Very Interesting,I really enjoyed it^^
I think I already posted?...Well to make sure, I enjoyed it =]
Great Job.
That was very interesting
I agree with your friends.I like it.
Yes I do like your chapter,but...Nevermind -_-''.Great editing Shades and Great story chapter thingy Mexony*coughsistercough*. =)
Hey sisterina :)
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nice Chapter. And Mexony stop talking about boyfriends, Or I'll tell the parents >=|(nah..) Anyways I like the chapter.It was nice that you continued the khcte Hitotsu dake je tsumannai!
Exciting, Keep it up.
ello. You said maybe counting in names right? If so. How 'bout you use.. Yukito.
Cool chapter. I enjoyed it all the way.
That was a cool chapter.I really enjoyed it.
=] good chapter
My guess is that myabe the keyblade came from trust and gift. all together it makes destiny. I don't think the keyblade passed on to Terra cuz umm...Beacause maybe Terra has the same equalities as Sora.Myabe they were lucky enough to wield the keyblade. ^-^
Who would I be is...well. I would love to be Namine because she is nice..tells the truth and more. ^-^
^^'' sorry im just bored so this is just for fun =| Hey im Chris Fulliet,you might think my life is awesome in the begging...but later it gets worst.So you better be thinking hard.Anyways, I go to Middleton high. And im 17,anyways i got to Middleton High and it SUCKS there.I used to have a friend named Timmy,but now he ditched me for a girl named Kayla,i don't like her so i haunte- your getting spoiled! " 50 bucks?! Mom your the best!" i said more happily than ever "$50.00. 10 for your lunch 10 for your school trip and 10 for your other lunch." Mom said "What about the other 20?" "Oh thats easy! 20 for that bully!!!" oh yeah thats Sara my little sis. "Shut up Sara!Go do some doodling!" I said. She just never understands. "Fine.But im waiting" Sara said. "I'm leaving,No breakfast for me" So I left,no snack but my friend, crumby! I have my taste. "Yo!Chris!" That is Tommy the friend ditcher! "So, did you get that school assighnment done,I'm sure I did." I said "Yeah, i finished it. Mr.Crockwell is so mean,10 pages!?" Tommy said "HA!!easy for me,but not for you two boys"This is Kathy,she is a straight A student "Oh come on Kathy, we all know you are-" "Smart?I know.I'm better than all of you" Kathy said with her perky nose and her perky mouth! She makes me sick! "Anyways,Tommy...Chris...I'm looking for my ipod. I left it on you desk.After you said ... Oh please i'll be careful with it and i wont give it to anyone else.So,where did it go?" Kathy asked "Umm...Tommy will say it" I know...how could I say that...but it is worth it. "What?!Ugh...fine.I uhh...gave it to my...CAT!!!" Oh great job Tommy,you blew it! "Cat?Not so true to me.Chris,it's your turn.WHERE IS MY IPOD!!!!???" Kathy said grabbing me by the shirt "I-I don't know!...Please don't hurt me..I'm only a teenager...i'm to young to die" I said,if I could show you how she looked in ugly form,you would like her one bit."Fine...I will just have to CALL YOUR MOM!!!" Kathy said,she softly letted go of my shirt. "MOM!!!???Are you serious?!I am not afraid of my mom" I said i whispered to Tommy "Lets step on it..1.2.3. GO!!!!!" Tommy and I ran as fast as we could,we would have ran faster if I wasn't carrying my heavy bag! "COME BACK HERE!!!" Kathy ran also,trying to catch us.Well she can't because we are both to fast for until the stupid rock just had tripped me! "WOAH!!oof!......*gasp* EEK!" i stepped back on my feet and ran,dumb Tommy! He just had to leave me behind.I grabbed a rock and through it at Kathy(not a big one...a small medium kinda looking one) "Ouch! URG!!!YOUR MOSTLY GOING TO BE THE DEAD ONE CHRIS!!!" Kathy shouted out "oof!" I bumped into the toughest,meanest, bully in town! Bob. "Wheres my money sqwuirt? I WANT MY MONEY!!!" Bob shouted "H-here! $20.00!Please don't hurt me...I'm just a teen..heh" KNOCK OUT!!!! I shouldn't have said that,it's kinda embarissing having a younger kid knock you out.Yeah,thats right,Bob is younger than me.Go ahead and booble you heads.I don't care "Chriiiiisssss.Chris?" Tommy said in a dumbo voice "huh...what?*Gasp* MY PANTS!!!MY PANTS ARE GONE!!!!" "Yeah..Kathy took ''em." Tommy said "AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!KAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I shouted my voice out..well not really.I had a scratchy voice for the whole 2 days.Luckily my Mom let me stay home for the week.But double that. I give Bob 8 dollers every 2 weeks a month, 8x2= dead time.So now i can't live... urg..thats all the time i have now from this short story..^^'' the end?
this is what you were talking about or another?I thought this was entertaining.
guess you already famous huh,well i like this chapter.its cool
*spongebob face* ehe!thanks friendly heartless and mexony you both are so king =3 so now im going to start the story.chapter #1.so enjoy ^-^ "Turn on the tv you goof!" "Not my fault you squished!" *click* the tv turned they putted on channel 24.the news.. "Hi im Flow and your watching travis town news.im here LIVE with sora" "EEEEK!!put the volume on Zack!!!" "will do.."Zack said "so,Sora how did you feel about leaving home and ending up to save kingdom hearts?" "Oh i can think about a whole pack of things Flow, it was just so new to me.But it was kind of dipressing leaving my mom but...well leaving home and saving everyone is a good thing and its cool."Sora said "Well Sora, those are such good words.So,*grin on face* hows Kairi..you and her boosting up?" Flow asked "What?!You know what i'm out of here!If you want to bud in someone elses life by all means!BUT NOT MINES!"Sora left ,guess he didn't like that "woah...I wanna be just like him..i just wish...*tears up*"Elliot said "oh don't cry Elliot boy!Maybe,just maybe you will become just like Sora!" Jenna said proudly "yeah..i just wish they can hold up auditions." Elliot wondered "Now don't go too far!" ******************************** "*yawn*...Man,that news reporter is so stupid..me and Kairi...*gasp*" "AAAAHHH!!!your sora,h-hi! im Elliot sorry for screaming like a girl,and dont take me as a five year old.I'm the captian of the orphanage.I'm 15...well 15 1/2 ....I heard all about you." Elliot said "Have you ever held a master keyblade?I have one obveously,so i let you hold it" Sora took out his keylade and gave it to Elliot "..." Elliot just froze there.He didn't say a word nor a flinch. "Kid?Ya there?" *poke* Elliot fell down and started wiggling around "I-i...held a keyblade...your keyblade,Sora...it was awesome" Elliot finally spoke. 10 years later *********************** "finally,ten years of wait.i finally got...A CHEESE BURGER!!!" Elliot said "Are you serious?A cheese burger?I'm 2 years younger,i act more mature than you"Jenna said "blah!*spits on Jenna* oops my bad.Clumsy me-" Elliot said with a drunk voice "Ugh!please,cover your mouth! No one really wants to see your chewed up food!" Jenna cried "aah...what evah!!*opens mouth*" Elliot annoyed Jenna.Jenna through a frie at him then left for a few seconds.''I'm not coming back untill you behave Elliot!"Jenna shouted "But the owner decided to give us cheese burgers after 10 years!All we have been eating was cookies...expired ones!" Elliot said "Fine...you got a point...but if you spit on me or open your mouth with food in it,I'm telling Mrs.Dollen to not give you any more food,do I make myself clear?!"Jenna said with a motherly voice "YES SIR!i mean man...MAM!!!" Elliot said "Much better..i guess..so where do you want to go after eating?" Jenna asked "hmm...i call the video game store..or maybe i could lye down on the couch and sleep...or maybe i co-" "OH PUT A SOCK IN IT!!!WE'RE GOING TO THE MALL!With the money i earned,which is $2.00 we can go shopping.So first is where the little ducklings are.GOT IT PUNK!!!???" Jenna said in a bossy voice.She had blonde hair with pigtails and blue eyes plus she is wearing black.As for Elliot,he is wearing a black top with a brown pancho,blue jean cutted shorts and he has spikey hair that is black with yellow streaks and brown eyes.Back to the story,hehe"umm...one question..what are we both going to buy with $2.00???" Elliot asked "Easy,we just buy something simple like one pencil..or two." Jenna replied. Sorry,thats all the time I have right now but i will continue tomorrow May 27th.
