Traditional Art How do you like my fox?

After thinking a while on which I should try and draw a animal or not. I did. Its supposed to be pourly drawn...I was thinking of making sort of my new style in drawing animals because my other one sucks too >.>....

http://s49.photobucket.com/albums/f269/xxrentedheart/?action=view&current=LastScan16.jpg

Here's a paupu fruit to make up for the damages ;p
http://s49.photobucket.com/albums/f269/xxrentedheart/?action=view&current=LastScan15.jpg

(The right leaf is very messed up. Not my best )

Please comment tips D:

 

Lol. With the fox, neck seems a little to long, and you need to distinguish the eyes more.

And I like the paupu fruit, lol

 

Haha, yeah. Im known for making my animals have long necks :/ Its a bad habit.
Im seriously trying so hard to find a good style I can stick with T^T I cant. No matter how many styles of dogs/wolfs/animals I look at I just cant seem to draw any and change it into my own v.v
(Im not stealing just looking a redoing it into Tay style xD )

 

i think with the fox you need to give it a sort of smaller neck then its stomach area

me likes da paopu too :D

 

Nice. Has a very cartoony feel to it. Me like :3

 

^.^ Thankies. Thats what I was going for :3

 

dude i could never draw something like that good job!

 

I say that you should play around with different styles a little more - it never hurts to widen your abillities, right? Eventually you will most likely end up using the parts you like the most and it will become your personal style.

And something I have learned - no one can learn without copying examples first. That's how we learned the alphabet, right? :>

 

^.^ Oh gosh coco. You are amazing.

It seems you always know what to say :P Thankies

 

First Drawing:
I've got to admit it's a pretty cool style,the tail looks a little messed up to me.

Second drawing:
The right side of the paopu does look a little mssed up but I like the texture of the paopu.
Next time draw in a plain white paper,it will look so much better.

 

Yeah...The tail does look off :/

Yeah. Must agree the right side looks bad...Also I didnt have a choice >.< I was drawing it in class

 

Normally before you get to stylizing anything, it's good to understand the proper structure of what you want to stylize first, that way you can accentuate/stylize whatever part of its structure to your appeal. It's much easier this way.

Anyway keep practicing. :3

 

Thankies :P I will!