Birthright (Read and Reveiw)

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  1. TheOtherKeyblade Destiny Islands Resident

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    Give this a shot. H’okay, this is a little something that I wrote for my sister. It’s her plot, her characters and her ideas. She just doesn’t write very well. Though that might be because she’s six. xD That’s right, this plot was thought up by a six year old. So if it seems a little Mary-Sue it’s because at that age, every princess is beautiful. XD and its based on herself. Most of the actions that Cailean does are very Cecily… and the fact that it’s true Cecily doesn’t like Kairi.

    Don’t ask me. I heart Kairi.

    Basically she stated she wanted her character to be the Princess of Kingdom Hearts as if Kingdom Hearts was a place, and she created a little story to go with it. (I'm in it too!! Aww!) She said she really liked the new Secret Movie so that’s where her idea came from. XD She’s so cute. So yeah- Enjoy, review, and I’ll tell her what you all think.

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    Birthright

    Tomoe was bored. Make that very bored. Plus, she was also very hot.

    It wasn’t a good combination.

    The island sun was strange to her when she had been living in the cool moonlight all her life. In fact, she had been surprised when the Seniors had given her leave to find the source of the Kingdom’s distress. She was even more surprised when they sent the Princess and Mage with her. She sighed and brushed back her short thick hair into a ponytail. The effect was a little cooler, but her Black Uniform wasn’t helping matters. She tugged the cape and tight jacket off laying it behind her in a bundle. At least it wasn’t her armour.

    And she was still bored. That couldn’t be helped; she had been sitting up here all day, watching everyone else play. She sighed watching the shadows grow longer. Her blank, dark eyes watched the two boys make their way to the smaller island off the shore. She shoved the long thin key blade into the top of the tree house she was sitting on and tried to lie back, using her cloak and jacket as a pillow.

    It wouldn’t be long now.

    In fact she only had to wait a few moments before the light sound of trickling water reached her ears. A soft splashed fallowed and Tomoe barley reached back and moved her things over before the water trickled past her and off the top of the tree house. A giggle fallowed as a young child of seven plopped gracefully beside her. Tomoe turned her blank eyes toward the child, and big doe-brown eyes awaited her.

    The princess had taken to life outside the Kingdom more than her or Damian had. She dressed more colorful that she would have been allowed to at court- Bright blue ballet shoes, palm green skirt and her shirts seemed to always remain the bright gold of the strange star shaped fruit that dominate this island. Her long chocolate brown waves, while it would have been confined to the Royal braids in home, were left down and collected around her elbows. Tomoe shook her head. Her own cool silver-blue locks were as long as being a Royal Knight would allow, and even that was too much on this hot island. The Princess played with her pink bow, grinning ear to ear.

    “Tomoe.†She said sweetly.

    The Knight raised a brow. “Princess…†She replied equally as light.

    “Um… Where Damian?†The child rocked back and forth, her thick waves bouncing with her.

    Tomoe almost frowned, her blank stare still dominating her pale face. “What did you do?â€

    “Nothing…†The princess retorted sharply, throwing her hands down into her lap. Tomoe fixed her with another blank stare as the young beauty pouted, slumping her shoulders. “Why do you and Damian always think I did something?â€

    Tomoe didn’t reply but turned her gaze back to the shore as the Princess rambled off in her defense. The two of the three were watching were now at the Star Fruit tree, and were silently sitting. Tomoe’s sharp gaze flew across the beach till they landed on the cinnamon red girl searching along the shore. She couldn’t help but sigh in relief.

    “… besides, Damian himself gave me forgiveness for that time with the spider, because I actually didn’t know he was afraid of him.†The Princess continued her defense, counting each forgiven offense on her elegant hands. Tomoe noticed with slight amusement that she was quickly running out of fingers. She needed to stop the child before that happened.

    “State our mission, Princess.†Her clear voice rang with the same commanding tone she used with her troops. The Princess looked up confused,

    “Mission?â€

    “You know why we are here.†Tomoe gaze landed on the girl on the beach again. The Royal Knight could hear her princess sigh. “Our mission is to protect the Keyblade Weilder and ensure the tranqu…tran-†Her smooth, educated voice tripped over the word.

    “Tranquility.†Tomoe prompted, pulling the iridescent keyblade out of the roof and letting it disappear in her grip. The Princess nodded continuing-

    “Tranquility of Kingdom Hearts while not revealing ourselves to… anyone.†She finished with the air of someone who was sick of hearing the same lesson over and over. Tomoe almost smiled.

    “And how did Damian find as the best way to protect the Keyblade Master?â€

    Princess pouted, “Protect the Weilder of Darkness and Princess of Heart…†her voice spat out the last title as the Princess herself gave a childish pout.

    Tomoe gathered up her things, pulling back on the thick jacket. “It is those thoughts that caused you to loose your place as a candidate as the last Princess of Heart, Cailean.â€

    At the sound of her real name, the Princess started, and then sighed. “She’s not even a princess any more.â€

    “Regardless, there is no darkness in her heart and she is a princess. You however are often vain, selfish and your father spoiled you in your youth.â€

    “My self confidence soars, Tomoe.†Cailean said darkly, “As the Princess of Kingdom Hearts, that place has always been my birthright.†The Princess was sending death glares at the redhead now bending to pick something out of the shoals. The Knight’s sharp black gaze caught site of the bottle and nodded.

    Damian had done his job.

    The Black Knight stood, fastening the shimmering black cloak around her pale neck. “Again, The Daughter of Radiant Garden was chosen, and now it is your responsibility to protect her. Your Keyblades are proof of that. â€

    The princess stood by her Knight and light shimmered by her hands. Two Keyblades, both far too colorful for Kingdom Heart’s Court, appeared in her hands. The first sharp teeth were made up of the figure of Star Fruit from this world on the cool palm green handle, while the second was made up of the sharp edges of a bright pink ribbon and elaborate gold heart on a purple blade. In a childish move, she threw this off the top. She turned her back on them.

    Tomoe actually chuckled, “You know that doesn’t work.â€

    The Keys shimmered in air as the reappeared back in her hands. The Princess sighed and let them disappear.

    ‘Don’t be a child, Princess.†Tomoe shook her head, leaned forward to speak to the child, “When this side formed an organization we were sent to help stop them from entering our world. We’ve done our job. Now Look, Damian has spoken with the Mouse King. They have their new orders and we have ours. Your father wants you home.â€

    The Princess of Heart ran under them, clutching the bottle tightly. Cailean watched as she ran across the bridge, calling her friend’s names.

    “Sora! Riku!â€

    The boys turned.

    “It’s still not fair.†She muttered, “I get to live in a moonlit castle for the rest of my life as she get’s-“

    “Hey? What’s wrong?†The boys seemed almost worried as the Princess of Heart bent over catching her breath. She held up the bottle, “Look.â€

    “This.†Cailean sighed, and turned away. Water flowed up from under her, wrapping around the child like a welcoming hug. She disappeared in a trickle of wet drops.

    Tomoe stared at the place where her Princess had disappeared. Her heart ached for the child who had waited for her birthright all her life only to find herself, for lack of better words, "unworthy". Tomoe couldn’t blame the child her envy, though she did wish the beauty would notice her own gifts. She looked back at the island, where the three friends were standing around the bottle’s message.

    Where would it lead them this time?

    “Till next time, my friends.â€

    Stars wrapped around the knight, and she caught sight of the sun setting before she too disappeared in a shower of silver.



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    Yeah, we don’t have any more than that, but it was my sister’s idea to lead into KH III But she doesn’t know have any more ideas. So this might be all you get. Darn because I wan't to see what Damain looked like. :confused: