It's okay if you are. But you shouldn't be. They are just made up characters. It's not how I really feel.
I don't think so. Ovan said. But at least Navo will be gone. Navo was distracted by the others and didn't see Suki coming.
Navo blocked the attacks. Suki, you have to kill me. It's the only way. Ovan said to her.
Henry put his arm around her and said "Remember, the doctor said he's doing fine."
"It's too late!" Navo said. "I have won!" He swung the knife at her and Ovan shouted SUKI MOVE!
"I shall, and than Ovan will be no more." he said, grabbing a darkness knife. SUKI NOOOOO!!!! Ovan shouted in her head.
You did it wrong. It's syllabals, not words. Here is a more Haikuish version I came up with of yours. A light from the moon A wolf sits on the mountain Sounds of a howl As you can see, I just changed it a little to give it the 5, 7, 5 syllabal count.
"Ovan isn't coming back." Navo said, floating to the ground.
Henry went in with her.
He smirked and dodged the attacks. "Time to die!" he said, sending the katana's down on them.
"Yeah, but I still feel bad." he said, hugging her.
Navo was sent in teh air and floated up there. "Remember, if you kill me, Ovan dies as well!" he said, laughing. He created a thousand katana's above them.
Navo put up a dark wall to defend against the arrows. He sent the katana's after them.
"I'm sorry about what happened to your brother." he said, looking her in the eye.
Navo laughed and surrounded them with darkness katana's. "You can't stop me!" he said. He pushed back Thantos and surrounded him in a dark bubble.
Navo dodged the ice with ease and ran at Suki. "Come! Come to your death!" he said.
Navo saw the ice and jumped over it. "So, you have come at last! Time to meet your fate and DIE!" he said, charging at her.
Navo made two katana's and started killing innocent townspeople, still laughing.
Navo re-entered the town and shouted "HEEEEEERE'S NAVO!" He laughed maniacally.
"I want to." he said. "It won't be fun without you."
