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    <3 ^^ Thank you!

    <3 ^^ Thank you!
    Profile Post by Jayn for Janime6, Mar 13, 2010
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    khv

    Neither do I. And I've always wondered.
    Post by: Jayn, Mar 12, 2010 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    Yes. <3

    Mmkay, let's see. Overall, I loved this chapter. It was really cool and fast-paced (which I love because it's easy to read since it's seriously playing like a movie or something x-x). I loved the fight scenes, and how your writing isn't predictable like most people's is.

    I've always wondered if you're supposed to capitalize "hollow"? It just seems like something you'd capitalize.

    This sentence is a little iffy. Maybe if you reworded it to something like this,

    That way it doesn't seem so repetitive and blocky. :3

    Maybe that should have been formatted in a way that it was more obvious he was thinking it. The italics helped, but it was mashed into the paragraph so it seemed a bit sudden.

    This way, it's evident that it was a trick indeed and that Ichigo didn't just randomly listen to an order, which seems out of character.

    The end was amazing! The segment and Shinigami cup was really funny. xDDD

    All and all, very nice job! I look forward to reading more. ^^
    Post by: Jayn, Mar 12, 2010 in forum: Archives
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    It's elementary, my dear Watson.
    Profile Post by Jayn for What?, Mar 12, 2010
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    I'm excited.
    Post by: Jayn, Mar 12, 2010 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    Hey. :3

    Hey. :3
    Profile Post by Jayn for Spike, Mar 12, 2010
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    I hope you're doing well...<3
    Profile Post by Jayn for godsgirl, Mar 12, 2010
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    *Clings to brother* <3

    *Clings to brother* <3
    Profile Post by Jayn for FuzzyBlueLights, Mar 12, 2010
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    *Pokes* x3

    *Pokes* x3
    Profile Post by Jayn for Fracture, Mar 12, 2010
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