Traditional Art Goku(GT)

Ok i drew goku from dragon ball gt and it was my first time so its messed up some (also i havent drew in a while) so here check it out http://s204.photobucket.com/albums/bb261/cobrademon/?action=view&current=goku-2.jpg

 

okay.... the first thing i noticed was the ears, one is completly different from the other (not trying to be rude or anything but ya) but a minor problem is the hair, on the left it is a little bit too close to the head... the shirt on the left shoulder is up a little but other than that it looks really good! well done!

 

The proportions are very off. If you want to keep the arms that size, bring out the shoulders some more, and make the hands much larger. The neck should be much wider. The ears are too close to the end of the head, and they are too big. Make sure they are the same size and shape and higher on the side of the head. The hair does not look like it's shaped right, find a good referance picture of the character and draw from that. The chest should be larger and wider to fit in proportion with the arms. The face need s alot of work. The eyes are uneven, make them in line with eachother. Bring the eyebrow down and don't curve it up so much, think more of up slightly and over. The nose shouldnt be shaped like a triangle, it should be one line that shows where it is. Make the mouth even as well and slightly smaller. When drawing the definition of areas like the collarbone, a line does not look good. Use a lighter line and shading to show those area. The shading on the clothing can be blended somewhat and added more to the lower body area.
Keep working on it, and practice proportions, then it will improve.Referance pictures help so much, use them too.

 

thanks for the tips i havent drew in a while so i new it was messeed up