A poem for a girl I like

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  1. ClawtheCyclops113 Traverse Town Homebody

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    I wrote this poem for a girl I like.

    Come with me to a world unknown to us. Don’t be scared, I’m right here. You

    Make feel that I could touch the planets. You are of a kind. My eyes opened up when I saw. You were the most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen.

    You have gotten to me, you have stolen my heart. Your kindness and honesty are the most important.

    Your beautiful face has opened up the clouds. It rain when you’re not around.



    There are no clouds when you’re not around. I have fallen deeply in love with you.

    The sun shines when you are around. You got me stuck by the way you glow.



    You are always on my mind, I will always think about you. I am your shield and sword.

    The stars spell out your name. I could watch you forever. You are my Hollywood treasure.

    No girl will ever be greater than you. You are a classy one. The reason my eyes open up. I’m

    Right here, I’ll protect you.



    Don’t be scared of the outside world, It’s me and you against the world. The stars bring out your beautiness. Every time I see you, it makes my day. You may say you’re not beautiful, but you will always be beautiful to me, I will never win this game without you. I won’t breath without you. I won’t live without you. I’d never seen a star this close. I don’t need money, I don’t need fame, all I need is you.

    This poem shows you how much I love you, how much I love you, how much you mean to me. I’ll never let anyone hurt you or touch you. Don’t be scared, I’m right here. Hold my hand, don’t let go. We can go to a place I know. Close your eyes don’t make a sound, just come. I got my head up in the sky. I’m never looking down feeling priceless.

    I will always love you, no matter what happens.

     
  2. Styx That's me inside your head.

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    I'm sure she'd love to hear it, it is very touching and feels very honest.
     
  3. ClawtheCyclops113 Traverse Town Homebody

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    She hugs everytime she sees me. Im thinking of asking her out
     
  4. lil woj Merlin's Housekeeper

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    You obviously care for this girl.
    I think you should really go for her.
     
  5. ClawtheCyclops113 Traverse Town Homebody

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    You really think so
     
  6. lil woj Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Yes i do.
    Take it from me somebody with experience.
    It is better to be true to your feelings.
    You dont hide your feelings.
    You express them.
    Now how you do so is up to you <3
     
  7. ClawtheCyclops113 Traverse Town Homebody

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    I want to tell her my true feelings about her
     
  8. lil woj Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Then that's what you do.
    You dont hesitate you just have to tell her...
    Thats the best way to approach this.

    How long have you liked her?
     
  9. ClawtheCyclops113 Traverse Town Homebody

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    For 4 months
     
  10. lil woj Merlin's Housekeeper

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    What i would do is take her out somewhere.
    Make her dinner.
    Do something with her that she enjoys and that you can enjoy.

    And at the end of the night let her know how you feel.
    Let her know that youve had true feelings for her for such a long time.
     
  11. lil woj Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I wish u the best of luck . :)
     
  12. Plums Wakanda Forever

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    Hey guys, sorry to say I had to delete some posts since t was going off topic from the thread (poems). ;c

    If you'd like though, definitely encourage you to continue this over a VM or a PM~
     
  13. ClawtheCyclops113 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Thanks
     
  14. lil woj Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Its fine!
    Im sorry about nercobouncing!