Why's everyone so dramatic? @-@ Whats wrong?
Mhm! I looove this song hehe.
xDD Something mean like what? Thank you, so do I. We might just blow it on movies though. << That's pretty much what we plan to do when I go to...
No. Gtfo . Before: Look at that person with the name I never even attempt to pronounce! Now: I want to be friends with that person, they seem like a cool cat. ;-; I don't think so. O.o Workin' on a petition first, strike comes next.
I know. She called me crying, I felt really bad. v.v XDD Just is. I can imagine it well. And yeah. He's amazing. And, he actually still has...
Seriously? You should try it then. <<; No. B| It has sugar.
Why's that?
Nothing really. Bill needs to be paid, I'm sitting at Starbucks. XD
Yup. Thus, her not getting many presents. Aww. That's kind of cute. Yeah, my friend Kody was seriously considering buying me a ps3 and sending it...
Nope. I think eventually she realized she had no where to go and snuck back. That sucks. my dad did that when my aunt sent me 300. I cries d so...
She hates her family. And her dad is awful to her. Yeah. I know what you mean. My mom burrowed money from me a week ago and kept it, lol....
not really. I'm pretty sure it's because she ran away from home a few days ago. XD that's how I am with my money. Kinda stingy. Hehe. Sounds...
It does suck. She was so depressed. I feel bad for her. << And that would be good, right? Really? Do anything today?
This movie made me so emotional. I know the storyline was a bit cliche and everything, but the visual aspect was just incredible. It was seriously beautiful and symbolic and everything. Just...Excellent movie, I would definitely see it again.
I'm grateful. And my birthday is coming up so...*PRAYS FOR PS3* Well, at least you gots stuffs. My friend Miranda got socks and a snuggy. o.o...
Oh, memories...
Yay. It didn't seem like that much, since...Well, the cook books and stuff and the kitchen things can be used by everyone in the house. So they...
Ooh, How much is the gift-card? o: And I got a snuggy, a new phone with a camera and mp3 player, an ipod touch, new pots and pans (I love to...
xDD Loved it. Very funny! Nothing I can really point out here. o.o Good job, please continue and update soon! ^^ *Should write an InuYasha fanfic* Haha.
*Tries to hurry before my laptop decides to crash again* xD Ooh, updated too. :=D: I'll comment on the first two first, the read the third. :3 Overall, I love your writing, it's gotten much better. It's easy to read and visualize things. The only thing I can say that you could work on it placement and unnecessary things. I'll edit a few things and provide explanation when I feel it necessary. Here, what your saying rhymes. XDD That made me laugh and drew my attention away from the main purpose for a moment. Which is good for a comedy, but here you might want to replace the words. Example (crappy, but eh.): I love what you did with the reporter. xD You did that very well. Now, here, I know you meant for it to probably be sudden but...o.o Soooo. Maybe you should've put a sentence before it or something? Example: Chapter two was perfect in my opinion, I couldn't find anything to correct, and I just scanned through again. @_@ Just this, but I think you did it on purpose, The italics was a bit unnecessary, but I understand the meaning. :3 Besides that, great job! I look forward to reading Chapter Three. Just want to get this posted before something bad happens to the laptop. xDDD
