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    You pull out your map, looking at all of the different rooms. You stand outside of the cellar now, in the beginning of Hallway #1. Things on the first floor are surprisingly calm and quiet. That didn't begin to turn creepy for you until the sun started to set outside and the mansion was filled with darkness. You turn on your lantern and peer into the blackness before you, turning your head to look at Snow before walking forward to your right.

    "Well...I guess starting at the end and making our way back might be helpful. I don't really trust outside yet, and it'd be best to try and find somewhere to settle down for now."
    Snow nods in agreement and trails close behind you as you make your way to the music room. Your eyes travel down to her book-covered chest, and with the lantern stretched out before you, you push open the door and walk inside.

    The music room is small with one big window North of where you stand, overlooking a mass of barely visible tall dark trees, fading into a darkness. You shudder, the wooden floors squeak beneath you as you walk closer and let Snow trudge in before closing the door shakily. There's a piano in this room, along with a spread of sheet music.

    You quickly begin to search for anything useful, finding three elixirs, some lantern oil and a small, unloaded pistol placed beside an empty wine glass. These things have been added to your inventory.

    "Alright, Snow. I think I've gotten all I can. Did you find anything?" You turn to face her, but she's not behind you anymore. Instead, she sits down on the stool of the piano, holding the book awkwardly in her lap with one hand while placing the other on the dusty keys. "Snow?"

    "Nostalgia."


    What do you do?

    [] Sit beside her and wait patiently for her to continue with her story.
    [] "Well that's fine and all, but I think we should keep searching."
    [] "I really don't care."
    [] "If you have something to say, spit it out. What the hell is 'nostalgia' supposed to mean?
    [] Gaze deeply into her eyes, letting her know she can tell you anything, and to trust you.
    [] Brag about how you play the piano, sitting down by her and busting out a tune to calm her down.


    * Items in blue can be equipped when the option is available.
    * Things in green are locations.



    Link to Map HERE
    Link to first fight HERE.
    Link to second fight HERE.
    Post by: Jayn, Sep 15, 2011 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    What about just adding an underline to it?
    Post by: Jayn, Sep 15, 2011 in forum: Feedback & Assistance
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    I know it's not really needed, but for us lazy people it's pretty convenient.
    I wouldn't mind having it around.

    It's really not necessary though. But I'm not a 'no' on this.
    Post by: Jayn, Sep 15, 2011 in forum: Feedback & Assistance
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    Okay, well along with my Username History not showing up, my Pins arhttp://i894.photobucket.com/albums/ac148/mixttime/30cd8cc5.pngen't showing up now either.
    I don't know if this is related to the mod or not, but it seems like I'm the only one getting the problem. The pins displayed fine before.
    Post by: Jayn, Sep 15, 2011 in forum: Feedback & Assistance
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    Let's make a fat cat club.

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    Post by: Jayn, Sep 15, 2011 in forum: The Playground
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    I just found a picture of my dog and thought I should share.

    Merry Christmas?

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    That's ridiculously small.

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    Post by: Jayn, Sep 15, 2011 in forum: The Playground
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    Heyy hunny. What's up? ;n;
    Profile Post by Jayn for Sumi, Sep 15, 2011
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    Jayn ; Critiques

    I think this was a step up from last time. I knew you had it in you. This whole thing was really adorable. You played a girl rather well. I really liked this post.

    At first I felt like the end, love proclamation was a bit forced, but after re-reading it and seeing the emotion, I think you did pretty well. She became desperate towards the end, which was interesting.


    I was a little confused, and you're allowed to clarify this for me. But did he ditch classes to visit her and proclaim his love? Or did he quit school all together? Either way. You too played on the desperation. It was really sweet. Especially because he found resolve in needing to tell her. And though he hesitated, he went through with it. Overall, good job.



    Congratulations, you. <:

    Your formatting has improved, though towards the end it started to look like a poem again. imo. xD It's obvious you're paying attention to the critiques. I tried to explain what I meant by spacing things out a bit in the quote above.

    You were cute. I mean...She was cute. It was a very innocent confession. Anyway, good job.

    Sweet and simple.
    Although, maybe a bit too simple? I didn't really feel much from this. There weren't very many feelings described. But technically speaking, you addressed the theme and there are very little mistakes.

    At first I was like, mehhh. But then it got better as it went on. There was lots of emotion in this for me. Well, rather...Lots of passion. It was...A little less cutesy and a little more sexy--*Shot*

    In all honesty though. I like it all-in-all. The only thing that got me was the fact that he was passionately rejecting her. xD It was conflicting in that I couldn't tell if he loved her, didn't love her, or if he just wanted in her panties. It would be something that would be difficult to respond to. As in...If I were Bushy responding to this, I would have a hard time figuring out if she should be happy or not. Like, what does that mean? There wasn't really resolve.

    Either wayyy. I thought you did awesomely. Good job.

    Everyone is so adorable. ;n;

    Alright. Um. I feel like this was just a bit rushed. I did like the part about how he was planning on making a living off of faking emotions. That was clever. He seemed unsure about if he really loved her or not in the end, so I felt like it wasn't really resolved. It was more of an excuse to get her to stop crying. Either way, very tender. I enjoyed it overall. No mistakes or anything.
    Post by: Jayn, Sep 15, 2011 in forum: RP Idol Archive
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    Sometimes we sit there and ask ourselves wonder and ask ourselves why; why did they have to leave so soon? Why did it have to be so dramatic?

    Somehow, we knew it was coming but then again we didn’t. But if we knew about it for sure, we probably wouldn’t have been able to stop it from happening.

    Or then again… could we?

    So many haunting questions flooded our minds as Natalie’s coffin was lowered in the ground, never to be seen again. Someone said it was her first party she ever been to in her life. Her boyfriend, our friend, Rae could say it was also her last.

    We were broken in heart, mind, and soul. Some of us took it harder than others, but we stayed together like a family. Our lead singer went and joined the Heavenly Host’s Angel choir while our lead guitarist up and left us to where not even the devil knows where.

    So, here we are, a band of four with our two teachers (or sensei’s as most like to call them), missing the key elements of what was going to bring us together to be something out there in the rough world. No one’s going to look at our cute family setting and take us to the battlefield where the students of the masters fight for the top.
    We’re back on ground zero.

    But… maybe there’s a little silver lining in these dark clouds. Some new kids just moved in, and they heard about us. They want to join us.

    But no one can ever replace Natalie and Rae.

    No one.
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    1. No godmodding (Meaning no auto kill, no super hero stunts like breaking through walls with bare hands, stuff like this. We are normal mortals in this RP.)

    2. No powerplaying (You can't make someone else's character do whatever you want. You have to get their permission)

    3. PG-13 Rating Posts (Romance and drama is encouraged, but don't get over the top. There are little munchkins lurking this web)

    4. We may break our own rules for Plot purposes.

    5. We can add rules at any time.

    6. Alert us(Fuzzy, Maka) if something bugs or confuses you.

    7. Don't do something so ******d that we fire you from the RolePlay entirely.

    8. Characters are allowed to wander and everyone has a cell phone. Just remember, they're a band, so if you want to be a lone wolf, be one with the rest of the members.

    9. If someone leaves the RP, that means a new spot is available. Don't forget, don't just vanish from the RolePlay, if you can alert us to how long you'll be leaving or if you're leaving permanently.

    10. Maka and Fuzzy are Gods here. Respect us for our word is this RolePlays law.

    12. No anime characters for appearances. ONLY real people. (Jayn interjection; if you can, get their permission, or use free stocks/famous people or something so you're not being creepy.
    tl; dr - Please don't steal people's facebook profile pictures, ktnx. )

    13. Have fun!​


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    The Newbies

    Lead Singer Garxena
    Lead Guitarist Random Angel

    The Family

    Singer Two Britishism
    Drummer Bushy
    Base guitarist Fuzzy
    Piano Jayn
    Electric Violin Maka

    Manager 1 Ace
    Manage 2 What?

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    [SIZE="1"][COLOR="white"]My God/Goddess Is: [COLOR="lightblue"][Username][/COLOR]
    
    My Name Is: [COLOR="lightblue"][First and last name of character][/COLOR]
    
    I came into this world on: [COLOR="lightblue"][Full birthdate. And the setting is today, now. So if they turned 19 in
    September and the previous months before, they’re born in 1992.[/COLOR]]
    
    Some people say I’m: [COLOR="lightblue"][Basic personality here][/COLOR]
    
    This has been my life so far: [COLOR="lightblue"][Brief bio here][/COLOR]
    
    Oh yeah, this is me: [COLOR="lightblue"][Appearance, use real people only. No anime or cartooned allowed. ><][/COLOR]
    
    This is my baby: [COLOR="lightblue"][Instrument you play here. Managers can deleted this, or change it to a secret talent they have][/COLOR]
    
    This is what I enjoy in life: [COLOR="lightblue"][List at least four things your character likes][/COLOR]
    
    This is what I hate: [COLOR="lightblue"][List four things your character dislikes][/COLOR]
    
    If I could have a theme song, this would be it: [COLOR="lightblue"][What original song matches your character?][/COLOR][/COLOR][/SIZE]

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    My God/Goddess Is: [Maka]
    My Name Is: [Xara "Ruth" Kendel]
    I came into this world on: [October 17, 1994, I am seventeen years old]
    Some people say I’m: [Quiet, reserved, I never speak to anyone unless spoken to. I try to keep to myself all the time and stay out of a group. I have a hard time trusting others, but if one can see the real me trapped there inside, I can be lovable and fun to be around. I only have a selected few friends and peers who I can count on. Sometimes people see me as a dreamer, and maybe I am. I stare off into nothing after all when others aren't paying attention to me. But who knows what I'm dreaming of.]
    This has been my life so far: [I came to America across the sea from Russia when I was just about to turn six years old. I have been an orphan all my life up to then, and that is a story I do not wish to bring back to life, but a family from America adopted me. They taught me their language, they helped me catch on quickly to the curriculum at school, but they couldn't help me to find a footing in the social world. I was bullied, I stayed away from the other children, I wish to not make friends after a while and almost ended up completely alone, much to my family's concern. It wasn't until middle school that someone found me and brought me in their little friendship circle and made me apart of them. Then we all became much more than friends. We were family. They believed in me, and I grew. But I'm still afraid... I hold many dark secrets inside of me, none that I wish to unlock and share in words. But I share it through my best friend I can always rely on... My violin.]
    Oh yeah, this is me:
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    This is my baby: [Electric Violin]
    This is what I enjoy in life: [Raindrops, horses, solitary settings, music that moves the soul]
    This is what I hate: [Pickles, thunder storms at night, guns/gunshots (I freeze when I see them/ hear them), loud social parties]
    If I could have a theme song, this would be it: Dreamcatcher and also this song by Secret Garden]

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    My God Is: FuzzyBlueLights

    My Name Is: Cameron Lockehart

    I came into this world on: January 3, 1988
    Some people say I’m: Rude. Wasted talent. As hipster and as abstract as I pretend to be. I'm really quite simple. Like the Bass. I'm nice once I like you and I will explode over the littlest things. Even if I like you. I will only hesitate to put my hands on someone if they're a girl. Sorry ladies, it's a private promise.

    This has been my life so far: Ah life. I honestly sometimes have a hard time remembering my past. But I like what I can remember of it. Warmth and jacketless. Not like today, where I'm nearly always cold if a building has air conditioning. I'd suppose from what memories I do keep, that I had a pretty good life. Pops was a good man, soldier first class all the way. Was proud of his oldest boy as long as he kept out of trouble(which I did when I joined the band.) and kept finding a way to support himself. Moms was a good lady too. Classy, kept music playing nearly all the time before she past. She's the one who taught me all about the 1-2-3's and ABC's of rhythm. Lastly, there's my kid sister. Just two words for her. ****ing super Christian.

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    This is my baby: A Fender Rogers Water Precision Bass. ;D

    This is what I enjoy in life: Simply listening to instrumental solos. Chocolate. People born short.(>> No offense to midgets.) Video games. And winning.

    This is what I hate: Losing. Quiet. Peace. Keeping still.

    If I could have a theme song, this would be it: Whipped Cream~ By Ludo

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    My God/Goddess Is: Jayn.

    My Name Is: Anastasia Starr.

    I came into this world on: December 24th, 1991. I know, I know. I was a Christmas Eve baby. Unfortunately, all that's ever meant for me is year after year of disappointment. My birthday has always sort of gotten lost in the blur of Christmas. It's not unheard of or anything, but it seems like one less day in my life I get to feel special. At least there's snow on my birthday...sometimes.

    Some people say I’m: Boring. Apathetic. I don't really care for much, and I hate decisions. Color me passive. But not heartless.

    This has been my life so far: I don't really want to talk about it. Not like it was all that bad, it's just boring as hell. What, I live a life. I had and lost some friends. Hated school, but did well in it. My family is whatever to me, I don't live with them anymore. Yeah, who cares. I'm ordinary. Extra-ordinary.

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    This is my baby: My beloved piano. Oh, and my keyboard.

    This is what I enjoy in life: Quiet time alone is nice. I'm also a big nature-whore. I love the ocean, the beach especially. I love to go hiking. I love running. Food is great, too. I love to cook and try out new foods. I'm fairly open minded. Cats are cool too.

    This is what I hate: ******bags. Spicy food. Sour food. Sudden loud noises. Dogs, vile creatures.

    If I could have a theme song, this would be it: I suppose this would be fitting. Maybe. Voiceless. Wordless. Soft. Escalation. Then silence.

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    My God/Goddess Is: Bushy Brow

    My Name Is: Tyler "Tai" Ashes

    I came into this world on: 19th August 1992

    Some people say I’m: Wha? I really gotta do this? ...Talk about Lame... Alright!
    I'm uh... um... Dammit! Do I really have to do this?! FINE! I get it.
    I'm a badass. A dick or whatever. But that's what they say.
    The way I see it is that I'm just true to myself, I live the way I see it and am honest with what I do. If people wanna judge me like that. Then... meh. Like I care.

    This has been my life so far: Say wha?! I've gotta do this too! Why don't I just let you tape me having a dump in my own bathroo- ...Fine! Sheesh.. *mumbling something inaudible*
    My life has been average. As I said, I just do what I do and be true.
    I was conceived then expelled from my mother after nine months was up, just like anyone else. I went to school, did a bit of this and a bit of that. Went to College, did music stuff and girls.
    Yup. That's the sum up so far. Happy? You never told me I had to be pretty about the way I told it. Get off my case.

    Oh yeah, this is me:
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    (Yes, this is actually me.)

    This is my baby: Anything I can hit hard really. Drums, in other words. No shit...

    This is what I enjoy in life: Hitting things (drums and on occasion people), Girls, The essentials basically, ...Anything I guess.

    This is what I hate: This application process, Liars, Cheats, Spicy food.

    If I could have a theme song, this would be it: This. It's that simple.

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    My God/Goddess Is: Britishism

    My Name Is: Caleb Fairland

    I came into this world on: January First, 1990

    Some people say I’m: Strange. That I say what's on my mind, no matter what it is. I suppose they're right, but what's strange about that? I guess I'm happy to be "strange". But as they say, I'm usually happy.

    This has been my life so far: My life, eh? You know, I don't think there's anything special about my life, really. I was born, I went to school, and I did stupid stuff in high school. But yeah, I went to college, got a degree in theater, and that fell in on itself. So I got a job at a sleazy bar and met a girl. She was sweet, in her own way. Didn't change the fact she stole my money and left me. I was down on my luck, but still hopeful that something good would come my way. I guess it did.

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    This is my baby: A 1990 edition voice box.

    This is what I enjoy in life: Food- anything edible, really. Singing, of course, why else would I be here? Girls, if you catch my drift. Would it be bad to say long walks on the beach? Also, I guess acting. Never really worked out for me, but it's a passion.

    This is what I hate: Most animals. Not to be mean or whatever, I just like things that can talk. Oh, yeah, winter, I hate winter. Uh, reading anything but music. It was never my strong suit. Also, I guess I hate conforming. I don't really know how to put it, but when someone told me to do something, I did the opposite.

    If I could have a theme song, this would be it: I guess this fits me pretty well.


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    My God/Goddess Is: Garxena

    My Name Is: Grace Kent

    I came into this world on: 13th December 1991; I’m 19 years old

    Some people say I’m: Outgoing, really. They tell me I’ve got this way of infecting people with my good attitude. I’ve been told that my way of approaching people might get me into trouble one day, but I don’t really take life seriously enough to believe them. My parents have called me weird; they were joking of course, but I think they just wanted me to choose a different career.

    This has been my life so far: I was born in New Zeland but my parents took our family elsewhere when I was just two so I don’t remember the land of Kiwis at all. I went through school pretty easily until I reached my sophomore year of high school. Some jerks were picking on a friend of mine so I roughed ‘em up a bit. I’m not usually the type to get in a fight, but it was my friend and I had to stick up for him. After that, I started making some difficult choices in life. I had to decide what I wanted my career to be and it wasn’t easy. I was never really good at academic stuff so I had gone into theatre and choir when I was in the sixth grade. I left formal choir in high school and joined the school’s show choir to get a little more fun into my singing. I performed solo after solo, grabbing every opportunity I could to expand my resume. I’d decided on my career: a goddamn rock star. Then a couple of good buds of mine gave me a call and brought my dream job to me. I gotta love those guys.

    Oh yeah, this is me:
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    This is my baby: My vocal chords! <3

    This is what I enjoy in life: Music. There’s nothing else I’ve found that has made me feel more alive. Food. I really get into the stuff; it’s an art of its own. Boxing. What can I say? It helps me vent and it sure makes me happier than sitting and doing nothing. Writing. I write anything I can – poetry, short stories, songs, journals (have one for each year since I was ten).

    This is what I hate: Intolerance. I can’t stand it when people pull that crap. Chocolate. Don’t look at me like that! When my pen runs out of ink and I don’t have a spare. That sucks! Thunder and lighting. Tell anyone I’m scared of them and I’ll throw you down a well so deep you won’t be able to tell if it’s day or night.

    If I could have a theme song, this would be it: Fucking Perfect by Alicia Moore (P!nk)


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    My God/Goddess Is: [Fuuka Yamagishi]

    My Name Is: [Annabella Taylor Rose]

    I came into this world on: [May 12th, 1994]

    Some people say I’m: [Calm and collected, but that's only because I'm lost in my own dream world most of the time. Only when I get angry or start playing do I snap out of it, and then I am quite lively.]

    This has been my life so far: [I like getting out of the house, so if I'm not at school I'm out performing on the streets. And when I heard that there was a band around in need of a lead guitarist of course I signed up. Didn't think I would actually get in though. Well, more time away from home at least. Anywhere but there... And despite all of the fighting I do, I got good grades. Cs and so.ly sucks too.]

    Oh yeah, this is me:
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    This is my baby: [My electric guitar that I've named Elizabeth.]

    This is what I enjoy in life: [Music and everything about it is my life. I also love spicy foods; the hotter the better. I love being cheered on and complimented. I like going to the parks after playing to cool off. I love storms. And sleeping whenever I am not doing something is a must.]

    This is what I hate: [I don't like saying I hate things, as hate is bad, but... Well, I hate hate of any sort I suppose. That's why I fight; I see a bully and I punch them in the face. I dislike being told I can't do something, the heat, sweet and sour stuff, spicy all the way, and being around too many people. The only way I can be on stage is because I get lost in my music.]

    If I could have a theme song, this would be it: [Totally this for sure.]


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    My God/Goddess Is: [What?]

    My Name Is: [Zsigmond Csupó (Sigmund)]

    I came into this world on: [June 9, 1959, I am fifty-two years old]

    Some people say I’m: [Very grumpy from time to time, and usually off being what some call "eccentric" here and there. Apparently my voice is known for being loud and some consider myself more cranky grandfather than anything. It does not help that the children will not get off my lawn. I am one who is usually relaxed though, because, as they say, is the life not for enjoyment?]

    This has been my life so far: [I was born in the city of Pecs, and my brother and pregnant mother emigrated to the United States from Hungary when I was fifteen. My life as a child has been rough - we were considered strangers by the other people in the city for a good while, and our family struggled to survive in the 60s when my father perished in a working accident. I did not even learn English fluently until I was eighteen. I was able to attend university and received a degree in physics - though, I am, as of this moment, currently unemployed and living alone.]

    Oh yeah, this is me:

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    This is my baby: [My portable MacBook Air that holds all sorts of wonderful things. Oh the wonders of this new technology!]

    This is what I enjoy in life: [Science, people, and good food - oh yes, the good food is wonderful! The southern Chinese cuisine is especially my favourite. I also adore relaxing, reading, and playing sports - usually whilst in a suit of some sort, along with informing the children of the neighbourhood to get off my lawn damn it.]

    This is what I hate: [Those goddamn kids on my goddamn lawn! I mean, truly, those teenage and young adults love making fun of me for acting like the stereotype of the old men but it is true!

    I also hold a dislike of excessive silence, gossip, people who cannot understand another person's feelings, and those who care not for the other people, especially if they are poorer than them. ]

    If I could have a theme song, this would be it: [I am a fan of the American jazz music.]
    Thread by: Jayn, Sep 15, 2011, 76 replies, in forum: Retirement Home
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    And the winner is...


    Congratulations to the amazing Bushy! He was able to unanimously win the judges vote for immunity. You are immune from this voting session.


    Go to the challenge thread for your critiques--eventually, as they are being written.



    Feedback!


    The theme was portrayed rather well by everyone. However, I'm not sure anyone really took it above and beyond as they could have with such a broad theme. So maybe the challenge itself didn't leave much room for that? I apologize if that's the case. Either way, we're winding down to the last few of you so I'll be kicking up the pace.

    I will ask that you all vote ASAP so I can post the next challenge.

    What is this?


    While we have a winner (who is immune from this poll), we also need to eliminate someone. In this voting session, we'll be voting off TWO people. You're voting for who you think should stay, and you MUST post in this thread with a valid, detailed critique/reason WHY. There is no voting for yourself. I'll restate my original rule which is be fair about it. Please do not vote for your friends because they're your friends. Please refer to the sign ups thread for more information on voting. (Though, you should have read it already.)

    You are REQUIRED to vote. You are REQUIRED to read ALL of the other contestants posts. You are REQUIRED to give a reason why.

    If you're in the bottom (least amounts of votes), the judges and I will decide who stays and who goes. TWO will be leaving this time around.

    If you need extra help, the judges will be critiquing each role player in the main challenge thread.

    If you're just following the competition, but you've not entered in it as a contestant, you can vote too. But you're still required to follow the same rules and give a valid reason. If I feel your (or anyone elses) reason is not detailed enough, I will call you out on it. c: (You guys can do the same to me if I seem vague)

    Members who have yet to vote...

    Bushy Brow - Izzy Kumo [m] + Ilia Kumo [f]

    Marushi - Lance [m] + Kara [f]

    master of keyblades - Allen [m] + Mina [f]

    Britishism - Rory [m] + Keira [f]

    theonly9one - Heather [f] + Brad [m]

    Tummer - Hannah [f] + Luis [m]
    Happy role playing. :]
    Thread by: Jayn, Sep 15, 2011, 8 replies, in forum: RP Idol Archive
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    How are you scaring them? xD
    Profile Post by Jayn for Heart ❤, Sep 14, 2011