Lost tears roll down my cheek And my heart is filled with sorrow This pain... is it reality Or is this an illusion that traps me in tomorrow? You said love is an adventure Each new day is part of the plot But now you've left me stranded With only the chains in which I'm caught I believed you when you filled my head with lies And I trusted that we would be together Why did you leave me here on Earth... When you reside in Heaven forever? I want to be able to forgive you Dying was not your fault But why can't I let you go... Is this the end to us all? As you may have noticed the title has nothing to do with the poem but hey it sounds cool! would it be too much to ask if i asked for your thoughts on it? (that was oddly polite something i usually never am)
i like it a lot i've been using raindrop as a metaphor for some of my writing i posted one here but this one is so sad and sweet i like it and it sucks when u can't let go because that is the hardest part hope you can't relate to the poem but incase u do i'm rly sry *gives cookie*