Mute which can trap sound type attacks and the user can increase his power just by absorbing it! A Andrew absorbed the sound and got three times stronger and began to float into the air! He started to form a blast made out of pure sound and wind and was preparing to shoot it! P Ross and P Andrew then looked at each other and then nodded and proceeded with using Crash which creates a giant cymbal crash sound that disturbs the enemy's attack and it backfires on them! A Andrew's attack exploded and engulfed him! The smoke cleared and there was no sign of A Andrew, he was defeated! "Nice we beat him, now 3 more to go!" said P Ross.

    David and F David stared at their father. "Wait a minute, we can't fight our ancestor too?" asked David.
    "Huh?" asked F Tyra.
    "I was wondering why our ancestor isn't here!" said David.
    "Well.....we all combined powers to control the ancestors whose powers were weaker than our combined powers, we then gather other ancestor's abilities and transferred them into the ancestor that had the most power, however, your ancestor and Taylor's ancestor......they were far too strong to control." said F Tyra.
    "Wow....that's amazing!" said F David.
    "That it is, but this is alot better though, the ancestors seem to be doing fine although Andrew's ancestor was the weakest and was taken down early but lasted longer than I expected. But.....your father is the strongest among all the ancestors here." said F Tyra.
    "Well when we beat him we're gonna go help the others!" said David.
    "Actually once you beat him you'll have to deal with Eric who's fighting with Brandon, Cody, Lucus, and Joseph." said F Tyra.
    "You think they'll fight us......I think not." said F David.
    "Why's that?" asked Tyra.
    "You'll see, just wait, you're underestimating the eight of them." said F David smiling.
    "I doubt we are, they'll die just as you all will!" said F Tyra.
    "Whatever." said David getting ready to fight.

    David and F David began to charge after their dad who read their attacks and grabbed their arm, jumped then kicked them forwards and then teleported and kicked them down to the ground but they recovered before they could hit the ground and teleported! They began to throw punches at A David and he was dodging every attack like it was nothing, then he vanished and punched them both in the stomach and side kicked David into the wall and then punched F David into the ground! F David recovered by hand standing on the ground and jumped up and started to float in the air! David burst out of the wall using his Ki and then switched to his Chakra! "Alright, you're pretty tough.....but try this." said David.
    David began to create a lightning sword in his hand that was made out of chidori! "Ahh I see the Chidori Sword. I'll join you." said F David who created the same sword. They both regrouped with their Chidori Sword attack ready to go, then A David created two Chidori Swords in his hands! They all had their Sharingan activated and charged towards each other and began exchange slashes with their swords! They were on par with each other just constantly hitting swords together and blocking and repeating that same pattern over and over again! A David then jumped over their sword attack and then kicked David and then he attempted to kick F David as well but blocked the kick and kicked A David towards the ground! David back flipped to recover on the ground and then looked at F David.

    "David take my sword!" said David.
    "I don't need it I can make another one in my left hand!" said F David.
    "No I need to use an attack that can slow him down!" said David.
    "That's fine just recall your sword to gain your chakra back and use the attack!" said F David.
    "Alright!" said David recalling his sword.

    David began to summon large amounts of lightning into his hands and his body started to glow! "Watch this......Impluse." said David. David charged after A David and instantly teleported in front of him and began to shock his body! A David didn't flinch from the attack and David retreated back towards F David!

    "Alright use a strong attack against him while we have time!" said David holding his hands out to control A David's movements.
    "I see you paralyzed him......good now I can try this out!" said F David.

    F David released Dragon Flame Jutsu and dragons made of fire began to fly into the air! "Let me show you a technique I learned recently. This will destroy him instantly." said F David. The sky started to become dark and a dangerous thunderstorm awakened! F David took David and jumped up onto the building opposite of F Tyra and Tyra! "This will damage him and only him as long as we're up here." said F David. He raised his hand and a giant dragon made out of lightning came out!

    "What the hell!" said David, F Tyra, and Tyra.
    "This jutsu is Kirin.......begone......with the thunder clap!" said F David throwing the attack.

    The dragon flew into the air and then instantly shot a huge bolt of lightning towards A David who was paralyzed and couldn't avoid the attack! The ground was eradicated and left a medium-sized crater!

    "I used only half of it's power so that way I can reserve some chakra just in case, but he should be dead though, well, he should be done fighting I should say." said F David.
    "Yeah, now we can go help the others out!" said David.
    "Yeah let's go-" stopped F David.
    "Huh....what's wrong?" asked David.
    "I forgot one thing......" said F David as he looked back at A David.
    "What's that-" stopped David realizing the same thing.
    "Yeah you remember huh?" said F David.
    "Yeah, I read the letter too so I know about it." said David.

    A David began to stand up and he opened his eyes and revealed his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Along with it he used Ultimate Susano'o!

    "I knew it.....he used Susano'o in order to protect himself from the attack!" said F David.
    "I should've known he was gonna use it too, I would use it to evade the attack as well." said David.
    "Yeah.....but we were careless." said F David.
    "You might have to use Super Saiyan 2 in order to fight that." said David.
    "No not yet, but what about you, can't you go Super Saiyan?" asked F David.
    "No.....I can't go Super Saiyan." said David.
    "Wait what do you mean you became one before when we fought!" said F David.
    "Actually....what I used back then was reserved Super Saiyan energy given to me by my dad." said David.
    "Wait you mean.....you were using dad's Super Saiyan powers to match mine?" asked F David.
    "Yeah." said David.
    "That explains why you were on par with me.....which means.....if he becomes a Super Saiyan or higher, he'll be stronger than me at Super Saiyan 2!" said F David.
    "Why's that?" asked David.
    "It's because his Super Saiyan powers are equivalent to a Super Saiyan 2's powers, and when you used his Super Saiyan powers, you could maintain only half of his power and stamina, but you couldn't maintain it for long because you lack the ability to become a Super Saiyan." said F David.
    "Which is when you realized the limits of your powers and his powers." said David.
    "Exactly." said F David.

    A David started to charge after David and F David who got on guard and both used their Mangekyou Sharingans! "David go help out Miranda! Let me handle this!" said F David.
    "Wait what?" asked David.
    "Go help Miranda and let me handle this, I'm gonna go all out from here and I don't wanna hit you in the crossfire, this is what I've been waiting for my whole life!" said F David.
    "But are you sure?" asked David.
    "Go ahead man.....I got this one......protect our wife......ok?" said F David smiling.
    "What?" said David as F David Force Pushed him into the battle Miranda, Taylor, Horace, and Raelon were having.

    F David smiled and then went Super Saiyan 2 while using his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! He charged after A David and then they both blocked each other's Susano'o attack! They began to fight each other with Jutsus and were using Amaterasu like crazy! They were both blocking attacks and dodging and negating each other's jutsus like it was nothing! F David was winning easily though as he used his Super Saiyan 2's speed to dodge the attacks and jutsus and launch his own attacks! Then he negated his Susano'o and so did A David who went Super Saiyan 2 as well and he flew into the air! F David knew what he was about to do and was ready to counter it!

    "Alright then.....this is the deciding move.......KaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaMeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeHaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaMeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee................." said F David.

    They both stared each other down, ready to fire one last attack!

    "HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" screamed F David.

    They both shot their Kamehameha waves towards each other and they clashed! They were both increasing it's power to amazing levels! F David then noticed he was losing and then used his Super Kaioken and released an even bigger Kamehameha wave and it pushed towards A David quickly and he started to smile and the wave engulfed him! Then F David noticed something coming towards him, then he closed his eyes and the light engulfed him!

    To Be Continued................

    Ross is a new character that was introduced in this story, he is dressed similar to Andrew, likes to wear muscle shirts and uses sound techniques and are just as strong as Andrew's but are 15% stronger and better! He's the same height as Brandon and has short black hair and kinda a darkish white color to his skin.

    I also used P to separate the Future characters and the Past characters but only used P whenever I was using their names too soon and all that other stuff. Also notice I labeled the ancestors as A so that way you know it's the ancestor and I gave David's dad the A since he is like an Ancestor and also since I wasn't gonna involve Ancestor David in this chapter.

    Speaking of the chapter yes it was long and I started writing this chapter at 12 AM and I'm just finishing it. I'm doing this for two reasons, one....because it's getting good and I had a good idea on how to present it so I quickly made it and two....because soon I wanna get the past Z-Warriors back into their own time and continue on the story since I think they stayed in the future for way too long and I wanna start some good battles and revelations during the present timeline. I'm kinda gonna spoil a little bit, before the characters go back in time they will be told that they won't remember anything that happened to them which means they will awaken with their newfound powers it's just they won't be able to use them in the way they were taught lol but don't worry I won't stretch it out much I might just do it to like the main characters like David, Miranda, Taylor, Brandon, Joseph, Cody, and Lucus. But that's all for now and note this was a little spoiler not a big one, trust me......you'll get a good reveal in the next chapter since alot of crazy stuff happens in the next one and yes it's gonna be big just like this one.
     
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    First off I wanna say thanks to all of my friends who have been reading and telling me how good I'm doing on this story and I'm glad you guys are giving me positive feedback, I'm still surprised that I haven't gotten anything negative yet so I must be doing good so thanks alot guys :)! Second thing is I wanna say that this story will be awhile before it comes to an end, meaning there's like 10 more chapters and a few more stories and scenarios I can think of so stick around for some interesting reveals in this story and prepare yourself for the new storyline to come! If you have any comments or ideas please post them I'm always open for suggestions to improve the story or future stories to come and these future stories will be based on these characters!

    Chapter 15-Back Home

    "Alright guys let's bust out our special technique!" said Cody.
    "Seizure Procedure!" said P Cody, P Brandon, P Lucus, and P Joseph.

    The four created a giant vortex of Ki and started to glow different colors! The ancestors began to start into it and were mesmerized by it's power and were unable to see the Ki blasts coming after them by the future Z-Warriors! The ancestors were destroyed instantly by this maneuver and that left only a few ancestors of the Band!

    "Wow guys nice move!" said David.
    "How come you're here?" asked F Brandon.
    "Well.....David told me to come help you guys and e threw towards ya'll." said David.
    "No way......which means." paused F Cody.
    "He's using Ultimate Susano'o." said F Joseph.
    "Alright....David go help out Miranda and them, so that way they can come and aid us then move down the line because David needs to be stopped!" said F Brandon.
    "But why?" asked David in a begging voice.
    "Just go help them." said P Joseph smiling.
    "Fine." said P David leaving.
    "Alright guys let's go aid David." said F Lucus.

    F David was engulfed in a light, he was unable to move, he stood there.....watching a figure appear before him......he noticed then that it was his father!

    "Dad?" asked F David.
    "Yes son....it's me." said A David.
    "Am I.....dead?" asked F David.
    "No you're not, this is my way of saying hi to you.....I staged this whole battle." said A David.
    "Wait....so...you weren't under the influence of Tyra's power?" asked F David.
    A David laughed and said, "Hell no like imma let some chick enslave me c'mon Dee."
    "Yeah that's true but you made it seem like you were under her control." said F David.
    "Well you had you're past version with you, but he must be sent back to his own time, too much is being revealed to him and his friends, they must not know what the future holds for them because this is not their future any longer, it's been changed." said A David.
    "Changed how Dad?" asked F David.
    "Well for starters, some of the band members are learning their hidden chakra techniques too early, second off, some of the future members are learning how to become a Super Saiyan a little early, third off, you're becoming way too strong too early, you've got a long life but you're becoming too strong, soon......it will consume your judgment and you'll become a threat to your friends, who you will most liekly abandon." said A David.
    "What? But how?" asked F David.
    "It's simple son......" A David said and continued telling F David in secret.

    Miranda, Taylor, Raelon, and Horace all are fighting their hardest against their ancestors, P David then showed up to aid the eight of them.

    "How come you're here shouldn't you be helping you're future self?" asked P Taylor.
    "Well he sent me to help Brandon and them, then they finished off their ancestors and told me to come aid you guys so that way you can go help them out with stopping David from using his Ultimate Susano'o!" said P David.
    "What he's using Ultimate Susano'o?" asked F Taylor.
    "Yeah." said P David.
    "David! No! I won't let you do it!" said F Miranda becoming a Super Saiyan.

    F Miranda flew into the air and started to create a large amount of Ki within her hands! "Kaaaaaaaaaaa.......Meeeeeeeeee........Haaaaaaaaa.......Meeeeeee......HAAAAAAAAA!" screamed F Miranda.

    A giant Kamehameha Wave flew towards the ancestors they were battling and they were in shock by it's size and were defeated instantly! "Let's go!" said F Miranda dashing off.
    "Damn what's gotten into her?" asked F Horace.
    "Isn't it obvious? She cares about David! Her boyfriend!" said F Raelon.
    "Actually.....well I'm not gonna say it, he can't know." said F Taylor pointing to P David.
    "Huh?" asked P David.
    "Nothing just go help everyone else out!" said F Taylor flying off with the others following.
    "You guys stay back and help David out!" said F Raelon.
    "Alright!" said P Miranda.
    "Good....let's go!" said P David.

    They rushed off to aid the other teams and they met up with Ross, Hanna, Andrew, and Travis who needed a little bit of help. "Damn....we're gonna need a little bit of help." said F Ross. Just then, P David dashed in with a Chidori and impacted A Ross in the chest! "You called for help?" said P David smiling. P Miranda, P Horace, and P Raelon dashed in and confronted the last two ancestors!

    "Fire Style......" said P Raelon forming his seals. "Fireball Jutsu!" he said.
    "Water Style.......Giant Vortex Jutsu!" said P Horace.
    "Wind Style......" said P Miranda jumping into the air......"Rapid Hurricane Jutsu!"
    The flames and the water combined together thanks to P Miranda's Wind Style attack and the blast took down the remaining ancestors the percussion were fighting which left only Hollie's group's ancestors!

    "Alright you guys go aid our future selves in helping F David we'll help David stop the other ancestors!" said P Miranda.
    "Got ya!" said F Hanna.
    "We can't spend too much time helping this last group out!" said P Miranda.
    "Heh.....I wouldn't worry.....look." said P David smiling.

    The other group had already finished defeating their ancestors and they regrouped with the rescue team!

    "Hey guys what's going on?" asked F Hollie.
    "Well....it's a long story.....but to shorten it I'm just gonna tell you that all of us need to go help my future self out right now!" said P David.
    "Alright let's go! Double Time!" said F Ricky.
    "But Why?" asked P Ricky in a begging voice.
    "Omg cmon Ricky this is necessary man." said P David laughing.
    "Okay." said P Ricky.

    They all rushed off to help F David who was still talking to his dad. "So what you're saying is....our time has been tampered with and can only be fixed if they returned to their own timeline?" asked F David. A David started to walk around trying to make sense of what the situation is. "Yes I'm certain of it, it has to be done, they can't remain here any longer, they must go back, and so must I.....I can't stay here any longer as well." said A David.

    "Wait what do you mean?" asked F David.
    "You're power and aim were spot on son, I'm proud of you." said A David.
    'What? You mean I?" said F David feeling upset.
    "Awww don't feel upset.....I enjoyed the fight you and I had, and don't worry....you are still my son, you have always made me proud no matter what, I'm always proud of you no matter what you do as long as there's a reason behind it." said A David smiling.
    "Alright.....I'll send them back." said F David.
    "Good.....and don't worry....I'll always be here with you." said A David disappearing.
    "Thanks dad." said F David smiling.

    The light disappeared and F David stood with his head to lowered to the ground, then he remembered how proud his dad was of him, and raised his head in boldness! He looked at F Tyra who was getting ready to retreat from the battle!

    "I don't think so!" said F David going after her.
    "Actually we think so!" said F Eric dropping down in front of him along with Eric.
    "Fine...I'll get rid of you guys first!" said F David.
    "David!" screamed F Lucus.
    "Hey guys I'm glad you're here." said F David.
    "Yeah that's good but leave these idiots to us, we'll settle this for you." said F Cody.
    "Good thank you....oh and don't kill the past Eric, ok?" said F David.
    "Alright we won't, I'm sure there's a reason behind it." said F Brandon.
    "Thanks!" said F David flying off.
    "So we killing them both?' said F Lucus smiling.
    "No man let's listen to what he said." said F Joseph.

    Meanwhile.....F Miranda was flying towards F David's location and was caught up by F Taylor and the others!

    "Hey guys you made it!" said F Miranda.
    "Yeah we wasn't gonna let you do this on your own!" said F Taylor.
    "I wonder if David's alright." said F Miranda.
    "I'm sure he's fine but are you sure it was safe to leave the past David with the others I mean if he dies then our David dies too." said F Raelon.
    F Miranda stopped. "S***!" She dashed off with extreme speed.
    "Damn I thought she knew that!" said F Taylor.
    "Crap....but still let's go help out F David she can keep the past David safe." said F Horace.
    "Yeah let's go." said F Taylor.
    "Damn damn damn damn damn damn damn!" said F Miranda dashing freaking fast.
    "We might need to speed up or better yet use some kind of instantaneous technique." said P David.
    "Well we can just fly faster." said F Jonathan.
    "Sure." said P David flying two times faster.
    All of a sudden there was a collision! F Miranda and P David collided and fell to the ground! "OW!" said P David. "What the.....oh David are you alright I'm so sorry!" said F Miranda rushing to him. "I'm fine but we need to go help out my future self." said P David. "Alright let's go, I'll use Instant Transmission to get us there." said F Miranda. Just like that they all grabbed on and they teleported to F David's location.

    "Hmmmmm.....looks like she landed here......out in the middle of nowhere." said F David landing.
    "I wanted to show you this place." said F Tyra.
    "Um you wanted me to see a deserted plain area?" asked F David.
    "This place used to be the park, the place where memories were made, the place where you and I confessed our love for each other, it will also be your grave!" said F Tyra activating her Sharingan.
    "Hmph.....the only thing you did was put yourself in pain, you put Eric in pain too, and in time you put me through pain too." said F David activating his Sharingan.
    "No I didn't do anything wrong, all I did was give you the love you deserved!" said F Tyra dashing towards F David.
    "No....all you did was cheat on Eric instead of break up with him or even better just let me be alone!" said F David dashing towards her.

    F Tyra punched F David who blocked the attack! "But I was in love with you more than Eric should it really matter what I did!" said F Tyra starting a chain of combos. "It does matter because you separated me from my best friend, he was always there for me and I was always there for him!" said F David blocking and countering the attacks. They both got locked in a blow exchange and were fighting quickly and skillfully, each dodging each other's moves! "Tyra I just don't understand why is it that you put yourself through this pain?" said F David punching her in the face. F Tyra recovered and punched him back in the face and then kicked him to the ground! "I didn't put myself through any pain at all!" said F Tyra. F David recovered and looked at her. "You tried to kill me by going into the past, you attempted to kill my wife in the past, you attempted to pit my own father against me, you wanted me to suffer but in the end you winded up suffering!" said F David kicking her and then unleashing a string of combos on her. F David teleported behind and punched her down and then teleported again side kicked her in the face and then teleported again and kicked her upwards and then fired a Kamehameha Wave towards her! "No!" said F Tyra. She deflected the blast successfully! "I only did that because I was angry at you, I wasn't in pain!" said F Tyra. F David then teleported in front of her. "Liar!" he said as he punched her stomach and then kicked her down with two feet closed together. F Tyra hit the ground and created a crater in the ground left by a smokescreen of dust and debris! "I don't believe you, even now as we're fighting you have the nerve to lie to my face and tell me you weren't in pain, you have anger whenever you experience pain, you experience pain just as you experience sadness!" said F David. F Tyra then jumped from the ground and stood up staring at F David with her Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan awakened! "I'm through listening to you! I'm gonna finish what I started!" she said going after F David. "Bring it." said F David as he charged after her. They both collided fists and began to attack each other with excessive force and were punching each other each their turn! F David then broke out of it and used his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan and used his Ultimate Tsukiyomi! F Tyra noticed the jutsu and canceled it out with her own Tsukiyomi! "Not bad." said F David. He then used his Ultimate Amaterasu to trap her in the ball! F Tyra then closed her right eye and opened it! "Ultimate Kaijin" said F Tyra as she unleashed a wave of chakra that engulfed the black flames and were transported to her left eye! "What did she just do?" asked F David. "What I did was take your attack and implant it into my eye, which means I can now use Ultimate Amaterasu just like you!" said F Tyra as she used the attack. "Damn!" said F David as he was getting ready to guard. F David became trapped in the Amaterasu Ball and was about to be burned up! "No...I'm not going out like this, not with my own attack you won't!" said F David as he closed his eyes. F Tyra started smiling and was getting ready to kill him when F David opened his eyes and unleashed his Ultimate Susano'o! "What's this!?" said F Tyra. "This......this is my Ultimate Susano'o." said F David smiling. F Tyra stood her ground and was getting ready to attack when F David charged in after her and used Amaterasu and then jumped into the air and took out a sword and was ready to slice F Tyra who dodged the blade but dodged the Amaterasu too late! "AHHHHHHHHHH!" screamed F Tyra. "This Amaterasu is different, it's powers aren't that strong like the Ultimate Amaterasu but it's speed is greater than the Ultimate Amaterasu." said F David. F Tyra struggled to extinguish the flames and then closed her eyes and awakened her Ultimate Susano'o! "Hmmmm.....so you can use it too huh." said F David. "Yes I can!" said F Tyra.

    F David and F Tyra both had their techniques out, they were ready to battle it out when the others showed up!

    "David we came to help you out!" said F Taylor.
    "Good, but I don't need any help at the moment." said F David.
    "What are you sure?" asked F Taylor.
    "Yeah." said F David deactivating his Sharingans.
    "Huh? Why are you deactivating your powers?" asked F Horace.
    "Because....Tyra won't have hers for long." said F David.
    "What do you mean?" asked F Tyra.
    "You'll find out in 5 seconds." said F David.
    "What are you talking about-" F Tyra paused. Her chakra was starting to fade away and her Susano'o vanished! Her Sharingan was deactivated!
    "There you go.....five seconds exactly." said F David.
    "What did you do to me?" asked F Tyra.
    "Do you remember when I used my Amaterasu and when you absorbed it using your jutsu, well......when you did that I quickly used a sealing jutsu which can seal your special abilities." said F David smiling.
    "What!?" said F Tyra.
    "So are her abilities sealed completely?" asked F Miranda.
    "No they're not." said F David.
    "But for how long?" asked F Raelon.
    "For the rest of the day, and when that day's over.....she'll already be defeated." said F David.
    "That's amazing!" said P Miranda.
    "Yeah, but the sad part is it used up most of my chakra which is why my Sharingan deactivated." said F David.
    "No matter.....I still have my Ki which is more than enough to stop you!" said F Tyra charging after F David.

    F David then suddenly collapsed! "What the, what's going on with my body?" asked F David. "I knew about that sealing jutsu and used a paralysis jutsu the moment I awakened my Susano'o!" said F Tyra punching him. F David fell to the ground and then he asked, "But how did you know that I sealed your powers from the beginning?" F Tyra then looked at him and used her Sharingan! "My Sharingan allows me to search through my Chakra and my Ki for anything that's hazardous to me and it lets me terminate it, so all I did was fake myself losing power." said F Tyra smiling. "Damn." said F David. F Tyra then looked at the others who were getting ready to fight, then Brandon and the others came to help them and had the past Eric tied up in energy! "Alright we're done and.......damn what's going on here?" asked F Brandon looking around. "You're just in time to die along with the rest of these fools!" said F Tyra unleashing a devastating Ki blast towards him and the other 7 with him. They all dodged the attack and the shock managed to set P Eric free! "Damn he's loose!" said F Lucus.

    F Tyra, P Eric, and P Tyra stood together and were ready to fight the Z-Warriors! They all charged at the same time except P Tyra and P Eric who gave all of their Ki to F Tyra so she can take on everyone at once! F Tyra began to attack the warriors and was winning as she punched and kicked and blasted them! She was dodging every attack being thrown at her, it looked like she was making it look too easy to dodge their attacks! That's when P Brandon, P Lucus, P Cody, and P Joseph used their Seizure Procedure Technique to confuse F Tyra but it was unsuccessful as she used a Kamehameha Wave on the attack and they fell to the ground! The future versions tried it and they too failed to stop F Tyra, she led an onslaught of destruction and everyone couldn't even land a hit on her! F Taylor, F Miranda, and P Miranda charged after her with Chidori and couldn't hit her with their amazing speed, then F Tyra kicked both F Miranda and F Taylor down and attempted to kill P Miranda with Chidori when David came and kicked her towards the ground! P David used his Sharingan and charged after F Tyra who used her Sharingan and began to fight P David! He started losing to her awesome powers and was brought down to the ground, P Miranda went to aid him only to be impaled with a Chidori from F Tyra! F Tyra used a clone jutsu and attacked her, and then P Miranda fell to the ground and became lifeless. P David was unconscious and couldn't see what happened next, he blacked out.

    Time had passed and then P David woke up and noticed his friends' bodies lying around the field! "What happened?" he asked. "They were all slaughtered....even Miranda.....her and all of yours and my friends are gone due to the past versions being killed, that's what she did." said F David. P David then became shocked at what he just heard! F Tyra stood there laughing at the carnage she created. "Too bad.....and they were all counting on the both of you but I guess it was all for nothing." said F Tyra laughing. P David could only stare at P Miranda's body and all of his friends' bodies......he felt sadness and pain. He closed P Miranda's eyes and noticed she had a note in her pocket, he picked it up and read it. "I can't even sleep, I keep thinking about David, I don't know why but he makes me smile. He make me want to be like him, well almost like him. He's an amazing guy, he's strong, smart, but he lacks willpower. But that's not enough to stop me from saying this......I Love Him." P David read. "So......she loved me this whole time.....but even more." he said.

    Suddenly......he felt lots of anger rushing towards his head, his body began to fill up with heat and energy, his anger started swelling! "I.....won't let you.......get away....with this!" said P David angrily. His body began to glow and then unglow, then his hair began to turn golden then back to black, the sky started to turn black and the rocks began to lift up because of his power! "I won't let you!" he said getting more angry. P David then snapped and screamed and transformed into a Super Saiyan!

    "What!?" said F Tyra.
    "Wow...he became a Super Saiyan! Amazing! His power's.......stronger than mines when I awakened it for the first time!" said F David.
    P David looked at F Tyra and charged after her with blinding speed and punched her! He then proceeded to kill her when P Eric got in the way and tried to stop him! But it wasn't enough, P David punched him in the stomach and then obliterated him with a Ki Wave! P Tyra seen what happened and charged after him and then P David kicked her and then punched her down to the ground! F Tyra then charged after him and he teleported and then punched her in the stomach and started to unleashed so many hits that you couldn't even count them all! P David then side kicked her in the face and teleported and punched her back really hard and then blasted her with lots of Ki Blasts! P Tyra then got up and attempted to stop him only to be punched in the face! P David then stopped and rushed towards P Tyra and then grabbed her leg and threw her into the air and then blasted her with a Ki Wave which left her unconscious! F Tyra then charged after him and punched him finally! She smiled knowing that she hurt him but then the smile left her face when P David looked at her and was unaffected by it and then smiled and then punched her in the face and then teleported and kicked her upwards and released a Super Kamehameha Wave that sent her into space! P Tyra was the only one alive and she recovered and stood looking at P David. "You deserve to have had your friends killed your a monster!" said P Tyra. "How can I be a monster." P David paused and was instantly behind her. "When I'm the one killing the monsters that caused so much destruction?" he finished. P David released another Super Kamehameha Wave and obliterated P Tyra's body as well!

    "No way.....he killed them all!" said F David.
    "Well won't be seeing them in the future now will we?" said P David.
    "Wow that was a good one!" said F David laughing.
    "How come you're laughing we just lost our friends?" said P David.
    "Because we're able to bring them to life, watch follow me." said F David.
    "What you have Dragon Balls or something?" asked P David.
    "Yeah but we're not using those, there's not enough power. You'll see what I mean." said F David.

    F David and P David ventured back to the Z-Base carrying their fallen comrades with them. They set them down and gathered the tools needed to resurrect them.

    "There you go the first step." said F David.
    "What the hell there's Chaos Emeralds here?" asked P David.
    "Yep and there's Dragon Balls, we're just using the Emeralds first." said F David.
    "Alright." said P David.
    "Don't worry you'll find them in your timeline too." said F David setting up the Emeralds.
    "Alright so what's the plan?" asked P David.
    "Well....we're gonna use the Chaos Emeralds while the Dragon Balls are near them so that way the balls will gather more power!" said F David.
    "Then we can use them to wish everyone back!" said P David.
    "They could already do that, it's just the Chaos Emeralds need to be active so that way I can utilize the Dragon's Chaos Powers and combine them with my own." said F David.
    "Wait what now?" said P David.
    "I'm using the Dragon's powers and the Chaos Emeralds' powers to send you guys back to your own timeline using Chaos Control!" said F David.
    "Chaos.....Control?" asked P David.
    "It allows you to stop time or warp quickly to another place, if combined with a Chaos Emerald it can be strengthened!" said F David.
    "Interesting." said P David.
    "Try it out sometime." said F David.
    "I will." said P David.

    They summoned the Dragon and it became infused with the Emeralds' power and they wished their friends back to life! Then it was time for them to say good-bye.

    "Alright guys when you're sent back into your own time, you won't remember anything that happened, but your powers will still there, bad part is, you won't even know it's there, which means you need to learn how to tap into that power." said F David.

    "But how come you're telling us this even though we won't remember anything?" asked P Taylor.

    "Well for one you need to know you won't remember anything, two you'll remember a few things like maybe what kind of power you have and some of you may even remember how to bring it out but you won't have any memories of what you experienced here." said F David.

    "I see....so we won't remember anything that experienced?" asked P Brandon.
    "Yeah that's right." said F David.
    "Good!" said P Brandon.
    P Brandon then took P Taylor and kissed her!
    "Go Go Go Go Go!!" said P Brandon smiling.
    "What wait!" said P Taylor.
    "Too late! Peace!" said F David.
    "You kissed me!?" said P Taylor.
    "Chaos Control!!" said F David.

    A portal opened up and they were sent back in time. F David and the others waved back at them as they disappeared into the light! David then woke up.....he was in his bed.

    "Man what happened last night.....or better yet what kind of dream did I have?" asked David. He then noticed a letter was in his hand. He opened it and read it.
    "I wrote this letter for you, you need to know our family's heritage, which means your journey is just beginning. Whenever you have the time, go to your dad's house and go into his closet, inside the closet there's a switch, press the switch and go inside the library, once there you will find a box entitled "Assassin's Legacy", read that book because it is in fact something very interesting and you would be amazed to know how special we are. Also....always remember this.......Time doesn't stand still for anyone, we no longer need time to aid us, I can no longer aid time and time can't aid me either, but soon......Time will aid you just as you've aided it. Always know that Strength, Wisdom, Stability, Knowledge, Growth, and Courage are all the things you need to maintain, and you will experience Hatred and Sadness, and probably Darkness, it will be up to you to balance these feelings, emotions, and actions in your world, in your time, and you're not alone, you have your friends alongside you who also have special abilities, and if you observe enough, you'll learn new things about one another. So remember....Time.....is on your side.....just as I am......just as your friends are.......just as our father is. Sincerely, An Old Friend." he read. David stared at the letter and then smiled and said, "I'll be seeing you soon then.......my future self."

    To Be Continued.............

    Alright just like the last chapter this one was pretty long and also this was the last chapter that was set in the future, which means we're now going to continue the story in the present again! The following chapters will now be long as well since they are now going to include more action, I just need to make sure I have enough space to write them all lol but anyways I hope you enjoyed the future of Haven City and hope you'll enjoy the present Haven City and the adventures of David and his Z-Warrior friends!
     
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    Chapter 16-Back To Normal

    David, Brandon, and Joseph got off of the bus and walked towards the outdoor commons area where they seen all of the students having conversations and what not. They walked towards the area where the band members normally hung out and they all sat down or stood up and talked about the dream they had last night!

    "So we all had somewhat the same exact dream correct?" asked Brandon.
    "Yeah." said Joseph.
    "What does it mean?" asked Taylor.
    "I don't know." said Hollie.
    "Well we know it has to be a coincidence right?" asked Starla.
    "It has to be if we all had the same dream." said Kyle.
    "Cody what do you think?" asked Lucus.
    "I honestly don't know either it seems like a coincidence that we all had the same dream." said Cody.
    "But it seemed so real." said Ricky.
    "It felt real too like it felt like it happened before, almost like a Deja Vu." said Travis.
    "Guys guys guys why are we all talking about this, let's just ask David he probably knows!" said Andrew.
    "Yeah David you should know." said Taylor.

    David just stared up into the sky reflecting on the note he read when he woke up. The others tried to get his attention but he drowned them out, all he did was focus on the clouds and the sky.

    "I think he's become deaf." said Brandon.
    "No I'm not sorry, what's going on now?" asked David.
    Taylor sighed. "We wanna know what you think about the fact that we all had the same dream." she said.

    David started to collect his thoughts and tried to form an answer. He smiled. "Well....I don't know myself.....but what I do know is.....there's something unexplained about our heritage." he said.

    "What do you mean our heritage?" asked Joseph.
    "Well...." David said showing them the note he got. "When I woke up this morning I had his note in my hand, and I read it and it said something about our heritage, well actually about my heritage but I'm one hundred percent sure that everyone's heritage is involved as well." he continued.

    "So do you think that our parents are hiding something from us?" asked Taylor.
    "Well.....we'll never know unless we try to ask them." said David.
    "Well we probably should try to ask them just to get some answers." said Miranda.
    "Another thing we need to do is when they tell us the truth of our heritage we need to try to find some sort of diary or history of our heritage, that we can possibly learn new techniques and also learn the secrets to controlling our powers." said David.

    "Do you think our parents would tell us?" asked Ricky.
    "Honestly man I don't know, it could be a long shot but they shouldn't keep things from us." said David.

    "I say all of you should go for it." said Mr.T.
    "Really Mr.T?" asked Brandon.
    "Yes, I think it's time you all learned about yourselves and how special you're families are." said Mr.T.

    David looked at Mr.T closely, he noticed that he knows something about all of them. "Fine." he said, "I'll ask my parents about these powers I have, it's time I got some answers as to why I have these abilities." he finished.

    "I'll do it too!" said Miranda smiling at David.
    "Same here!" said Taylor smiling.

    The bell rang for them to head to class, they spent the day wondering how their parents would react to them showing off their powers. Some thought they might think of them as freaks, some thought they might push them away, some thought they might be impressed. Numerous scenarios filled everyone's minds and they became distracted by it. Then the bell rang for them to go to lunch and they all went about their business. David, Brandon, Joseph, Lucus, Cody, and Starla all went to the band room to talk to Mr.T and hang out.

    "How much you wanna bet that everyone's gonna chicken out and not ask about their heritage?" asked Cody smiling.
    "Well I'm sure they'll ask them eventually but they really need to know, they deserve to know about their heritage." said David.
    "Now say we do learn about our heritage, what then?" asked Brandon.
    "Well the next step will be to tap into our powers using the secrets that will be taught to us or maybe we'll find out how to control our powers better, who knows?" said David.

    "But do you really think that they'll allow us to train our powers?" asked Joseph.
    "Well think there has to be a purpose in acquiring these powers, and then there's a reason for us to even have these powers in the first place." said David.

    "Yeah I agree with David." said Cody.
    "Yeah me too." said Starla.
    "Now David what's this I hear about a letter you had in your hand when you woke up this morning?" asked Mr.T.
    "Well when I woke up I had a note in my hand and I read it, it told me about how to find my heritage and that I should go to my dad's house and search through his belongings, apparently I'm supposed to find some book that has everything about my heritage and ancestors." said David.

    "So are you gonna go off of that?" asked Mr.T.
    "I have to.....I need to know why these powers were given to me, it's only natural if I wanna learn about something I have." said David.
    "Well man I wish you luck." said Mr.T.

    The bell rang and they went back to class leaving David behind who had to stay because his next class was Percussion hour so he stayed with Mr.T, soon everyone that was supposed to be there showed up and that's when the Color Guard came with some interesting news!

    "Hey guys check this out!" said Christi. Christi and the other members picked up their flags and they suddenly changed into spears that glowed with Chakra!

    "What the?" said David.
    "That's so cool!" said Hanna.
    "Well it looks like the Color Guard finally joined the group." said Mr.T smiling.
    "David are you able to tell what kind of power they have?" asked Travis.
    "Strange.....I'm sensing Chakra but I'm also sensing some Ki as well." said David.
    "So are you saying that they're using it at the same time, like both of them?" asked Travis.
    "I think so or else my Sharingan wouldn't be showing two different energies." said David.
    "Wait you're Sharingan can detect Ki?" asked Hanna.
    "Yeah I don't know how but I'm able to fuse my Chakra and Ki together to enhance my Sharingan's abilities." said David.
    "That's awesome!" said Hanna.
    "Not as awesome as our Lightspears!" said Christi laughing.

    "Lightspears huh.....I guess you're ripping off Star Wars material." said Mr.T smiling.
    "Yep it fits." said Carly.
    "So all of the girls in the guard can use Chakra and Ki at the start.....interesting." said David.
    "Are you gonna fight them to test out their skills?" asked Hanna.
    "Damn right I am!" said David smiling.

    The girls got on guard and exited outside and were ready for David to fight them! David rushed outside to confront them, he started smiling, he was ready to test out the strength of Chakra and Ki put together! The girls charged after him, David became on guard and charged after them as well! He vanished, leaving them wide open to an attack since they were trying to look for him! David then kicked Christi in the back, vanished, kicked Adara up into the air and double punched her down, vanished again, punched Carly in the face, vanished yet again, and attacked the remaining 3 girls! They all were lying on the ground, David was proving to be a match for them, then they stood up and charged after him differently! They used their teamwork and attempted to fake David out but he used his instincts to determine where their attacks were coming from! He blocked and dodged each one and then retaliated with a Chidori Stream which sent a stream of lightning towards the girls and shocked them! They fell to the ground and were struggling to get up, but none of them could get up, the battle was over, David got a flawless victory over all six of them!

    "Wow he beat them all without even breaking a sweat!" said Hanna.
    "(Remarkable.....David's become even stronger than before, he didn't even have to use his Sharingan to dodge all of those moves, I wonder what happened to him!)" Mr.T thought in his mind.
    "You girls didn't do half bad but you could really use some training, and I won't mind giving you training either." said David.

    "Sure we'll take it right girls?" said Christi.
    "Sure let's do it so that way we won't get beat so easily." said Carly.

    Everyone started laughing and went back into the band room to practice. The bell then rang and the rest of the band came in and everyone sat down and talked while Mr.T told the Percussion class' teachers that they'll be with him for the last class.

    "Wait so the Color Guard have powers now?" asked Cody.
    "Yeah and I got a chance to fight all of them to see how strong it is." said David.
    "This dude right here got a flawless victory over them, he never got hit and he made quick work of them!" said Hanna smiling.
    "Wait really?" asked Joseph.
    "Yeah but it's nothing to get hyped over, I'm sure this won't happen if I fight everyone in the band so." said David.
    "Actually that might be why all of you guys are still here." said Brandon.
    "What makes you say that?" asked David.
    "Well I know we have a game today so we're practicing but I know that he's probably gonna wanna test that." said Brandon.
    "No I don't think he would do that, I mean if David beats us we won't be able to do much at the game, we'd be weak and stuff." said Joseph.

    Just then Mr.T got up on his podium and settled everyone down.

    "Alright guys today we're gonna change it up, we're gonna practice after we go outside, there's something I wanna see." said Mr.T.
    "Wait what are we about to do exactly?" asked Taylor.
    "Well.....let's just say I'm interested to see how much everyone has improved.....so I'm letting everyone have a 10 minute sparring match outside!" said Mr.T.

    "Told you." said Brandon looking at David.
    "Well we're having a Free-For-All so I'm guessing I'll get hit anyway so yeah." said David.
    "Who knows man, stop doubting you're powers." said Brandon.
    "Brandon he'll get hit because imma be the one to hit him!" said Joseph.
    "We'll see." said David.

    The band exited to the outside and went towards the football teams' practice field which was a little small for something like this. So Mr.T used an Earth Style jutsu to expand the field! Everyone then got ready to brawl and started smile because they couldn't wait for Mr.T to see how they've improved, but what they don't know is how have they improved!

    "Alright guys good luck, give me something good to look at......Ready.......FIGHT!" said Mr.T.

    Just like that everyone rushed at each other and began to attack each other in a friendly manner, each instrument section formed an alliance and attacked the other group, it was a battle to determine which group was the best and it got Mr.T excited to see which group had the most power and teamwork!

    The Flutes, lead by Miranda, attacked the Clarinets, who were lead by Lucus! The Saxophones, lead by Starla, attacked the Trumpets, who were lead by Kyle! Brandon just joined the Trombones, who were lead by Cody, and attacked the Baritones, Tubas, and Percussion, who were all lead by David! Taylor was the Drum Major so she technically didn't have an instrument but she would aid the Flutes whenever they needed help. The Flutes held their own against the Clarinets, but the Saxophones had a hard time fending off the Trumpets who were using their Water and Earth Style Jutsu to fend them off! The Trombones and Brandon were holding their own against the 3 instruments they were fighting, then that's when the Percussion separated from the fight and went into a squad of two and went to aid the other sections! David and Hanna went to aid the Clarinets, Travis and Jonathan went to aid the Saxophones, Andrew and Ross stayed back and aided the Baritones and Tubas! It was a colossal battle and the dominant teams were the Flutes and Clarinets, followed by the Trombones and Trumpets, and at the bottom were Saxophones, Baritones, and Tubas! Taylor noticed that the Flutes were being taken down and rushed to aid them, she stood in front of David who surprisingly never took damage while fighting! They stared each other down and began to fight, they were on par with each other, constantly dodging and blocking each others' moves, none of them landing one punch on the other! David and Taylor then got locked in a Vanishing Duel, where they kept using the Vanishing Technique to do each other's attacks and were doing it rapidly! Then David vanished but didn't try to attack Taylor who was ready for him but noticed he didnt phase back in! She searched and searched while watching the destruction unfolding with the other sections, then she became distracted and David came and Double Kicked her down to the ground!

    "You shouldn't become distracted by the action outside of the battle you're in." said David smiling.
    "Well it's hard not to but I can get it done!" said Taylor smiling.

    They both stared each other down again but this time Taylor rushed for the first hit which David was ready for and dodged it easily, he then Upward Kicked her stomach and vanished, then he Double Punched her down towards the ground, then he vanished again and appeared behind her and pushed her back with the force of his energy from his hand and then dashed towards her! He began to pummel her with a punching combo and then a kicking combo and then a mixture of both and then kicked her upwards again and she managed to recover and tried to sense his energy using Ki Sense! She couldn't catch his energy signal as he learned to compress it and then reappeared behind her and used a Kamehameha Wave on her back which sent her down to the ground and made an explosion!

    "Damn I think I overdid it a little there." said David smiling.
    "Don't worry David I had made a barrier as well so don't worry no one will hear or see this battle going on so just concentrate on the battle!" said Mr.T.
    "Alright cool!" said David.

    Taylor, Miranda, Cody, Brandon, Lucus, and Joseph all stood up from he rubble and noticed that everyone was knocked out and looked at David smiling.

    "Damn boy you wanna kill everybody?" said Lucus.
    "Well I didn't mean to release all that energy into that Kamehameha." said David.
    "Still that move was so awesome when did you learn it?" asked Taylor.
    "I don't know I just realized that I had new abilities." said David.
    "Anymore you wanna show us before we take you down?" asked Brandon smiling.
    "No I think that's it." said David.
    "Good....then bring it!" said Cody.

    They all charged after David who vanished immediately and started to use Vanish Fury where he kept vanishing and punching and kicking them each their turn! He kept that up for a little bit and then Brandon became angry and started releasing a flurry of Ki blasts all around the place! David hovered above him and watched him go crazy with his energy and then go bored and kicked him down to the ground! Taylor and Cody dashed after David and both used their special abilities! Taylor used Crystal Spear and created a spear to battle David with, and Cody used his Byakugan!

    "Wait a second I thought you had the Sharingan?" asked Taylor.
    "No I have Byakugan, that's Joseph that has Sharingan!" said Cody.
    "Alright." said Taylor charging after David still.

    Taylor distracted David while Cody gathered some chakra to use his 8 Trigrams Giant Palm Rotation! David dodged all of Taylor's spear attacks and countered each one as well, Cody then sensed Taylor was losing and used the chakra he had and released a giant rotation made out of Chakra that hit David and sent him flying to the ground! Taylor and Cody celebrated that they finally hit him but then David's body disappeared! He then reappeared in the back and them and blasted them away with a Ki Wave!

    "How did you do that?" asked Taylor.
    "What you fought right there was my clone." said David.
    "What when did you make that?" asked Cody.
    "It was right when I countered Taylor's last attack when I noticed your Chakra was rising and that's when I made it." said David smiling.
    "This is insane he's not even using his Sharingan and yet he can dodge all of our moves!" said Taylor.
    "Taylor....you and I both know that we're not even using our maximum powers right now!" said Cody.
    "Yeah but neither is he, I can sense alot of Chakra still left in him, and I'm detecting lots of Ki left too, in fact I sense even more beyond that, almost as if he has another supply of Ki that's been stored but it's like 10 times more powerful than his own Ki!" said Taylor.
    "Wait are you serious?" asked Cody.
    "Yeah try feeling it." said Taylor.
    "Wait I'm starting to feel it now....wow that's amazing!" said Cody.
    "I know right he has all of this power stored within him!" said Taylor.

    Miranda stood up and looked at David who wasn't paying attention to her. She then rushed after David and he looked behind him and vanished! Miranda then stopped and focused her Ki Sense and suddenly developed the ability to sense Chakra and Ki at the same time! Her Byakugan awakened and her Ki's aura began to surround her body! It changed from white to lime green and she spotted David and instantly dashed towards him and punched him!

    "What the!?" said Taylor and Cody.
    "Interesting....she managed to increase her speed and power at a higher rate than mine!" said David.
    "This is getting interesting." said Mr.T smiling.
    "Not bad Miranda......but this powerup that you've achieved will be tested by my own! Kaioken!" said David transforming.

    David's aura and body became red and he started bursting out with Ki that was matching Miranda's newfound powers! David then charged after her and Miranda charged after him as well, they both became locked in a Blow Exchange and were doing the Vanishing Duel at the same time, then they started flying at high speeds while still fighting each other! David hit Miranda who hit David back and the cycle just kept repeating itself for awhile and then they both stopped and descended to the ground!

    "You've become alot stronger!" said David smiling.
    "You too!" said Miranda smiling.
    "Well....I just realized that I have a deeper power within me, and I think it should be surfaced!" said David still smiling.
    "Wait what are you talking about?" asked Miranda.
    "What I'm about to show you will shock you and everyone else." said David smiling.

    The ground started to shake a little bit and the rocks began floating up in the air, David's Ki began to rise and then his eyes became a light-bluish color, then his muscles in his arms, chest, and legs began to pump up a little bit, then his became gold, then he bursted out with his Super Saiyan Transformation!

    "OH MY GOD!" screamed Taylor.
    "WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!?" screamed Cody.
    "Wow..." said Miranda staring at his golden body.
    "This is my true power!" said David smiling.
    "Amazing!" said Mr.T smiling.

    The rest of the band marveled at the new transformation being seen by David!

    "Alright Band that's enough go ahead and come back inside, I got all that I needed to know!" said Mr.T releasing the barriers.
    "Sure thing!" said David powering down.

    Everyone was dumbfounded, they couldn't believe what they just witnessed! They headed back into the band room and they all stared at David who became a little scared knowing that everyone was so occupied with staring at him! Mr.T consistently had to yell at them and tell them to focus on the music not on David. Once the day was over everyone went home and David, Brandon, and Joseph got off the bus at their houses and they stopped to talk.

    "Alright so when did you get that kind of power?" asked Brandon.
    "I don't know guys, alot of stuff we have is unexplained that's why I'm gonna go explore my heritage, you guys should do the same." said David entering his house.

    David walked in and asked his mom to take him to his dad's house so he can find the book about his heritage, his mom then knew what he wanted to do and what he wanted to know and sat him down.

    "What's up mom?" asked David.
    "Well....when you were born.....you're dad told me that if he would ever pass away to tell you about your heritage, but only whenever you acquired your powers." said David's Mom.
    "Wait...so you know?" asked David.
    "Yes I know....I walked into your room one night and I noticed you were giving off some Ki, it looked like you were in some sort of dream, but the Ki was kept controlled so you didnt cause any kind of damage." said David's Mom.
    "Alright so....what's my heritage?" asked David.
    "Well...you'll learn more about this in the book....but you and your friends are Saiyans." said David's Mom.
    "Saiyans?" asked David.
    "Yes....Saiyans.....you and your friends are a breed of people who love to fight, who won't age quickly as humans, which means you'll live longer and you'll be able to fight longer as well. You'll also have the ability to manipulate energy called Chakra but soon you learn how to manipulate Ki, which is two or three times stronger than Chakra!" said David's Mom.
    "Well that doesn't surprise me that much." said David.
    "I'm sure it wasn't since you learned how to use both, but you still need to learn how to use them both effectively, second inside the closet you'll find the book and it will be inside a box." said David's Mom.
    "That's cool, so let's go!" said David.

    David and his mom went to his dad's house while Brandon too learned of his heritage, so did Joseph, even Miranda!

    "Alright so me and all of my friends are Saiyans?" asked Miranda.
    "That's right Panda." said Miranda's Mom.
    "Alright then I gotta question....were any of our ancestors Saiyans?" asked Miranda.
    "Yes, in fact here's the book I been keeping, it's been passed down to those who were realized as Saiyans, like myself." said Miranda's Mom.
    "Wait you're a Saiyan!?" said Miranda.
    "Yes. Now everything you need to know is in this book." said Miranda's Mom.
    "I have just one question.....my friend David had transformed into some kind of a gold warrior, his aura was golden, his Ki was golden, and his hair was golden too!" said Miranda.
    "Then he's become a Super Saiyan!?" said Miranda's Mom surprised.
    "A Super....Saiyan?" said Miranda.
    "It's when a Saiyan exceeds his or hers limit on power, speed, and Ki and can be pushed even further to achieve the Super Saiyan transformation.....but how did he acquire this so quickly, I havent become a Super Saiyan until I was 25, and he learns it at 17!?" said Miranda's Mom excited.
    "Wait you can become a Super Saiyan too?" asked Miranda.
    "Yeah and so can all of your friends' parents who are Saiyans too!" said Miranda's Mom.
    "Well I guess I'll go read this book then." said Miranda as she walked up to her room.

    Meanwhile David searched through his dad's closet and found the switch, he pressed it and proceeded forward to the library where he discovered many books and the box! He couldn't open the box as it was locked and then found a note on the back reading "Use your Saiyan power to force the lock to open!" So David focused his Ki and opened the box easily! He found a diary along with the book of his heritage or in other words the Saiyan Heritage of his friends! He also found an outfit that was mostly black and had some red lines and designs on it, it even had a hood that was black and a red strip forming at the front and extended down to the back of the hood! It had a note inside it and it read "Read through the book first then you'll understand what you are and who you are Son." So David read through the book and learned of his powers and of his ancestors! His ancestors seemed to be known as Assassins who kept the peace in Haven City and other places as well!

    "So I'm an....an Assassin?" said all of the Z-Warriors.
    "No....We.....are Assassins!" said David looking up wearing his new outfit and activating his Sharingan.

    To Be Continued............


    Now I'm sure you've noticed I added new characters, Christi, Carly, Adara, make an appearance, they are part of the Color Guard and they normally wear their Color Guard gear most of the time and they different variants of them! I'm sure you've also noticed how at towards the end the Z-Warriors realize that they are Saiyans which I took from DBZ but like I said most of these things are fan-based just like the revelation of the Z-Warriors being Assassins, but they are also something alongside being Assassins which you'll find out in the next chapter, let's just say you'll enjoy these new settings! I also hope you enjoyed this new chapter!