Sweet... we get more chapters before this half of the story ends...
Cian looked back at him, trying to hide some of the sadness he had been building up back. I-It's okay... He told himself. They're friends, they have no need for experiments and wings...
Derk couldn't help but sigh, while Sleighn flicked through the channels. "This looks interesting, this looks good too, oooo what's this about?, that looks like fun!" And so on was what she'd announce with every new channel...
Derk followed happily.
"Okay, see you two down there!" Sleighn yelled back running down the stairs happily. "Thanks again..." Derk thanked again. "She... We haven't been this happy for a long time..."
He hugged her back, blushing lightly. "Now that's better!" Sleighn said, walking in from the other room, and laying down on the couch. "Now then, please tell me you have t.v.? i haven't watched t.v. for years!"
... not half bad... you could of written some of the sentences better but that's something for you to figure out... keep writing it...
Derk felt a small rush of emotion surge through him, and unsure of what it meant stayed in the embrace for a few more moments...
Derk also blushed but gave her a light kiss on the lips... ooc: ^^ i'm curently working on my books, so i might take awhile to reply...
ooc: oh that explains a few things... "If you don't i'll push you into eachother!" Sleaighn yelled from the other room. "Just to classify..." Derk started. "don't test her, she will..."
Chapter 2: the forbidden village. Alex ran for hours and hours on end only thinking of how unfair it was that he survived and nobody else did. He ran for days and days on end without stopping for rest until he collapsed from the lack of sleep. The next morning he woke up feeling horrible. He decided to continue through the forest until he came to a break in the trees, he saw a small village a few miles away and ran as hard as he could manage. A young boy stood near by the main entrance. He had only been recently assigned there and was not expecting anything interesting to happen so he was highly surprised when a half starved boy with a half torn hood and bright brown hair came charging through. Exhausted from hunger the boy collapsed a few meters past the gate. The young boy ran to his parents to help. They soon found the unconscious boy and took him to the village orphanage for nourishment. Alex awoke a week later in a warm bed. He got up and found that clean clothes were set out near his bed. After he got dressed he went outside. Once outside he found a young boy and his family at the door. The young boy explained his name was Erek and that he had been the one that found him and that he was hoping that Alex would come to his school. Alex reluctantly accepted and was heading to Erek’s school when they ran into an old man who was somehow familiar to Alex he asked who Alex was and explained that he had never seen him before. Erek explained that Alex was new to the village and that they were on there way to Erek’s school. The old man requested that if possible Alex could go to Erek’s school tomorrow and that Axel could accompany him instead. A few hours after, Alex was at the top of the mountain he saw when he entered and was surprised to find that there was a temple on top of it. Another hour later he found himself in the middle of the temple. There were a group of people surrounding him including the old man he had come with. One of the men spoke but Alex couldn’t make out the words. Another man responded and Alex was able to make out his name. A sudden flash and Alex saw this white circular shape flowing into him just inches away from his heart… He awoke a week later feeling light headed and weak. The events of last week were erased from his mind so he didn’t know why the elders wanted him to go to the lake. Once he was there three people came out of the shade. One was a young man with brown hair, bright blue jeans, a black shirt and leather jacket with a short sword slung around his shoulder. The second person was a young woman with light blonde hair, with pinkish colored jeans, a half jacket and a white shirt with a strange katana wrapped around her thighs. The third person was an old hooded man with a staff resting on his shoulder. They slowly surrounded him and seemed to expect him. The young man walked out and handed him an awkward looking sword with a curved handle a small button at the border and the guard and a peculiar set of nozzles which made up the guard. Other than that the blade was a single edged blade designed for single handed combat. They grouped together and discussed him. Soon the young woman stepped forward and un-sheathed her katana. “Block all my attacks using that sword and you’ll pass the first test†she tolled him. The next second she attacking him trying to find a way through Alex’s fighting pose. Alex blocked the first few attacks but soon lost balance and lost… ----------------------------------- O.O people were commmenting... i realy need to check this more... anyways i have over 42 pages worth (on microsoft office word) of this story and i'm currently working on chapter 8... thank you for commenting!!!!
"I'm new at this kind of thing..." He explained nervously... "Just hurry up and kiss already!" Sleigh n yelled at them from a small gap in the doorway. ooc: soz, i have no clue what happened it came up with database error and i'm still trying to figure out what went wrongO.O
Derk blushed lightly and scratched his head happily. "Wow... that was pretty sudden huh?" He asked shyly...
ooc: bye! Kate bit her lip. "I've only known you for a few minutes and i already hate you..." She threatened turning back to Dein. "How could you date such a b*tch?" "Uh, no offense but you kinda deserved that..." Dein told her...
Derk smiled shyly...
"I'm his damn sister, and i don't give a f*ck if you are his girlfriend i haven't seen him in 10 f*cking years and i am not just going to hand him over now that i've founf him!" She yelled back at her. Dein shrugged. "It didn't do permanent damage, though i don't think Jamei realised you are her brother..." Dein replied, attempting to ignore the girl's fight...
Heiro looked at Elizabeth. "What are we doing?"
ooc: it's cnofusingO.o "Uh... yeah..." Dein agreed...
"And who the hell would you be?!?!" Kate yelled at her, letting Dein go and walking towards her threatingly. ""who are you...?" Dein muttered under his breath, looking over at Enzeru and shrugging...
"But what are we doing?" Heiro asked looking at Jake now...
