Gone forever

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  1. Knightshade Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Okay, first off. The story take place in the future where 99% of the worlds population has been killed in a atomic war. And all that's left of the world is one gaint city where the rest of the worlds population lives. All except for the "Rebels" Who are a group of people who live past the city's gates into the toxicated land of the dead. For centuries the "Rebels" have been trying to break past the city's walls so they can claim the city as their own. But are constantly stopped by a organization known as the S.I. But the interesting thing about S.I.'s warriors is that the're all around the age of 17. And the way they get these super soldiers, even more interesting.
    During the night S.I. agents steals babies from the hosptitaly and tell the parents that there child died because of natural causes, After this they take them to this facility. In the facility they let the kids grow up all teh while they sart to train them through rigerous tests. And pretty much for the kids they no no different since they have been there there whole life. All they know is that once they reach the age of 17they are taken out of the facility to fight on the frontlines against the "rebels" Also the kids who are at the facility (The ones stolen at birth) are expected to only show minimum expression of emotions. Things such as love, and grief shall be treated harshly. They are also punished for imagining things such as there real parents, who they are given no information of.
    And that's pretty much the story. Here the character format (I will have it so people can be Rebel's later in the story) Also the people here don't have magicall powers or anything. But it is in the future so there is futuristsic guns, ect.

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    ooc name: Knightshade
    Character name: Fayte
    appearance:
    Personality: Although he knows he's not supposed to show emotions of love or effection he often goes against these rules, even though he knows he will be punished.
    Strengths: Is extremmely agile.
    Weaknesses: Isn't very strong
    Bio: Has a secret hope of somehow escaping into the city.
    Other: nope




    ooc name: Knightshade
    Character name: Nero
    appearance: an average man of 30 years old. His face is always emotionless.
    Personality: extremely strict and will go to any extremes to make sure the trainees show no emotions.
    Strengths: Is extremely fast.
    Weaknesses: at times can not control his emotions
    Bio: Is the leader of the organization
    Other:
     
  2. Spunk Ransom you're already perfect

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    ooc name: sorafangirl
    Character name: Alice
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    Personality: Kind to others that grew up in the facility with her.
    Strengths: Protects people and is a good fighter.
    Weaknesses: Has trouble keeping her emotions inside.
    Bio: Gew up in the facility.
    Other: Meh.
     
  3. Knightshade Hollow Bastion Committee

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    ooc: Okay your in :D
     
  4. Flamedancer Twilight Town Denizen

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    ooc name: Flamedancer (Flame for short)
    Character name: Kanaye
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    (pic does not belong to me)
    Personality: Quiet, serious, barely shows emotion except for certain times. He's capable of caring, but for the most part, he's just a soldier.
    Strengths: He's a strong fighter and a good listener.
    Weaknesses: He goes berserk when he loses his temper.
    Bio: He's a soldier who was raised in the facility
    Other: The pic doesn't belong to me.
     
  5. Knightshade Hollow Bastion Committee

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    ooc: Kay, your added
     
  6. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    hehe i'll join XD

    ooc name: AngelsNeedFlight
    Character name: Maryse
    appearance: [​IMG]
    Personality: quiet, and is more likely reading a book than talking, but does admire friendship
    Strengths: is a natural fighter, is very informative
    Weaknesses: can be a little uncaring at times
    Bio: Her father left her mother before she was born, her mother fell sick from depression and died at Maryse's birth so if she ever did go look for her parents, she'll have nothing to find
     
  7. Knightshade Hollow Bastion Committee

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    ooc: Kay, your in :D
     
  8. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    you don't have a character yet
     
  9. Spunk Ransom you're already perfect

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    I was thinking that as well.
     
  10. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    Make 1 Make 1
     
  11. Knightshade Hollow Bastion Committee

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    There we go lol...and I geuss we can start rp'ing now if you want
     
  12. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    i cant start anything ... someone else has too
     
  13. Knightshade Hollow Bastion Committee

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    ooc: I gtg, i'll start it tommorrow
     
  14. Deathsight44 Kingdom Keeper

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    Character name: Hiiro (hee-roa)
    appearance: [​IMG]
    Personality: Barely has any emotion, but acts as if he does, due to his special traits. Almost always is smiling, and acts some what of a coward in situations though when acting
    Strengths: Stealth, acting, good reflexes, and is skilled with razor gauntlets
    Weaknesses: Due to his lack of emotions, it is not as if he truelly has any weaknesses. He is made to be uncaring, not even caring to pay attention to a child that is dieng. If anything, he is not that much of a team fighter, and does not care for who he kills
    Bio: Trained specificly to infiltrate the rebels themselves, and to be the perfect puppet, he was wiped of all emotions by placing him through the most cruel of mental training. Though most are not supposed to show emotion, he shows full emotion, but in truth, has none. He remains loyal to his masters no matter what, and does whatever he is ordered to do. In other words, he is the perfect human puppet
    Other: Uses razor gauntlets, or in other words, gauntlets (the ones in this picture)
     
  15. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    ooc name: The Fifth Element
    Character name: Brynn Sanxay(goes by Tristan)
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    Personality: Cold and calculating, she is the perfect soldier for fighting the rebels. She graduates (on the first day of the rp). As she got closer and closer to graduation she began to see that others had emotions and now she struggles to understand them and connect with people. So far she has failed.
    Strengths: She is a strong calculated fighter. She is fast and agile
    Weaknesses: She takes everything completely and totally literally.
    Bio: Raised in the facility, she took on the title "Tristan" and masqueraded as a boy most of the time she was there. No one knows her secret or has ever found it out.
    Other: She uses two 9mm semi-automatics and a small dirk strapped to her leg right above her left boot.
     
  16. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    ookay im going to try and start but don't expect anything decent from me... i suck ... i cant even start an assignment

    ....Maryse was being pulled by the arm to what the kids called "The Punishment Room". It was originally created to teach the children one - on - one combat, but it seems that everybody who makes a mistake gets put in there. She only asked if she sat out todays group training, as she was feeling unwell, but the "masters" believe this as a way of standing out so she ended up here. The cold, white room of which she stood in seemed bigger thanit actually was. She feared the worse as she was forced the walk inside. The cold eyes in the man seemed to hypnotise, making Maryse feel that what she did was wrong. She was asked to take a weopen and defend herself. Even though the men knew they couldn't really kill the kids, they were at least allowed to hurt them. Netherless Maryse waited her punishment as the man came running up to her with his weopen.

    After the "one on one" was over, the group training had also finished. Children of all ages stared at her as she had bruises in a couple of parts on her body. They all understood how she got them, and most avoided her for it... thinking that they might be sent there to if they were caught talking to a miscreant. She sat in the cafeteria, knowing that kids will soon be bursting in, looking for a good seat as lunch was about to start


    okay that is officially the longest 'start' i have ever done
     
  17. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    ooc name:Maria
    Character name:Lina
    Personality:Cheerful and optimistic, which gets her in trouble, and kind of has a big mouth.
    appearance:Pic Weapon
    Weaknesses:She usually jumps into trouble instead of thinking first.
    Bio:Raised at the facility, she wonders what her parents were like.
    Other:She can steal anything from anyone without getting caught, most of the time.
     
  18. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    im sure you can just post love.. lol i laughed at the name seeing as one of my best friends name is lina
     
  19. Doukuro Chaser

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    Character name: Terri Lynn
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    Personality: Acts cold so she won't be able to ake connetions with others and thus she'll have no pain. Stubborn
    Strengths: Good fighter
    Weaknesses: Fights with her emtions too often and has trusts issues
    Bio: Being taken away a birth she never knew such things as parents or the outside world. Now as a warrior she is seeing things for the first time but is unable to understand wrong from right
    Other: Perfer guns over swords and blades but is able to use both. Likes animals but mostly cats
     
  20. Fayt-Harkwind Where yo curly mustache at?

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    ooc name: Fayt-Harkwind
    Character name: Rik
    appearance: Black hait with blonde ends, black trousers, black shirt, black jacket, black boots, redish eyes, pale skin.
    Personality: crude and arrogant
    Strengths: great swordsmanship, usually is sent to sneak up on enemies
    Weaknesses: he's ho good at long range fights.
    Bio: He was one of the super soliders raised into a living weapon. He began to hate any thing he deemed as weak and became arrogant.
    Other: always carries around his sword
     
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