Well i kind of rushed on these because I didn't have enough time on my hands to finish unless i rushed ^^;
They both have very nice detail but I feel that the first is better than the second one but still needs work... There's just something off about it... I feel it's the neck. The neck is too long and it makes the head looks small. Very nice though! :3
OKay, i done another drawing last night ^^ I took advantage of the position i drew bella in and made another drawing about a time when she was in Breaking Dawn I'm also taking advantage of drawing other types of anime, and i'm beginning to draw other things that aren't allowed on KH-V The anatomy of the body i shall say xD those who don't want spoiler's for Breaking Dawn, don't look xD Spoiler This drawing is made for during Bella and Edwards Honeymoon. The 'after' part of the physical love. Where she is covered in bruises
This on is you're best out of all of them. You're very first drawing at the top is creepy. They eyes are what makes it kinda off.
i know it creeps me out i might burn it xD But i still feel as if I could do so much better if I take more time. I didn't rush this drawing but i could've done alot better.
yeah i agree the eyes are the only thing that's off and FYI your sig is spelled wrong its 'having' than 'haveing'
I think if you gave Edward a little bit more of lips and chin... awesome! Bella, oh Bella, I just love!!! Awesome work! x]