Traditional Art ☆Innocence☆~

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Tootsie, Jul 9, 2007.

  1. Tootsie coquí

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    The head
    Since my camera has been a TOTAL BISH with me,this is the best pic I had.
    Description:It's a chibi wearing my clothes (YAHSRSLY).

    My drawings have been about chibis but I just love to draw chibis ^^

    Comments will be nice and also tips to get better at this.
    Thank you
     
  2. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    It is very very cute!!! ^^ And I luv the crown, =D!

    For some reason teh legs look like they aren't in the right position...but that's probably just me...:p
     
  3. Tootsie coquí

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    AAAAAH xD
    Im so bad at drawings legs...;-;
    but thanks!
    The crown means that Im a KH fan xD
     
  4. Xigbar The Freeshooter

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    It's really good, but the legs are out of proportion. Keep working on that and I'm sure you'll be better soon.
     
  5. Tootsie coquí

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    Thanks Xig,Ive been working on that but it seems I get worse and worse..
    xwX
     
  6. SplitOverload Chaser

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    It lukz cuteh. I like the hair, it looks well done IMO. The legs are a bit different angle I'm thinking? But overall good job. I like it :]
     
  7. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    Like do you want real CnC on propotions and real stuff like that or how to make it sweeter or something ? :3
     
  8. Tootsie coquí

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    Both plase.
    =3
     
  9. Nexit@h XIV King's Apprentice

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    It's so cute and well drawn! Good job!
    hmmm...I think the legs need a bit more work (I'm not the perfect person to say you that since I suck at drawing legs..xD) Aside from that this draw is really good! ;)
     
  10. Tootsie coquí

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    Thanks.
    ^_^
    I would love to see your work sometime.
     
  11. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    Hmm well then :
    The legs are unproportional & they are more to one side than the other.
    And her face try giving it some forms not just an oval(but it's okay since it's a chibi they are supposed ti be squishy ;3). And you could try to make her nose a tiny bit more visible :3
    You should also give her some shoulders and try making some clothing folds.
    And the stripes on the stockings could be used a little more time on.
    The hair could be more floating.
    A chibi doesn't nesecarily need human proportions. And about making it more sweet just put things you think are sweet on it and squishy.
    I really like the little crown you put on her :3 and it's sweet with stockings and blondes ~~
    There are probably other people than me than can give you a more correct/better CnC.
     
  12. Tootsie coquí

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    Actually,your CnC is fine.
    I will try to do my best next time,
    Also Im working on a chibi Roxas that I might post today or tomorrow.
    Thanks again ^_^
     
  13. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    Hmm if you say so xD
    No problem and I can't wait to see it ; D
     
  14. Nexit@h XIV King's Apprentice

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    You would? Thank you!
    Here is one of my works:

    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=17166

    Well...not half as good as yours but...I think it's good...;)
     
  15. Akarui Siren Destiny Islands Resident

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    Is that you?? =O you have long hair!!! And teh all time fav long socks~ <3 *hug leg* <--- pervert
     
  16. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    XD CHIBI *SQUISH*

    Honestly I don't know what to really say other than this straight is straight up KA-WA-EEEEE. Ah, I lie a little lol - the legs don't really follow the actual perspective of her body - they're a little too much to the side. P: But Kairi already said that so this isn't much of a comment...

    ....

    IT'S CUTE. *shuts up and leaves now*