I know that but i'd just shorten it to get the point through (i'm an honest 'hater' of Myspace)
ooc: Sweet... Shrene felt another attack rip thruogh his flesh and screamed inside his head in agony... "You mean to tell me, that you're the one who i was born out of?" Shrene was surprised by the answer and turned to see a person who looked much like his current form standing behind him... "Who... Who are you?" Shrene asked and the figure pointed at Shrene... "i am you, but to be more correct, the accumalation of you're blood that has royal vampire blood in it..." It explained. "but how?, i wasn't born a vampire" Shrene questioned, and gave a little yell as he felt another cut rip through him... "You're father was turned into a vampire by the royal's and who turned you into a vampire?" The other concios asked... Shrene nodded as he understood... 'so, i have the royal's blood in me huh? well let's try to use it against them!' he thought to himself...
ooc: really? i would add it anyway really...
nope, actually i sent it to him while i was reading chapter 12, but you incouraged me to actually post it here! (i was just going to pm him about it and leave it there but meh!) oh and i still reckon this is awesome!!! but what happened to Roxas?
Shrene didn't know what was happening as his body lurched itself at Seph, but Shrene noticed another concious hanging around his body... ooc: can i give Shrene an alternate personality thing? like Ichigo off of Bleach?
ooc: yeah unforunetly... wait do you like the myspace thing or the thing where i'm teasing people?
Heiro thought 'What the heck, it might work!' and started to slowly move his shattered wings...
It took Shrene awhile to force himself to speak. "got no clue, but... my fath...er tur... me... vampire... roya..." Shrene couldn't force out anymore, and felt himself launched at Seph... ooc: heh, wow, shrene's getting his butt kicked:D and lol, with the Sarah thing :D
ooc: no clue, though i don't think this died just yet, i just think everyone's busy with Christmas and stuff >_<
"well, this sucks..." Hiero exclaimed taking the fifth bottle of rum off of the crew.
"Hey Akiko, um, can you take care of Racheal for a bit?" Derek asked relieved...
OMG!!!! that ruled!!!!! damn... also are you still accepting custom characters? if you are i sent some ideas earlier, even if you don't like them tell me what you think, as of their the main characters of my book:D
Well, this world is when 'every' world joins together, meaning you can have any character from any Series/Game/Cartoon so long as they are not main characters (so as to avoid arguments). you can also have custom characters so long as their based on a Character from a vid game/Cartoon, so as to make it easier, every character must have a split-peronal, meaning that, well, let's say Cloud? he has Zach 'and' Sephiroth's consiosness's living in him and even though he regained control and figured out what memories were his and etc, you can make them come back somehow. now then basic rules and stuff like that and yeah... well, i'll just add my own rules anyway: 1. every character must have a split-personal with them. 2. every character must be from a previous existing Game/Anime/Book and such, or have been 'originally' based on someone from them. 3. the split-personal must do something in every post. 4. don't kill other users without permission! 5. a total of 1-5 characters. if you have moere than two then so long as at least to do something a post, ou don't need a split-personal. My Characters: Name: Heiro From/Based on: Bass from megaman battle network. Weapon: a single edged sword. Abilities: can block out sound waves and re-create them in an offensive way. Current Personality: Silent and hard to notice, but if you become his friend, he's quite nice but still very secretive. Current appearance: Well, he's human. he wears the same cape/scarf thingy bass does but the collar covers up half of his face, has Medium blonde hair. he wears brown, 'alot' of brown. Split-Personal: His innersoul (pm for more details on it) Name: Cian From/Based on: a combination of Cress/Chester from Tales of Phantasia Weapon: A Rapier and a Book... yes people a book Abilities: Can summon things and use mutiple elemantal attacks wit his sword Current Personality: Upbeat and basically the 'exact' opposite to heiro, but the same when it comes to friends. Current appearance: Like that of Roy from Fie emblem, but carries a book in a pouch and a pen + a rapier instead of a greatsword. Split-Personal: Clouse (a copy of cloud but a half-demon who once fused with Cian through a blood summoning, he's a good guy just so you know)
Read this please!!!!!! and tell me what you think! Hello people, i posted the beginning of my book before but nobody looked at it so i'm guessing it was boring (even i was bored when i was reading it, and i wrote it!) so i decided that i'd post my favourite bit and see what you think:D it goes through chapter 6-7 so you won't know what's going on but that's you're fault for not bothering to read the begginging! -------------------------- Chapter 6: the mysterious stranger. A few weeks after Eliss’s return (and Meagan’s tantrum) Alex, Zach and Meagan were called to the training grounds on the west of the village. Once they were all there Harry walked out from behind a tree with a young man wearing something was much similar to a cape that had a brim that covered up to half his face. Alex could only make out that he had bright blonde hair and piercing aqua blue eyes. “This man’s name is Heiro and he’ll be replacing me in the third test.†Harry said happily. “So to pass the third test all we need to do is beat him?†Alex said curiously. “That’s correct start when you please†Harry finished. Alex stared at Heiro, he wasn’t sure what to expect from him so he decided to attack first. He immediately enlarged his sword lunged at Heiro. It happened so quickly, Alex could see it happen. Some how Heiro had blocked Alex’s slash and sent his sword flying through the air without moving. A few seconds later Alex was dodging multiple waves of blue from Heiro’s direction as his cape moved in the slightest way. As Alex dodged the last wave, Zach threw his sword to him. Alex caught it and while Zach distracted him and Meagan threw small knives and daggers at him, enlarged his sword and stabbed for Heiro’s heart. Heiro jumped about twenty feet above the ground. Alex saw his sword’s sheath for a few seconds and then another blue wave came at him. He leaped behind a tree, hoping to avoid Heiro’s onslaught. Three started to fall as soon as it came in contact with the blue wave. Alex jumped out from behind the tree and saw that both Zach and Meagan had already been hit. He noticed it in the side of his eye, another blue wave was coming straight towards him. It was too late he couldn’t dodge it. As it came in contact with him, he heard the sound of a sword being drawn and felt his clothes rip and his skin separate as the wave crashed over him… Almost as soon as the wave hit Alex, a dark aura started to pressure down on everyone in the village. Once the dust cleared, Heiro saw that Alex was still standing, if only barely. But something was different. Alex had a dark aura surrounding him. As Heiro landed he saw that Alex’s skin was slowly going as the silver as the pale moon. When Alex raised his head Heiro saw that his eyes were going yellow, like a cat’s eye and his clothes and sword were going bright silver. As Heiro stood he saw that Alex’s hair was slowly growing longer and changing to a dark silver shade. ‘This is going to be a long night’ Heiro thought to himself. A few minutes later Alex stopped changing. Heiro immediately drew his sword, sending a blue shockwave at Alex but Alex charged straight through it slashing at Heiro with his own sword. Heiro numbly blocked it. Sparks flew from both the swords as the energies collided. Alex slashed his sword outwards knocking Heiro’s sword out of the way and punched Heiro in the gut. Heiro numbly dodged his next attack and kicked Alex’s hand sending Alex’s sword flying through the air. As Alex stumbled from the impact Heiro punched him in the gut the kicked him a few inches above the ground, punching him in the face knocking back into a tree. Alex jumped onto the tree and leaped without a weapon at Heiro. Heiro swung at Alex but to no avail, for Alex grabbed Heiro sword and pulled himself to Heiro with it, punching Heiro into a mountain on the way. Heiro got up almost immediately and charged at Alex. Alex grabbed Heiro’s hand and went to throw him, when Heiro brought him down and smashed his knee into Alex’s gut. Heiro grabbed his sword, sheathed and un-sheathed it so quickly it made a blue sound wave charging at Alex. Alex jumped out of the way, grabbed his own weapon and started to slash wildly at Heiro. Heiro blocked blow after blow, pushed Alex’s blade up and punched Alex. Alex barely noticed the hit and dropped his weapon, punching Heiro in multiple places. Heiro tried multiple times to escape but Alex’s barrage wasn’t letting up. Heiro managed to grab Alex’s fist and pulled Alex downwards him punching Alex in the face as he came down. Heiro immediately took the opportunity to leap onto the face of the nearby mountain. As Heiro got his sword ready, Alex charged at him. Heiro blocked Alex’s blow and as Alex’s fist bleeded, Heiro slowly grew more fearful of Alex. Alex had disregarded his own hand now and was hitting Heiro with his other hand and feet. Heiro felt every blow, each making him more fearful. Alex threw Heiro into the nearby lake, jumped in after him. Heiro had now gotten over his fear and was trying to stab Alex in any place possible. Alex ignored this and punched Heiro out of the pool. Heiro barely landed on his feet. Every part of his body was in pain but Alex was acting as if he hadn’t taken one blow. Heiro felt a strange darkness creeping over him… ------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 7: The Innersouls The dark aura over the village was growing heavier as Heiro changed. Heiro blonde hair and skin was going as black as the night. Black sparks were coming off of him as if he was on fire. His fingernails were slowly becoming claws. His eyes were going red. And he was crouching with his hands on the ground as if he was a dog. Alex slowly came out of the pool. When Alex and Heiro saw each other they charged at each other each with a look of hate in their eyes. Alex and Heiro traded blows, as they attacked each other each was creating their own orb of natural energy in his hand. They threw their energies at each other, creating an explosion of silver and black. As they landed they charged at each other only to be stopped by Harry who was in the middle of them both who created a shield that stopped Alex and Heiro in place. After a few hours both Heiro and Alex ran out of energy and Harry let them fall to the ground, knocked unconscious… ----------------------------------------------------- That was only the begginging of chapter 7 just so you know but the rest of it was what you'd call boring (it was the explanation of what happened to them so meh.)
"Why... couldn't ...i...?" Hiero questioned after making sure no one was around. "It's a stupid question... i've gotta get back to helping the men..." Hiero walked off to help some of the men. ooc: Hey Sora! why haven't you posted on the war for middle earth yet?
Hiero smiled back to her, turned around and walked off...
Shrene soon realised a problem with this form. he had no control whatsoever in battle. He seemed to take every attack that came his way, and he couldn't make himself block. He laughed an un-heard laugh as he remembered how dumb he thought the berserkers were for ignoring there injuries and here 'he' is doing the exact same. He felt i slight rush through his body, and could feel himself swinging his sword in a powerful arc.
ontopic: This is great!:D though i don't really think tha even if Namine went for a few years without a body, tha she'd change that much, though i'm not sure about Kairi, you don't learn much about her personality in number two, so... yeah who knows... other than that it was really great:D offtopic: To all those people who said he should make it into a book: Read something about law!!! If he realeased just the first page he'd be sued by both square enix and Disney!
"Akiko, come back aleady!" Cian yelled after her...
Shrene soon discovered that he couldn't control himself, but he could 'force' himself to do something through his emotions. Grabbing his lost sword he charged at Seph. ooc: i have 5 of them so i'm really stretched and my friends never shut up! that plus the fact i'm making 6 vid games at the same time, it's enough to send you mad! oh, and go to the creative corner, unique ideas to find the 1st chapter to the village of time! (and if you feel like commenting to it, comment there or pm me.)