CnC please... I followed a tutorial for this one...=/ I know i suck at text. Does anyone else think the greyscale looks bad?
Text - make it stand out more. Render - too blurry (probably has something to do with the darkness around.) Random whitespots - a bit overdone, try limiting yourself to around 3 or 4. Overall, the render itself has the most problems. It's placed weirdly in the center (perhaps moving it a bit to the left?), the shoulders (particularly the left one) has those pixelize fragments... annoying. On the other hand, you did a fantastic job on the smudging and burning (hopefully you did) with a bit of dodging, so... Not one of your best work, but definitely with the best smudges IMO, if they are smudges. xD
