I never make it the central part unless it needs to be.
Wow. I love it. I could hear it in my head, the lyrics flow seamlessly into one another and the message is strong and clear. The main thing that you've done which most people tend not to do is not making the lyrics rhyme, which is good don't get me wrong. Most people (me included) get to certain lines and their brain jams so they throw in a word that rhymes, with this however, you obviously knew where you were going and what you wanted to say. I can hear this (in my head) with a really strong and soft female vocal for some reason, not sure why but it works. There was one part that really grabbed me which was: It's so relevant to people all over the world and it sounds like you may have experiance in this matter? Everything about this song is good, it should be on my iPod. Amazing. Keep writing and I wish to see more of you in the future. :)
Edward Newbie
Canadian Vampire (Dude, I totally didn't skipp you)
I'd love to. I need to practise my writing more anyway. I tend to add in romance for some reason, but not like squealy-girl romance. More like, "But seriously, we need to sort this out." "Not now, honey, I'm trying to assasinate this guy. We'll talk later." "There might not be a later." "Good luck talking to me then." Don't ask. That was from a story I started writing then forgot about xD
Anchovies? What? Do I remind you of a fishy? xD Epic Vampire Guy
Old no.7 :)
Pokeunhappy
Scott. The end.
Contains me being depressive. 'Cause I'm like a constant downer, huh? Me: I hate it when guys think they can just walk all over me... Matt: I can think of much more interesting things to do to you. Like cover you in glitter and pretend you're a vampire. Me: As a purely hypothetical question here.... would you date me... if I didn't have a face? Matt: Well that depends. Would you let me draw a face on the blank space on the front of your head? Me: It'd probably look like this wouldn't it? *draws LOL face onto a piece of paper* But possibly... Personality only, would you date me? Am I dateable? Matt: Yes, yes it would. *laughs* Oh yeah, you're totally dateable. Me: I know how to push Matt's buttons... Beth: TEACH ME! Matt: I don't have BUTTONS. What am I, a TV remote? Me: Your metaphorical buttons, Matt. Matt: Brilliant. So I'm a metaphorical TV remote. Beth: You're a remote! *pokes Matt* Matt: Get OFF me! I DON'T HAVE ANY BUTTONS!
I just tried it. It's amazing. New thing for sleepovers, yes! (Beats regular Omegle) xD
They see the ace of spades hanging from my neck They all just assume that it's signalling death I thought that you'd think that I'm weird But no, you just told me to come here Closer, closer, breathing me in Closer, closer, suffocating. If I had looked a little better, I could have saved all those nights curled up in a sweater Wondering how it all went wrong I really thought that this could be forever, that you wouldn't trick me again Oh, how bad it feels to be wrong. But if you had only listened to what everyone else could see, If you'd looked at what you'd written and told me. You could have had something special but you went bust, Who did I think you were? There's no way that I'll ever trust you again, And if you had played your cards right, you would have had the perfect hand Now, I'm sorry baby, I don't think you understand I'm not a gamble for you or any other man. If you played your cards the way it should have gone You would have hit the jackpot, but your luck is gone, Wasted on other girls and alcohol now, you're falling down, Next time you want me, remember you've got to play your cards, Don't leave them face down, don't fold this relationship now. You see this hand I'm clutching so tightly to my chest? It's my sheild, I've tried to impress you but it's never worked, So now, I give up on ever trying to please, This is just another competition and the way I bite my lip is just to tease I want to make you see, make you think that you're winning with me before I reveal my hand, And there you'll see, you'll see The death card and the Queen of Hearts and I hope it serves as a reminder that you lost me. How does it feel to know, baby? You could have had something special but you went bust, Who did I think you were? There's no way that I'll ever trust you again, And if you had played your cards right, you would have had the perfect hand Now, I'm sorry baby, I don't think you understand I'm not a gamble for you or any other man. If you played your cards the way it should have gone You would have hit the jackpot, but your luck is gone, Wasted on other girls and alcohol now, you're falling down, Next time you want me, remember you've got to play your cards, Don't leave them face down, don't fold this relationship now. How does it feel to lose now in this gambling town? Why couldn't you just know when to stop? You've spiralled down, you're sleeping on the floor now You're in over your head with a debt you can't pay You've lost it all just because you could never play. If you had played your cards right, maybe it would have been different Maybe we'd still be okay. If you had played your cards right, I'd be there with you every step of the way But now I'm leaving, I'm gonna cash my winnings and leave this place, Don't get caught up in gambling with love, baby, if you don't know how to play. You could have had something special but you went bust, Who did I think you were? There's no way that I'll ever trust you again, And if you had played your cards right, you would have had the perfect hand Now, I'm sorry baby, I don't think you understand I'm not a gamble for you or any other man. If you played your cards the way it should have gone You would have hit the jackpot, but your luck is gone, Wasted on other girls and alcohol now, you're falling down, Next time you want me, remember you've got to play your cards, Don't leave them face down, don't fold this relationship now. You could have had something special but you went bust, Who did I think you were? There's no way that I'll ever trust you again, And if you had played your cards right, you would have had the perfect hand I just don't think that you understand I'm not a gamble for you or any other man. Next time you want me, remember you've got to play your cards, I'll leave mine face down, might as well fold this relationship now.
You missed Lizzie.... xD
Who is also my twin! AMAZING!
A wardrobe and a closet are the same thing. GO TO NARNIA!"
I'm a girl, a straight girl. xD
Today my friend is sending out mixed signals and thinks I know everything now. I told him I'm not a superhero. I lied. FML
Because you could. Maybe later, I have an appointment at now o'clock... ^ The only one who read the whole thing.
[I see what you mean, Jessica Alba is kinda hot.] Love, me.
You know you play Kingdom Hearts too much when You have a friend called Sora.
