this is a story i made for school. its got some characters from fma except i made myself the main character. i hope u ppl like it(i need feedback!) King Bradley stood in his office looking out the window of his large office and saw nothing but blue skies and soldiers below, guarding the entrance to his 5 story office building. Suddenly there was an explosion below. Down below before the soldiers there was a hole in the ground and a man, no a boy jumped out. The boy looked to be about thirteen and his right arm was made of steel and the palm of his left hand had a faint glow of red energy. He clapped his hands together and then ran his left had across his right arm and pulled a blade out of the metal plating on his knuckle. He lunged foreword and cut the soldiers down one by one. All that was left was the colonel who stood before him with a gloved hand raised. ” Burn. ” The colonel said and he snapped his fingers and flames appeared. The boy moved quickly as flames burned the spot where he just stood. The boy looked at the colonel and smiled a devilish smile as a ran strait for him, jumped and the air and brought his metal arm-blade down on the colonel ’ s shoulder. The colonel screamed in pain as his shoulder started to bleed. Next the boy grabbed the colonel ’ s gloved hand with his left hand and focused. In a matter of seconds the colonels hand was gone, and he screamed in pain. The boy walked into the office building and grabbed the head of the first soldier he saw and focused and soon the soldier was a just a headless body. All the other soldiers dropped their weapons at that second and just watched as the boy clapped his hands and touched the ground. The ground beneath his feet rose to the ceiling and he put his hand on the ceiling, blowing a whole through it until he reached the 5 th floor. He stood in front of King Bradley and his right hand man, envy, the shape- shifting soldier. “ look who ’ s here ” said envy, and then he punched the boy in the face and the boy retaliated by kicking envy in the stomach. Envy shifted his shape to that of an armored soldier and started rapidly punching the boy. The boy blocked the punches with his metal arm and then punched envy in his jaw with his right arm and broke his jaw. Envy fell to the ground in pain. “ its about time some one shut that big mouth of yours for good ” the boy said. “ Well done ” said King Bradley as he pulled out his sword. He attacked the boy with a stab to the chest but the boy blocked it and jumped away. The boy clapped his hands and his arm-blade disappeared, and he touched the ground and pulled out his own sword “ lets do this right ” the boy said. The boy slashed and the king blocked and counter attacked, damaging the boys metal arm. The boy started just rapidly slashing at the king, landing blows here and there and soon started beating his sword until he knocked it out of his hands. He grabbed the kings head and said “ die ” as he focused and soon the kings whole body was nothing but a mass of blood and gore scattered around the room. The boy was about to leave when the body regenerated and he heard the kings voice say “ I ’ m not human…I thought you knew ” . “ Then what are you? ” the boy said with fear in his voice. “ I ’ m a creature called a homunculus, we cant be killed like humans ” the king said. ” we? ” the boy said. “ envy is like me ” said the king as he grabbed the boy by the neck and threw him against the desk on the far side of the room. The boy noticed a drawer was knocked open and there was, of all things, a skull inside. He grabbed the skull and walked towards Bradley with the skull pointed at him. Bradley looked pale and he couldn ’ t move. “ I ’ ve heard of homunculus before, that ’ s why I knew that this skull would stop you where you stand. ” The boy said. He focused and Bradley burned away in a burst of fire and the boy dropped the skull on the floor. When he did envy stood up and shifted his arm into a javelin and stabbed the boy through his left shoulder. The boy ’ s eyes widened. After a second he picked up the skull with his right hand and pointed it at envy, his arm reverted from javelin form and he stood there, pale