Heart's Poetry

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  1. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Ok I usually don't write poetry but I do have a poem I'd like to share with you guys. I might write more poems but I'm not sure xD This poem was really just a spur of the moment really. I wrote this for a boy in my school who I had a crush on and that year he graduated from my school. (He was a year older then me) A lot of people made fun of me and annoyed him so I never said a word to him that I liked him... Well here it is...

    Regret

    In the future
    I may regret
    Not telling him
    How I felt
    For telling others
    I even had a crush
    And never having…
    The courage to say…
    What I wanted
    In all my Heart
    To say…​
     
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    Well, we've all certainly had crushes at one point or another.

    Anyway, the poem was kind of short, but it still worked out quite well. The ending with the heart was the best part. I also liked how the whole poem's concept was about crushes, not just one section of the poem.

    Overall, I would give it a 9/10.
     
  3. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Wow a 9/10?!?
    Ama you are to kind my friend XD
    I was really surprised I wrote it so well because( if I remember correctly) It came to me while I was at lunch xD and I usually hate poetry too xD
     
  4. Plums Wakanda Forever

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    If you move some of the words around, you can actually have a haiku. xD

    Anyway, I thought the poem was short, but sweet at the same time. It was really innocent, but that's what makes it work, in my opinion. And the Heart thing made me laugh. xD

    Overall good job, Heart. c:
     
  5. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Thank You for such kind words Plums <3

    I have three new poems I would like to share with ya'll xD

    The first one I wrote last school year right after a science test believe it or not xD I have no idea where it came from but I like it and I decided to share it.

    A Dreamer

    A Dreamer is someone who dreams
    A Dreamer is someone who believes
    A Dreamer is who tries their hardest
    A Dreamer is someone who follows their dreams
    A Dreamer is me

    This next one I wrote today thinking about all my friends that I have- both online and offline. This poem is dedicated to Maka, Jayn and What? as well as others from other websites and my real life friends. Thank you guys so much :D

    Friends
    Friends always stand by your side
    They talk with you
    They let you vent
    They hang out with you
    They made you feel better when you’re sad
    And true friends…
    Are like your family…


    Alive

    Here
    And Now
    Worry about
    Tomorrow Tomorrow
    Live
    Now
    Think about
    The future
    Later
    And
    Think about Tomorrow
    Another day… ​

    Well I hope everyone who reads these enjoys them :D
     
  6. What? 『 music is freedom 』

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    A rather interesting poem, I must say - I enjoy the usage of repetition in the beginning, it keeps the simplicity and yet holds many layers of meaning to what a dreamer may be, indeed.

    Oh goodness, thank you dearly for such dedicating madam. It is, perhaps, quite true that the greatest poetic expression is one that is able to convey emotions and mood in raw itself, and such is perhaps noted and exemplary with this lovely poem here. I must concur, true friends truly are akin to family.

    I must say the way these words were arranged for this poem brought an interesting method of reading - a sort of direct look into the thought process featuring this itself, with the juxtaposition between present and future being an interesting factor.

    Bravo in general madam!
     
  7. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Oh Thank You for such kind words my dear friend xD Dedicating that poem to you was the least I could do for everything you have done for me :D
     
  8. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Sorry for double post but I have another poem. This is for all those who died on 9/11, as well as my friend Ray's father who died on Thursday.

    Gone

    Forever in memory
    Gone from the Earth
    In Heaven with our Father
    Forever in our hearts
    Although gone from this world
    We will never forget them
    So rest in peace
    All those who are gone
    From our world..​
     
  9. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    Awe, i'm so sorry for your friends loss and this is a nice piece. It does well to make us remember exactly what it is we have lost, but to also look toward the future holding them in our hearts. Your formatting and grammar worked nicely together. I hope to hear more pieces from you like this.
     
  10. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Ok Guys Alot of poems today :D


    All Alone:

    Just wanna cry

    Don't know what to do

    If they leave me behind

    Then....

    I won't have no one...

    Expect him...

    and I'll be as good

    As invisible...

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    Now for two much more happier poems! Oh Power Ranger fans!

    Red, Blue, Yellow

    Black,Pink, White

    And of course Green

    The Power Rangers are here

    And they will save the day!​


    Is it a bird?

    No!

    It is a plane?

    No!

    It's the Falcon Megazord!​
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    Leaving this School:

    To leave this school

    Means to leave my friends

    People I've known for years

    And others just this year

    Some people I'll never see again

    Others I might not even hear from ever again

    But I'll always cherish the memories

    Good and Bad​

    I'll miss them

    Good friends

    And the bad ones

    But I'll always remember

    The time at this school

    Forever​
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    Tick Tock:


    Tick Tock

    Tick Tock

    Tick Tock

    The second hand goes around the clock

    Once

    Twice

    Three Times

    Wish the time would fly

    Tick Tock

    Tick Tock

    Tick Tock

    Once again

    Twice again

    Three times again

    Finally...

    That bell rings...​


    The next class

    Just one more period

    Only 40 more minutes

    Until freedom

    Tick Tock

    Tick Tock

    Tick Tock

    That bell rings again

    Finally I'm free.....​
     
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    The first one was very very sad.

    All the good times you could have had....

    That one really had me sit there, sobbing

    But when I heard the power ranger one, my heart started throbbing

    This were very interesting, keep up the good work

    All posts from friends, always makes me smirk:)
     
  12. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    D'awww I am so happy you liked them :D

    I wrote another poem today but i need to type it so it'll be posted tomorrow :D
     
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    Okay can't wait to read them.
     
  14. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    A new poem. It's depressing and so's my life <_<

    Try Not to Care


    I try not to care
    That he likes her and not me.
    I try not to care that it doesn’t break my heart
    Knowing he just likes her because she’s pretty.
    And not that he likes her
    Because they like the same things
    Like we do.
    I try not to care
    Even though it hurts
    More than anything…
     
  15. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Two new poems

    Ordinary

    I’m just an ordinary girl
    With ordinary brown hair
    And simple brown eyes
    I’m nothing special
    I have a hand full of friends
    Both real
    But mostly online
    I may like some things
    That most others don’t
    Like animes
    Or certain video games
    But I’m proud
    Proud of being
    Simple, ordinary me


    Thanksgiving

    In this world
    There are so many
    Things I am thankful for
    My family
    My home
    My singing voice
    My writing ability (that’s growing every day)
    And most of all…
    My dear friends
    Jayn…
    Plums…
    Maka…
    Ienzo…
    My lovely siblings
    What?..
    Jaden…
    Buster…
    My good friends…
    And last but nowhere near least…
    My Machi <3
    Without all of you
    I really don’t know what I would do
    So thank you…
    Each and every one of you <3
     
  16. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Another poem. Depressing but meh xD

    Pretend

    I always pretend
    That it doesn’t hurt
    To be left out
    To be not included
    To be ignored
    Like I don’t even exist
    Like I’m not even alive
    Like I’m not even there
    It’s always been like this
    So I should be used to it
    But it just hurts
    So much…
    And it seems…
    That no one cares at all
    And sometimes
    That’s so true
    And it just makes me…
    Wanna give up….
     
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    Read the Thanksgiving one. Very sweet. i didn't know I'd be in it though.....thank you very much.


    For Pretend, very sad. This one almost spoke to me. Very nice job! Keep it up!
     
  18. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Kay I has more poems after... 2-3 months? xD

    This one was written based on a topic at school and I felt quite close to this poem that I wrote

    Life
    As the sun rises
    I awaken from the slumber
    I seek the sun’s warmth
    I think about everything
    That’s going on in my life
    No one talks to me
    No one pays me any attention
    They pretend I don’t exist
    No one cares what happens to me
    They wouldn’t realize if I was gone-
    If I were dead

    Then I think about the people who really matter
    My friends
    My family
    And my God
    I realize that my life isn’t so bad
    And that there are really who people care
    Even if they are few
    They are still here
    For me
    And I love them
    As much as they love me
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    This next poem I wrote after one of my classmates for seriously hurt in class and my class had the nerve to laugh at him. My own friends were laughing at him and I got really mad at them. Poetry is a great way to get out anger, ya know?

    Hurting/Bullying
    Sometimes I just can’t do it
    I just don’t wanna be here
    To deal with everything-
    Every stupid freaking thing
    People bullying each other
    People-hell my own friends!- laughing when a fellow classmate gets hurt
    It just hurts when I see them laughing
    Because I know others wouldn’t like it
    If other people laughed at them
    If they got hurt
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    I had a pretty ****** day at school when I wrote this.

    When will this day end?

    It’s freezing cold

    Just like my heart

    I just wanna cry

    I just can’t do this

    I wanna get away from this school

    To be at home and be free

    To hand out with my real friends

    Or go on the internet

    I just want this day to be over
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    This poem was written after I had a fight with one of my friends

    If He Thinks

    If he thinks
    I care what he says to her
    He’s wrong
    If he thinks his lies bother me
    They don’t
    If he thinks
    I should only be his friend
    He’s outta his freaking mind
    I’m aloud to have other friends
    And I don’t care what he thinks
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    Kay last poem ^^ I wrote this after I got upset that one girl in my class always gets picked for stuff put I never do..

    Envious
    I can’t help
    But feel envious
    When she gets chosen
    It’s always the same
    She gets picked for this
    She gets picked for that
    It’s just not fair!
    Some people
    Like me
    Never get chosen
    For anything
    So why must she
    Get chosen for everything?
     
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    My so artistic but so full of hurt at the same time. Very nice, and I do hope things get better for you.
     
  20. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Things will get better after I leave the current school I'm in-then I go to HS and everything should be better. I'm really happy you like 'em ^^