Love<3

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Mimiru, Jul 16, 2009.

  1. Mimiru Banned

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    He hasn't showed any infatuation
    does he have any feelings for me?
    He has said he will take me to Britain
    he still loves her truly

    Will his heart ever be mine?
    My love for him is strong
    but he's already drawn the line
    have I done something wrong?

    His amazing words show his feeling
    but they are still for her
    My heart is peeling
    my soul in torture

    Will he ever realize I love him?
    my heart is for the taking
    I love him but he needs a trim
    but I feel love's sting
     
  2. ReebokR32 Twilight Town Denizen

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    you know that little voice in your head.... go fig
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    Is this reall or are you just fantisizing lol just kidding just kidding but I like it how long did it take you to make it?
     
  3. Mimiru Banned

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    ugh it's My brother Ruon's pervy friend.
    He is taking me to britain and it took me about 2 minutes to write it.
     
  4. TheMagicalMisterMistoffelees Professional Crazy

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    A bit of a overused flow but a great sense of rhyming. Good job overall on this.