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Discussion in 'Archives' started by Tora-chan, Jul 10, 2008.

  1. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    I seriously thought i had already posted this poem/song but I can't find it anywhere haha. So bear with me. I just thought of this when I was in the car the other day. CnC?
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    So tangled in this web from the past
    While he moves on at long last
    He tells me to forget
    But how can I
    When there's so much to regret?
    It never ends
    This feeling--
    With no name?
    I don't want it
    Can't leave it
    Am hurt by it
    Can't believe it...
    Change.
     
  2. Hubba-Bubba-Bubbles Hollow Bastion Committee

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    it's pretty ^^ keep up the good work but one question is it a poem or song?
     
  3. Jiku Neon Kingdom Keeper

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    Stumbles upon itself at bits rhythmically, but it's not bad.
     
  4. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    Thanks. Well it's more of a poem for now, but i find myself singing it. So i'll probably go back one day and rewrite the whole thing into a song ^^'