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  1. ThunderOfLarxene
    that was really good, will there be a chapter 4, :D
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  2. ThunderOfLarxene
    yeah, i watch mandachan on deviantart, and read those, there really good, apparently there is one more to go
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Kingdom Hearts News & Updates
  3. ThunderOfLarxene
    oooo please write chapter 7 soooooooon plz plz plz lol
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  4. ThunderOfLarxene
    omg that even mad me cry, you such a great writer
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  5. ThunderOfLarxene
    love it, glad u found it now because all chapter are up so i havent got to wait :D
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  6. ThunderOfLarxene
    ooooooooooooooo

    i really like it

    wanna read more ahhhhhhh

    well done
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  7. ThunderOfLarxene
    roxas of course, KH rules all mwahahaha
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: The Spam Zone
  8. ThunderOfLarxene
    please do another like that, that was classic, loved it
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  9. ThunderOfLarxene
    I LOVED IT, i cudnt stop giggling, makes my work look silly lol

    keep going this is great
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  10. ThunderOfLarxene
    thankyou, really glad you like it, ill post the next chapter 2morrow, got revision :( lol
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  11. ThunderOfLarxene
    Ill refer to larxenes kidnapped places as the basement,

    enjoy chapter 2

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    The group turned their attention to Marluxia who collapsed from exhaustion from running.

    "Whats wrong Marluxia" said axel

    Marluxia showed Axel the broken charm bracelet, Axel took the bracelet and placed it in his pocket.

    "Zexion.... can you sense her"

    "Yes but very faintly, she seems scared"

    The day to the beach suddenly turned into a hunt for number XII. They decided to spilt into 3 groups. Feeling that they would have more of a chance of finding larxene this way. Zexion and Demyx went south, Roxas and Xigbar went North and that left Marluxia and Axel to search the central part of the city where Marluxia orginally found the bracelet

    Zexion and Demyx didnt stay in the south for long, Zexion sensed Larxene in the central town, so headed there to find Axel and Marluxia

    Meanwhile, Roxas and Xigbar seemed to have gotten a bit lost

    "You said right" Screamed Roxas"

    "I meant your other right" Sulked Xigbar

    ...... :confused:

    "Youve been rather quiet Axel, we'll find her"

    "I know, i just cant help wondering whats happened"

    "Axel!!, Marluxia!!"

    Axel and Marluxia turned around to see demyx and zexion running up towards them.

    "Any luck in the south" said axel with false hope

    Both nobodies shook their heads. They soon explained that Zexion senses were correct and that she was around the area, but was unable to exactly pinpoint her location. Axel and Marluxia sighed and carried on searching.

    THE BASEMENT

    "Just one more second....", larxene managed to summon one of her kunai's and was slowly cutting through the rope around her. The group of hoodies took turns in guarding the door to the room Larxene was in. So she made sure she was careful in trying to escape.

    "How are you liking you stay" Smirked one of them

    "Shut-up, you'll regret this" she hissed

    "Oooo, and were supposed to be scared of a young girl with bad hair"

    *Explosion*

    A blast of lightning burst out of the door, knocking the two guards unconsious, a dark figure emerged from the smoke. Larxne was now riled up, with all kunais showing and anger in her eyes, she carried on down the hall. She wasnt thinking straight, she only had one thing on her mind, to find the leader. She came accross a door at the end of a hallway, she opened the door. She found the leader sitting calmy on his seat.

    "Grab her" silently said the leader

    The next thing she new, 4 men were holding her down,

    "Now, Now, escape is not an option, were not finished with you yet, my dear"

    Larxenes attempts to struggle free were in vain, as she was soon after placed in something that could simply be explained as a metal cage

    "I am no animal, let me go!!!!" Screamed Larxene

    "Now now be a good girl, and be quiet"

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    BACK TO CENTRAL TOWN

    "Hey axel.... whats that smoke" curiously asked demyx

    They all looked up to see smoke rising behind a block of flats. They all looked at each other "Thats gotta be her" they said in unison". They then raced in the direction of the smoke. When they arrived they were greated with a 20 story high run down office block. The smoke was belowing out the 18th floor windows. They looked for an entrance but could only find a back door fire escape. Zexion walked up to the door "we might need to find another way in bec...". He was stopped in his tracks by a blast of to chakrams bursting the doors open.

    Zexion turned around to see axel smirking and demyx and marlxuia giggling. After brushing himself off Zexion got up and the four of them carried on. They made it to the 18th floor to find two guys in hoods slumped on the floor.

    Axel ran up to one and picked him up "Where is she, wheres our friend"

    The guy smirked before passing out again. Axel had no time for games and trough the guy back onto the ground.

    They carried on to the 19th floor where they were greated by ten hoodies.

    "Come on boys, no need to fight, you little wimps could get hurt"

    "Oh really is that a challenge" questioned axel

    "Bring it on" replied one of the hoodies

    The four agreed that for this time only they would use thier powers. Their faces tuned serious. Marluxia summoned his scythe, sending bursts of rose petals at them, "Lets turn up the heat", axel summonded his chakram and without hesitation threw them at the group, knocking them down. "Ahh cant take the heat, dont worry i'll cool you down" Demyx summoned his sitar, the cheeky grin on his face turned to anger as he summoned huge pilars of water down onto the group.

    "Omg... who are you"

    "Your worst nightmare" replied the cloaked schemer "Now where is our friend"

    "Huh.. like we would tell you"

    Zexion summonded his book "Now then, where was that spell instant explosions". He calmly scrolled through his book looking for the spell

    "Ok Ok, shes on the top floor, with the rest of the group"

    Demyx then kindly helped them out the way by creating a tidal wave which took them to the bottom of the building. The group carried on upstairs till they reached the top floor. Axel wasted no time in bursting in the door, but was froze on the spot.

    There was the leader, holding larxene in front of them, with a gun pointed straight at her head

    "Well now, this is quite a party"

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    Thats the end of chapter 2

    Im going to use a poll so you can choose what should happen next

    Hoped you liked it
    Thread by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007, 3 replies, in forum: Archives
  12. ThunderOfLarxene
    ok thankyou :)
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  13. ThunderOfLarxene
    ok sorry about that, i didnt know

    Ill make sure its the the creativity corner for chapter 2, sorry about the mess up
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  14. ThunderOfLarxene
    Ok, this is my first story, but i hope you like it, and enjoy it
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    "Wake up Wake up"

    None of the organization members had heard such screaming so early in the morning. Not long after the outburst Axel, Larxene, Zexion, Roxas, Xigbar and Marluxia half heartedly waltzed into the kitchen, to find Demyx running around like a headless chicken. This beserk mode soon wore off when demyx was halted by the freeshooter pointing a sniper inches from Demyx's faces

    "You better have a good reason for this" grumbled xigbar

    "Of course i do, IT THE DAY FOR BEACH" screamed happily Demyx

    All the others looked at each other in the oh yeah i kind of forgot about that way, and each went back to their rooms to back their bags for the summer day out. Meanwhile demyx was on hyper mode gettin everything perfect. He enjoyed these days, espcially the chance to have fun in the sea.

    Half an hour passed and all members were finaly ready to leave. Demyx created a dark portal and all members passed through, for there day out

    "Remember no powers in the other world, we dont want to draw attention to ourselves"

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    AT THE BEACH

    Demyx was already in the ocean alongside zexion who finally put down his book, but wished he stayed because demyx was hardly peaceful, creating bigger tidal waves than the sea could. Xigbar and Roxas played volleyball while Axel, Larxene and Marluxia, sunbathed beside them.

    "Hey roxas" wispered Xigbar

    "Yeah"

    "Do you remember what happened to axels hair when it gets wet" A cheesy grin appeared on Xigbars faces the more he thought about it

    "Ah i get you"

    Both silently giggled to each other as Roxas filled up a little bucket for making sandcastles with water. All three had their eyes closed so failed to notice II and XIII creep up.

    *SPLOOOOOOSH*

    'OMG what the %$$^%$%^$^&, my hair, my hair, RRRROOOOXXXXAAAASSSSS'

    Roxas and Xigbar ran for there lives as Axel chased them along the beach, with not so spikey hair. Demyx had finaly calmed down allowing Zexion to float in the ocean in peace.

    "Urgh... im bored, im going to get an ice cream, do you want one Marluxia" said larxene

    "Er.. yeah go on then, thanyou, ill have a plain 99 with a flake"

    Larxene got up and strolled off to find the nearest Ice cream van, catching the attention of many young males, meanwhile axel had returned looking more than happy, being unable to catch the devious pair. Axel layed back down without a word, hoping the sun would dry his hair out and return it to some normality.

    AT THE ICE CREAM VAN

    "Yeah thats two 99's with flakes please"

    Larxene now with her's and Marluxia's Ice Cream's began to wander back to the beach, which was now at some distance since she got frustrated with the closer one and blew up the machine. She never minded boy's attention, didnt bother her, but today she felt uneasy, and it takes alot for the savage nymph to feel uneasy. She started to walk abit faster, hoping to get to the beach quicker, where she would feel safer. "One more corner to go" she thought to herself, "then i'll be back at the beach"

    As she walked along the street a group of hooded figures approached her, they were all young teenagers. She tried to carry on past, but was halted by the group, making escape difficult

    "Your coming with us" insisted one of the hoodies

    "Excuse me, you dont know who you messing with, now get out of my way"

    "GET HER" screamed the same hoody

    All the hoodies dragged her into the alley, out of site, leaving the two ice creams on the floor in a big mess. Her screams for the others were muffeled by the hand of one of the hoodies. The hoodies planned to use Larxene as a ransom for money. She was taken, well dragged, she didnt give in without a fight, to a low basement under one of the building, just outside the beach. She was left there tied up, while the others walked off to plan their scam

    "Where are you guys, i need your help" Larxene was now feeling scared, another emotion hardly seen by her. But there was nothing she could do for the time being, all she could do was wait.... and wait.

    BACK AT THE BEACH

    An hour and half had passed, and marluxia had started to actually wonder where is Ice Cream was, and where Larxene had gone to.

    "Whats a matter Marluxia" said xigbar, as they both bravely returned from running from axel. Axel gave a glare at roxas but then smiled, in a forgivng way.

    "Larxene left to get us two ice creams about an hour and a half ago but she hasnt returned"

    "Shes probably gone shopping" calmly replied axel

    "Maybe, but something doesnt feel right, im going to see if i can go and find her, i need to go for a walk anyways, because when Axel dozes off, HE SNORES"

    Axels faced blushed as xigbar and roxas giggled, Marluxia got up, put on his t-shirt and walked off in the direction larxene had. Marluxia was lookin for 15 minutes when he came accross two splattered ice creams on the floor. "Someone been a bit careless" He giggled to himself. But then he noticed something shiny next to them. He picked it up to see it was larxenes bracelet, snapped, it was her favourite bracelet, it had eight kunai charms on it. It was a present from axel

    "Something's not right here"

    Marluxia hurried back to the beach with the bracelet, to find that demyx and zexion where sunbathing alongside the others.

    "Axel, Axel" Marluxia screamed, as he sprinted towards the group

    Axel turned around and knew something was wrong


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    End of Chapter 1

    Will the other nobodies be able to find larxene in time, and why do these hoodies want to use her for ransom????
    Thread by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007, 5 replies, in forum: Archives
  15. ThunderOfLarxene
    I chose the last option on voting, even though i love demyx, i think that would be funny, since he got punched and nearly knocked out in chapter 2 lol
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  16. ThunderOfLarxene
    the organization rules and so does this story, omg chapter two was great

    and sorry to say it again, but chapter 2's not showing on ur page with all your stories, dont mean to sound moany, just letting you know

    Plus cant wait for chapter 3, that was so cool:D :D :D
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  17. ThunderOfLarxene
    lol love the bit where you say xigbars steroidful gun shot haha, that was witty

    i put marluxia. havnt played the game but watched others and people seem to last longer on marluxia, and luxord
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Kingdom Hearts HD II.5 ReMIX
  18. ThunderOfLarxene
    oooo i love them, but as a larxene mad person that i am, i chose thunder strike lol
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Arts & Graphics
  19. ThunderOfLarxene
    Yay, im so glad the one i really wanted got picked, cant wait for the next part, oooooooooooooooo the suspence

    Another great start to a great story :D
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  20. ThunderOfLarxene
    o yay, well im off to bed now *wonder's which story she'll awaken to*:D
    Post by: ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 12, 2007 in forum: Archives