Before the rain falls

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  1. amythest Traverse Town Homebody

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    Lost tears roll down my cheek
    And my heart is filled with sorrow
    This pain... is it reality
    Or is this an illusion that traps me in tomorrow?

    You said love is an adventure
    Each new day is part of the plot
    But now you've left me stranded
    With only the chains in which I'm caught

    I believed you when you filled my head with lies
    And I trusted that we would be together
    Why did you leave me here on Earth...
    When you reside in Heaven forever?

    I want to be able to forgive you
    Dying was not your fault
    But why can't I let you go...
    Is this the end to us all?

    As you may have noticed the title has nothing to do with the poem but hey it sounds cool! would it be too much to ask if i asked for your thoughts on it? (that was oddly polite something i usually never am)
     
  2. Very Berry Gummi Ship Junkie

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    i like it a lot i've been using raindrop as a metaphor for some of my writing i posted one here but this one is so sad and sweet i like it and it sucks when u can't let go because that is the hardest part hope you can't relate to the poem but incase u do i'm rly sry *gives cookie*