I can do that.
I see. Well I'm frequently on MSN if that helps.
Doing fine as a clear blue sky, unless your not into that in which case I'm just doing well thank you. Neither actually. Sorry.
I said something because you said something. That's what. On a more comprehensible note: How are you doing?
I am here on nights and weekends and have been for a certain amount of time that I don't know the exact duration of or something.
The father is a lie.
I assume the One means something. If not I suppose I was wrong. Anyways, I've been meaning to say something here for a while so I figured now was as good a time as any. From the top then. Creepy. Mission accomplished on that. The technical execution seems solid. At least I missed any grammatical errors that may exist and found all the diction and syntax to be in order. When it came to the actual story I felt confused though. I don't really get what the point of it was other than to create an atmosphere. This ties back into my assumption that the One at the top implies a Two at the top of something else. So I can look at this as a oneshot used to create a situation and atmosphere and play it out to something like a resolution or I can expect more and look for a meaning elsewhere. Eh, my thought coherency has gone down over the course of this post so I'm gonna knock it off now before I really say something stupid hopefully. This is what I get for only posting meaningful things at this time of day.
It's a case of too much meaning that I see here. Philosophy inspires thought and the drawing of conclusions. There is too much philosophy here because I could think all day on the ideas you scraped together for this piece. If they were original and mindblowing ideas then maybe it would be worth it, but overall I just see you expressing some kind of love or fascination with thought whilst referencing people who share the sentiment. Yeah, this wasn't really a writing piece so much as a philosophical one and I have neither the time, inclination nor the education necessary to go into it in further detail really.
It feels like poetry. If, you know me you know that's not a good start. Very close to nothing happened in spite of all your words and descriptions and yet you can contrive many different meanings from it. Some people like that wonderfully and what you have here isn't a bad representation of that style, but I've never been a fan of it. Though it may not have been your intent while writing this, use of the style often seems lazy. It feels like calling on the reader to give meaning to the work, which should have been the writer's job in the first place. The good part here is that what would sound stilted without much change simply sounds impersonal and slightly pedantic. Still, go for slightly less so in the future, I can only put up with so much of the faux erudite language. Final note: I was slightly off put by replacing mightier with deadlier but you did well to correct my first inclination.
We don't need no water, let the mother ****er burn.
Thank you all for Zerg rushing my thread with irrelevant information. You get nothing, good day sirs.
...like Starcraft.
Hormone treatments won't change genitalia from one thing to another really, only rather drastic surgery can do that. But it will make someone more like the opposite sex in some other less important and visible ways. Keep in mind though, your gender is in your genes. Only way to really change it is with a retrovirus and a lot of phlebotinum.
High school is a lot like middle school and college because you get out what you put in.
but I'll stand by you.
It would involve sewing.
Might it be that you can't just accept when you're wrong?
Nurse Joy .
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-5mLuPJ0S8Q
I thought it was because your PC didn't come from a company that would raid your house.
