that was really good yay
ooo cant wait for the next one, ooooooooo :D :D :D
i love really love a KH movie, but dont want to get my hopes up It would be a amazing, it would be good if it could involve the whole organization
o wow nether knew that... might have to try if when ive complete proud mode, but that might be a while because of stupid exams :(
demyx's one is really cute
i love final form and master form, both are really great to fight in
larxene is the best female:D hehe
i would say 1.larxene 2.Axel 3.Demyx
nobodies definently rule over heartless
hehe i got roxas
manda-chan is great but shes just writen a journal explaining this, apprently she didnt get asked permission, and has asked for it to be removed. http://mandachan.deviantart.com/<< her journal explains this
omg loved it loved it, this is so good, i get so into it, i ignore what my families saying around me lol :D :D :D *waits for next chapter*:D :D :D
Well since you lot voted for axels chakrams, thats what happened, enjoy -------------------------------------------------------------------- "LET HER GO" Axel screamed "Oh i see, in a hurry are we, we'll sorry to disappoint you, but the girl stays with us" Axel stared into larxenes green eyes, there was so much fear, what zexion had sensed on the beach earlier was right. Axel knew the savage nymph wasnt scared easily, so the siutation must be really frightening her. "Why do you need her, what has she ever done to you" "Since you asked so nicely......OH BOYS'S". The group leader called out for the rest of the group, but with no response "Oh i see, cant fight for your self so get your goonies to fight for you, well sorry to disappoint you, but we dealt with them ages ago" The leader grunted and looked around for a place to escape, there was a fire escape door at the end of the room so he started to advance towards it. Larxene in panic tried to struggle more, but still cudnt get free "Sorry but today there is no escaping from fire" Axel summoned his chakram "Axel go for it" encouraged Demyx "Yeah heres your chance" replied Marluxia "I...I cant... i might his larxene" Axel sighed in annoyance of what he couldnt do "Dont worry about me, ive survived worse" Axel looked up to see that larxene was able to shout out to him. She also winked at him which gave Axel a bit more reasurrance. Axel fired up his chakram and threw them in the direction of Larxene and the group leader. At a spilt second moment, Larxene was able to dodge the first chakram then dive under the second. The man was hit straight in the stomach knocking him towards the window" "Im not going alone" screamed the man He grapped larxenes legs, and both were flung out of the window at speed, over the balcony outside "LARXENE" they all screamed They all ran out onto the balcony to see her hanging from the balcony on the 15th floor. She was to scared and coudlnt think straight so was unable to summon a corridor of darkness "Dont worry i'll help" Confidently said marluxia He summoned some vines from the ground, which grabbed larxene and helped her up to the top floor with everybody else. When she landed on the balcony, she sighed relief that it was over. Axel walked up to her and gave her the bracelet back "Oh no, i love this bracelet to pieces, its special" Axel blushed "You really liked it, well done worry, we can get it fixed" "Today has been a long day for me i fee....@ Larxene fainted with exhaustion. The savage Nymph now rested peacefully in Axel's arms. "I think its time we go back now, todays been quite hetic, makes the castle seem normal" Mumbled Zexion Zexion created a corridor of darkness and all 5 nobodies passed through. Axel took Larxene up to her room and layed her down giving her a gentle kiss on the cheek "OOOOOOOOO" Axel turned around to see Demyx and Marluxia laughing. "I'll get you two, axel summoned his chakram and made haste after the duo, all three sprinted down the hall. Larxene slowly opened her eyes "Thankyou guys", she then drifted back off to sleep MEANWHILE IN THE TOWN "Thats it im never pairing up with you again, stupid tourist, stupid lost tourist" moaned Roxas _____________________________________________________ Well thats the end of chapter 3 and the end of my first story I hope you guys enjoyed it, ill maybe write another, another day but with exams in 10 weeks i guess ill be revsing :( lol
that is so sad, pooooor zexy, feel do sorry for him, i canjust imagine how xigbars feeling *Waits for next chapter hehehe*
oooooo i really loved that one, great job
another great chapter, that was so cool *waits for chapter 11 mwahahaha*
omg that was great *moves onto chapter 10*
yay, that was really nice, poor zexion, cant wait for chapter 5
:D Larxene of course :D
*jumps for joy* yay cant wait to read it, this story is so great
