Half finished song of mine

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Shadow, Mar 2, 2007.

  1. Shadow Banned

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    Escaping death
    Is not an easy task
    When your running from the devil
    Better run f***ing fast

    Im still dying
    Im not lying
    If you want
    I'll keep on crying

    Im still dying
    Im not lying
    If you want
    I'll keep on crying

    Pistol in my hand
    A bullet for a broken heart
    (like) A fist full of sand
    I'm falling through - Back to the start

    Im still dying
    Im not lying
    If you want
    I'll keep on crying

    Im still dying
    Im not lying
    If you want
    I'll keep on crying

    Yesh, thats all. Not finished yet. What u think?
     
  2. Rawr King's Apprentice

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    I like it it needs a soft guitar and a drum and it wound be a #1 charter