Digital Art 「s h a l l i t a k e t h e F I R S T S H O T ?」

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Beau, Dec 31, 2012.

  1. Beau Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I don't even know asfklnsdlkag I'm sorry.

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    CnC would be much appreciated.
     
    Beau, Dec 31, 2012
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  2. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    Beau . . . this is absolutely stunning!! There's nothing I can say that could have been better. This is perfect!! The text is clearly visible, the colors are stunning, the caption is great! I like the cloud effect, it's really nice. I don't think there's a single thing that could've been done better. Excellent work ^^
     
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  3. Llave Superless Moderator

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    I don't see any problems with the composition, you did great with that. I also like the transparent text, it works well with the clouds whilst maintaining the consistency of the piece. No distractions.

    I would only say ease up on the cloud layer around the gent, just show a bit more of him from the neck down. It seems like an abrupt drop from his head to his shoulders and chest.
     
    Llave, Jan 9, 2013
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