Now you has a visitor message. *inserts Osaka gaze*
lol wtf new forum version lolololol!! XDDDD I better use today to play around with these new settings..
OMFG COMIC!!! Weeeeee!! I read through it all, noticed some minor grammar errors. If you plan on polishing this up with inked lineart you'll want to keep that in mind before writing - adding ruler lines for the text helps keeping them straight as well, so concider using that too. :> LOVE the poses you have chosen to draw for the panels, most of the time I feel like I'm being dragged into the story itself. Especially this one panel when Kairi's walking up the stairs in her house I liked a lot! Be careful not to draw too many panels after each other that looks almost the same.. Kinda makes the page more boring than it really is you know? An example of that would be when Sora's playing the shooter game just after he got headshot'd ( LOL ) - btw was it someone other than Riku he was playing against? I didn't really catch that? Also... I took it that this was being read from the left to right. With manga you never really know anymore, heh. Remember to always let the parts you're meant to look at come in the right order, if the placement of panels/text bubbles are too varied it makes it confusing to read. I request that you add harder lineart over chapter one so that it's nice and visible. :> Don't have to do that if you don't want to, but now you know my opinion. And continue drawing light on chapter 2. Rawr.
Aww, now that's really adorable! X3 And from I see you have improved on your anatomy as well! If you were to change anything (probably not, but keep it in mind for the next time yeah?), be aware of how the shape of a foot will look like when you're looking directly under it. Something I always use as a tiny rule is to keep the toe aera wider and bigger than the heel area is. Especially since the front of the foot will be closer to the viewer than the heel most times. Don't have them equally big, it isn't correct anatomy wise. Try it and you'll see what I mean. Keep up the good work, this forum doesn't have enough chibi. :>
Hmm... I'm getting the "two different warriors working together" wibe when seeing this. Mostly because of the poses you have chosen for each of them, how they almost lean against eachother's backs. I must say that I like where you're going with regarding the outfit designs.. Don't know if it's your intention but the dude in the back kinda looks like a Chinese duo keyblade wielding monk, the one in front looks like an European knight/guardian. If you have thought out the whole outfit concept for these characters, maybe draw a front/back sketch for us to see what they look like from all sides? These interest me.. Also, do you have an idea over which colours to use on the details? You already know my point of view regarding your skills, my crit stays the same. :>
... the last page is too confusing, I need sleep. =.=
If you've listened through all of the zips I've sent you then that's all of the stuff I have recorded. I guess I'll just have to wait for another opportunity to be alone at home since like I mentioned, just when I started the recording my father came back home so I couldn't shout as loud as I could. But it was a little louder this time compared to my first go.
Fixed. Gah, I shout all the time, but I can't shout on command... >> But since it is episode 5 there's no rush just yet, right?
I take it that Yue's chap 5 part is on my to do list once more, yes? *iphailz* Dangit, I'm really excited to see the results of this project!! Especially the trailer!! I've been lurking in this thread for the last month now, keeps getting closer! *and on a side note I got my hands on vol #17 and #18 today so I have some readin to do.. >:3*
It's my thing. ^_^
I'm in this time yes. I read from page 250 can you blame me? Dang, didn't predict I'd be away THIS much.. *throws green apple at nearest person*
You have my address. If you have no opportunity to lurk around in the forum or MSN, SEND ME A LETTER TO KNOW THAT YOU'RE ALIVE plkthx. <3 ;.; Go pown at college. Go pown New York. :> You already know how I feel about you.. fromyour last thread, ehehheh. ^.^;;
Lurk for clues.... if I wasn't in danger of gettin drunk.. =.= And currently these are the one that are in so far unless I've missed someone. sora is cute Pyro Finalform Heartless_Vice Darkrequiem0 TrueKeybladeMaster TheChosenOne サキ アマミヤ Xephos DemoN:||D@ys jojoj13 me... Graxe Sorry for the copypasta.
It's nature's candy and L could benefit from eating those rather than sweets. *kk I'll lurk some moar*
<3 Last question for the night: World domination to SWAT Kats for the win, am I right?
You go from apple chips to peaches? o: Where does your alliance lie with?! *gobbles on cherries*
And I guess we can't accuse anyone before a murder has been commited. Mweh.
Hmm.. No deaths yet, even if the Shinigami is online. Either kira isn't online to send instructions him/herself or it is already been set at a certain time of day.
Can I have a hug..? ;.; Is your avatar naughty? (I love it btw - pretty awesome/funny at the same time) *copypastas kitty's "What was your first impression of me? What is your impression of me now?" question*
I spent 8 and a half hours drawing two chubby ladies today, my back is killing me. I need a case to nibble on. Add me in the list now plzkthx. :>
