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    Wtf. I didn't think that would make me as semi-emotional as it did. I seriously didn't. I was just going to read, comment and go about my day but it actually made me sad. >>

    I like this~ I think you do well with first person, it allows for more casual informal conversation, which in term makes it a bit more personal that a third person story. There was one sentence that was worded oddly to me, but I lost sight of it.

    It, of course, leaves for questions such as what happened and, and how he took on five thugs with no problem and how it was her fault. But I'm assuming those are plot holes that you wanted there? For a one shot, it was pretty good. I hope he popped back up at the end and didn't actually die, though, and you just decided to not post the "LOL JK" part. Yeah...Yeah...Let's go with that.
    Post by: Jayn, Jan 25, 2011 in forum: Archives
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    @KingdomHearts530:

    Here you areee, please let me know if you'd like anything changed.

    Avy Traditional:

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    Avy Curly:

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    @Andrew: Same for you, good sir. c:

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    Siggy:

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    @HearlessofLight: Coming right up~ xD; Working on it.
    Post by: Jayn, Jan 25, 2011 in forum: Art Shop
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    How so? D:

    How so? D:
    Profile Post by Jayn for nasirrich, Jan 25, 2011
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    THE PJRBTBU! So fancy. :'D
    Profile Post by Jayn for Plums, Jan 25, 2011
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    Rooooooooooooooar. <3

    Rooooooooooooooar. <3
    Profile Post by Jayn for Arc, Jan 25, 2011
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    xD I know, right? What's upppp?
    Profile Post by Jayn for Sufris, Jan 25, 2011
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    *Vomits *
    Post by: Jayn, Jan 25, 2011 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    Thank you. <3

    That sounds...painful. I cringed. xD
    Post by: Jayn, Jan 24, 2011 in forum: The Spam Zone