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if i owe you something like a sig or rp banner or picture or something, sorry. will get to you shortly. if i'm supposed to be replying to a vm...

it's okay..edited again.

please remember your pictures if you haven't gotten me one. please. can't start the video without 'em.

updateeeed. I'm kind of distracted, so I apologize for any mistakes. ;c

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFK2jO04QKQ

Thank to everyone for getting your entries in. Apologies for the ever-slow pace. Thank you to the judges that participated as well. SO. This round we really will be voting off. xD Also, the RP Idol pin is done and uploaded to KHV so yay. <3 Good luck to all of you. I will be giving you individual critiques. Please keep the critiques you're given in mind. We're only trying to help.

Spoiler: Tale_Wind

I've always found your way of posting really neat and organized. The paragraphs and the color coding. Lovely! You made a couple mistakes with punctuation, but that's alright. There was nothing major or too distracting. Your emotion is good as always. I really love the way you bring your characters to life. Your descriptions aren't overly complicated and your posts are long enough to get the point across without being unbearable to read.

Though you started off strong, you later just stopped posting? Not a very good thing to do, eh? I would have found your entries near flawless if you had stuck around the challenge consistently. Not only is what you're posting important, but actually posting is just as important.

Spoiler: master of keyblades

I appreciate you sticking the challenge out and staying through. Good job with that. Regarding your actual posts, I think you did pretty well. You've definitely improved from the last could of seasons and progress is definitely a plus in any competition. There were a couple of places where you forgot to close your quotes. The color coding helped with what was speaking and what wasn't, but try to remember the quotation marks. In some of your paragraphs, there aren't any quotations around your speaking at all. If it weren't for the color codes, everything would look like one big run-on sentence.

Another thing that kind of surprised me was when you chimed in about giving yourself up after Wigglz's character had done that. I don't know how I feel about that. Part of me admires your dominance, but the other part of me understood Wigglz's character being frustrated by it. It felt necessary to me. Even if you had wanted to stop his character, there are other ways to go about it then to take their place in what they were going to do, I suppose? I think that's how I feel. Either way, good job.

Spoiler: miaulement

Good job here. Like Tale_Wind, I also enjoy your narrative and way of writing. It's fun and descriptive, sometimes. A bit too short, though. But most of the posts in this season have been really short. One thing that annoyed me was your character's way of speaking. I understand that it's more of an artistic choice, but the constant eclipses were extremely distracting to me. Remember, "..." they're meant...for a pause...which...means that...every time...you use one...the reader is more ... likely ... to pause ... as they read, making the overall sentence extremely choppy and slow.

Spoiler: Dr_Wigglz

Despite your flustered message to me, you ended up posting more than once and you did pretty darn good. I was happy with your decision to give yourself up. Your emotion leading up to the choice was good, though I wish there was a wee bit more detail. Other than length, I thought your posts were well written, for the most part. You've also shown improvement. Just remember to capitalize your 'I's.

Spoiler: flowergothic

To be honest, your posts didn't really stand out to me. Probably because you didn't really post anything? Even though you posted, it felt like you were just posting to post. You didn't interact or contribute to the discussion or the debate until the end, which was the purpose of the challenge. Also this;

This bothered me. The one who first mentioned surrendering was Edrina. :c So it would have been interesting if you said her name instead. ANYWAY. Good job. I'd like to see you be a bit more descriptive with your posts, though.

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Yep. ;c 'Kay. Now I'll be doing ... stuff. I'll try to finish this soon.​

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Updated.~

Also, sorry for earlier. I edited it. Everyone can have six lines total, but a line closes once there are four singers. MY BAD.​

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Signed you up for 7 and 43. :) Please choose the numbers to the duet and solo you want.

@Amethyst Heart; Welcome. c: And yes. That limit may change (I'll let everyone know) depending on how many people join. Signing you up now.~ ...And Andrew. *Was ninja'd twice*

Edit: Actually, you can have six parts. Only four will be put to a specific line. So four singers per line, but everyone individually can have six parts. ​

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http://kh-vids.net/showthread.php?126221-Under-the-Sea-KHV-Chorus&p=3725795#post3725795

You mean another day or two? Because it's been three days. ;c TBH, this is part of the reason I really hate role playing on KHV.

You and I should just RP in GoE ON OUR OWN. ...Am I being too impatient? /shotshotshot

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Spoiler: Code

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Spoiler: code

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...if you don't know what to post, all you have to do is follow them to the elevator, lol. that's all that needs to happen. It took a bit longer than expected for the first posts to be posted, so we decided to just dive into it. Seems like this'll be another slow RP on KHV. ; u ; ​

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Congratulations. <3
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Yes, indeed. We should. I'm going to be done modifying your picture today or tomorrow.

Mmkay, thanks guys. I'll be working on these today and/or tomorrow and will either finish them ... today or tomorrow, lolol.​

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=35cf-38VDtg

Heeeerrrrp.